FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42) - Page 32

Seriously! First time u wrote action! Well u nailed it. I can just imagine u sitting at ur computer thinking hmmm if I throw this punch from the right then it will land there n then this hand is free to ...
It was a fabulously written action scene - and Meera's reaction is understandable. She doesn't really know him except for the Junoon attraction ;)

Originally posted by: phulwa

I could imagine every expression on Lakhu's face clearly, I am missing Lakhu's junoon so much. Gr8 chapter Saba👏

Originally posted by: monalika

Action packed chapter! Loved it! Waiting to see the interaction between Meera and Prithvi... Warrior princess is furious and Prithvi is high on adrenaline. Waiting for the fireworks now :-)

Originally posted by: Hopeenlight

It's so hard for a woman to trust anyone now a days that I can completely see Meera's dilemma about trusting Prithvi, who is also a stranger and who could have other ulterior motives... How is one to know??   Good plot going there, Saba!  Excellent work with the Action scenes too.. I was picturing Aditya with all those moves that you described so powerfully!! Keep it up!! :)

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Seriously! First time u wrote action! Well u nailed it. I can just imagine u sitting at ur computer thinking hmmm if I throw this punch from the right then it will land there n then this hand is free to ...
It was a fabulously written action scene - and Meera's reaction is understandable. She doesn't really know him except for the Junoon attraction ;)

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Another awesome update! 👍🏼Loved it to bits. And the fighting sequence was good too. 👏

Lakhan(smiling even more vociferously):Relax, I couldn't stop thinking about you.

Prithvi :I told you you to stay away from me.

Lakhan(with a Cheshire cat grin  ): you know I am famous for disobeying.

Lakhan and his men kept walking towards Prithvi making Prithvi even more restless.

Prithvi: Stop right there ,  If any of you takes one more step , I wont be held responsible for breaking your bones.

Lakhu's back in action 😳 😳 Love you for bringing him 😃 

There is a reward of 1 crore on her and I am offering you 50% considering the fact that you were the one who found the girl.

let's  deliver her to them and you can get 50 lakhs without any effort.

Confident that Prithvi will never disagree to this , he moved further and extended his hand and said..

Lakhan(the grin widening ):Agree???

Meera is wanted 😲 It looks like Akash is the bad guy 😆 Update soon dear. I want to know how Meera is going to deal with her Prithvi and battle with her own emotions 😉

 

Edited by sabaSpeaks - 10 years ago

Saba you need a ⭐️ for writing such a masaledaar super chapter 👏 lubbed the action scenes, Laakhan 😳 & Mithvi 😉 😃Edited by SahanaG - 10 years ago

sorry for late comment
Chapter 13
awesome update
loved it very much
spell on both tht they din't even blink
lolz n miu's dhoti
thank god prithvi made on time
and who is on gate lakhu?

Chapter 14
so i guessed write
its our dear lakhu
lolz lakhu ko bhi kya mast dialogues diye hai love it


hehehehhee he is doing his own praising😆
and apna shoorveer prithvi to kuch kam nahi
wow!! seeti maru dialgues🥳
and fight scene toh ekdum shoorveer balshali ko perfect lagte hai👍🏼
but he hurt at elbow
but wht meera had done jo uspe 1 crore ka prize hai😲
and now miu had heard all convo and miu misunderstood him
will she notice his wound in her angry state?