MY ANGEL updated pg 106 13/08/14 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: devildiva21

great update...
the scene where shree and liza were acting as arjun and sakahi was very funny...
omg riya in coma... :( he she gets okay soon...
samsha scenes were lovely... glad he told her everything...
wow arjun smiling and going to meet riya...
continue soon...

yes ria is in coma
and arjun will meet her
thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Nice. Precap is nice. Cntinve jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
amazing lovely part.
waiting for Ariya's meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Hey update soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
This is mahider naidu ETF Hyderabad: commando
son of rk naidu commisioner hyderabad
ria lives in their house only
mahider is flirtyguy but sharp in work
he loves riya a lot
his father rk naidu is freind of arjun's father. he is very responsible and work commited person
his mother shanthi organises social works and very calm and loving person
everyone in the house like riya a lot they feel her as their own daughter
everyone knew about ria her past in etf mumbai

Edited by sonycs001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
THIS IS MAHIDHER NAIDU AKA MAHI
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Awesome pic.
Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
poor riya she went to coma again😭 glad she is quite ok now
loved the way choree teased sasha... the play was so funny🤣
sasha convo was nice... poor sammy he missed his SR😲 poor him🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
arjun goes to hydrabad to meet riya😊 great
riya mein aa raha hoon😛 that's so sweet
loved the way arjun took riya's name everytime & then covered it quickly😳
precap is awesome
cont soon
Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
new entry
hehe jealousy track is on the way😉😆
eagerly waiting for next part😛
update soon!!!
Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5:
arjun comes to hyderabad

