Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart
A WOW to the writer!
The last line just touched my heart- it's not your "fault"!But sadly, the society doesn't think that way (most of them)!
brilliantly written! by using just the right amount of vocabulary and the finest details and descriptions you made this piece worth it!
That was a brilliant piece:):):)cant believe the girl's mother accused her own child:):):)but sad such people exist:(:(you emoted the girl really beautifully:):):)
Thank you, Avi! There's no excuse for her mother's initial reaction, and yet I couldn't help but think about the different meanings that can exist when those words are uttered by different people for the same situation. So based on my thoughts regarding her mother, I'm not quite sure what exactly would be needed, but if she does have a heart at all, then I think seeing the aftermaths of the events on her child will be more adept punishment than that slap. Like you, I'm glad that the little girl had someone with her. Not everyone does.Wonderfully written. The sweet innocence described wonderfully. The attack at the creek and the home deserved more than the stinging slap. Glad she had someone on her side.
Well done.
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