a person is their standing with his nameboard
person:hello arjun ji welcome to hyderabad
arjun:hello aap
person:naa peru mahidher meru naku telusu rathod garu cheparu(hello my name is mahidher ,mein apko jantha hoon ,rathod ji ne mujhe apki bare mein bathaya tha)
arjun was looking at him puzzled
mahidher:soory apko telugu nahi ata haina sorry mera
arjun:naku telugu telusu iam a polyglot naku india loni 7 languages vachu but i prefer hindi(mujhe telugu atha hain mein ek polyglot hoon mujhe india ki 7 languages atha hain but i prefer hindi)
mahidher:wow app toh prove kiya aap the great arjun rawte ho
im feeling great meeting you
arjun gave him a smile
mahider:ok mein gadi lekar aatha hoon
arjun and mahidher in car
mahidher:aap priya ki dost hain na vusne mujhe sab kuch bathaya ,aapki bare mein
arjun:lagtha hain ria ki yaha ka naam priya hain,kya ria apki ghar mein rehte hain
mahider:haan arjun ji woh hamari ghar mein rehte hain,mom dad ko bahoth pasandh hain ria
aur ria ka yaha naam priya hain yeh baath sirf hamari family janthe hain aur koi nahi
arjun:mujhe batha hain mahidher ji thanks for everything you done for riya
mahidher:arjun mujhe apse do bath kehna hain very important
arjun:kya hain
mahidher:no1:aap thanks math kahiye ria ko lekhar its my responsiblty as a freind
no 2:please call me mahi mahidher suits me well you no
arjun gave a smile and said ok
they reached the house
a lady in her early 40's came their and spoke to mahidher
santhi:mahi eyanena arjun garu sameer chepindi yeyana gurinchega(mahi kya yahi arjun hain jho sameer ne bola)
arjun:lagtha hain sammy ne mera introduction poore hyderabad ko diya tha
mahi:avunu amma eyane arjjun(haan maa yahi arjun hain) arjun yeh meri maa shanthi she works in social welfare society
arjun:hello aunty
shanthi:mahi tum vusko room mein leke jao mein dinner ke liye prepare karthi hoon
mahidher takes him to a room
mahi:arjun yahi apki room hain please try to rest
arjun:mahi riyu ka room kaha hain
mahi:apki kamare ki opposite wala kamara hain
arjun:ok
mahi leaves from their with in no time he rushed to ria's room
ria is lieing on bed lifeless ,her eyes are open
all her emotions can be seen in her eyes
her smile is no where can be seen playing on those lips and even her dimples are missing
the sight of ria is killing him inside but
the truth that ria is alive makes his heart dance
he went to her and held her hand as if he is holding a delicate or reatached broken dool
he saw her eyes their is some light in those eyes it was clearly showing happiness and some other feeling
he went near her to kiss her forehead and kissed it
a tear rolled from her eyes
he can see pain in those eyes
finally he spoke
arjun:riyu why did you take that decision ,you dint give me a chance to explain my feelings and you went away
silly girl how did you think that i will stay angry with my angel haan
you fought with death for me two times
dont worry from now i will fight with whatever come in your way
anything that comes before my riyu should pass from me
i will bring back my bubbly,chirpy,chatter box again dont woory riyu im always with you
he wanted to peck on her lips
but the eyes showed some pain
so he pecked her forehead and went from their
mahidhar father rk naidu Commisioner of hyderabad came and greeted arjun
the dinner went very silent
after dinner mahi went to his room and arjun went o ria's room to say her good night
after that he went to lawn
arjun mind filled with ria
his first meet when she attacked him
then the day when she preached him the women power
the day when he saw ria in lehanga and jewellery with hair floating
the expression she gave when he asked her to jump from the building
and the day when she gulped the bacteria
he called riya in a slow voice
then he felt someone holding his shoulder and looked at the person it was mahi's dad rk naidu
arjun:hello sir
RK:hi arjun your alone here
arjun:yha just feeling the cool breeze
rk:dont feel sad about ria but feel proud about her
arjun:i know sir im very proud of her but i cant see her in this state
rk:their are some people who we meet in our life they change our life but sometimes time plays with us that it takes them far away from us
but your lucky your girl is with you she just need some suuport and love to be normal
and dont call me sir please call me uncle
hearing the word your girl made arjun blush
arjun:uncle apko kaise patha ki mein aur riya
rk:mein samaj saktha hoon
jab bhi tum tv yha news paper mein atha tha ria ki ankhon mein ek chamak tha jho aaj mein tumhari ankhon mein dekh raha hoon
arjun:uncle lagtha hain apki life mein bhi koi hain jho aap[ko chodkar chali gai
rk:haan beta koi hain
mera senior, mera dost sabse badi mera jeevan data Suryakan rawte
listening the name tears rooled in botth arjun's and rk's eyes
arjun:papa apke sath
rk:haan beta ye lo tumhara papa aur mera photos
after 20 years he saw his dad's photos
he was only 2 when he lost his mother
from then till he reached 10 his father became both mother and father
he can see his proud dad in those photos
all the moments spent with him where refreshed it was as if he just played with his father
he could no more supress his sadness and hugged rk
rk patted his back and crassed his hair
rk:pata hain arjun apki dad mujhe bachate huye mar gayi
they talked about suryakant rawte and left the place
arjun before going to his room went to ria's room
arjun saw someone jumping out from ria's room window he went near their and he dint see anyone due to darkness
he went down to catch but he missed
the whole month went by
arjun took care of ria but he could see hesitation and pain in her eyes
he dosent know why she is behaving with him like that
but he thought the most important thing is ria's recovery
often he seems someone coming to her room but he was not able to catch him
after 1 month ria health is much improved
one night
arjun stayed in ria's room with thinking
but suddenly ria woke up shouting aamir
arjun could not belive his eyes as he saw ria sitting on the bed
arjun went near ria
arjun:ria ria kya huva tum aise chila ya kyu and who is this aamir tell me ria tell me
ria went unconcious again
all the family members came to ria's room
shanthi took ria in her arms
arjun called the doctor
dr:nothing i think she saw some bad dream thats why dont worry let her take rest
dr went from their
everyone went to their respective rooms
arjun:mujhe yaha ki etf mein join hoga iss amir ki bare mein batha lagane ki
aur woh kaun hain jo har raath iskikamre mein atha hain

precap:arjun in etf hyderabad

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