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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#821

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Naina ki haath main ek greeting card .. the same card which he gives to naina along with bouquet)😛

Daksh ; ye card??.(iss main kya clue mila hoga usse)😲😲

In her as usual CID Style

Naina; ye koi mamuli card nahi ...gaur se dekho isse ..ye wahi card hain jo hame uss khatarnak mujrim tak pahuchayega 😆😆..ye wahi card hain .jo...she stops looking at daksh who is looking at her with.????🤣

Naina; oh actually ..woh CID waalo ki tarah ..ok ok ab tu gussa mat hojaavo looking at his seriuos expression ..😡

Naina ; ye wahi card hain jo chintu ne mujh ko bheja uss din flowers ke saath ..

Daksh ; oh ..tho kaunsi clue ki baat kar rahithi??

Naina ; offo.. dekho ..(opens up card and says )..iss main usne kuch likha hain ..dyan se dekho

Daksh ; haan tho😲

Naina ; kya likha haiin is main

Daksh ; pondering over her question kya likha hain is main ..damn his hand writing ..😕

..if she recognises thats his ..oh god the assigment he hlped her on .,in her notes may be he had written a bit explaining something .hmm ab tak tho she didnt find...he need to divert her ..comes back with naina's words

Naina :Kaha khogaye ??

Daksh ; Handwriting???

Naina ; wow daksh . .that's amazing..bina kuch bataye tumne guess karliya ..tum tho genius ho yaar😆 ..pats on his shoulder ..and baks off sry woh excitement main

Daksh ; lekin naina ye psbl nahi hain har ek student ka?

Naina; poora clg thodina chk karna hain hame tho bas tumhara aur mera cls chk karna hain tum seniors ki dekho main aur nisha hamare cls ka..simple na

Daksh ; how exactly do u want me to do that ..go over each student and ask him to pls apna handwriting iske saath match karo ...and if u dont minfd kuch kahu??

Naina ; haan bolona

Daksh'; mujhe nahi lagta ye smart move hain ..

Naina ; kyu?😲😲

Daksh moves lil forwrd leaving naina back .; kyunki tumhare hisaab se tho chintu jaan bhoock kar tumh se nahi mil raha hain ..turns back and says right?

Naina nods her head

Daksh tho phir aisa bhi hoskata hain ki ye usne khud nahi likha ho kis aur ke saath likhavadiya hoga ??..

Naina holds on for a sec and says ;; god maine tho ye point socha hi nahi..mujhe laga usnewith lil disappinted😕 khud..likha hoga I mean usne itne..matlab ye clue waste gaya

Daksh feels bad..he actually meant every word in that card..he wanted to say naina is one of the sweetest girls he had met haan thoda paagal hain but ..

Kaha khogaye daksh says Naina

Daksh ; kuch nahi ..woh

Naina ; daksh ...woh main soch rahithi ki kya hum ek baar try nah kar sakthe sirf ek baar ..Daksh is baout to dismiss the idea ..

Naina ; pls pls sirf ek baar ...koshsi tho karskathe hain pls

How can he say no those plaeding eyes which could melt stones and anyways atleast iss bahane he will have card so that she cant guess handwriting

Daksh ; Ok ..will try ..naina smiles ,daksh says ; teek hain tho phir..card main rakh lreta hoon..naina stops him ..

Naina takes away card from his hand and says; ye main tumhe nahi desakthi ..ye gift hain

Daksh ' (Casually) oh cmon naina its just a card .aur woh bhi ek simple sa .ismain kya hain ..

Naina; nahi daksh .. mere liye ek gift ki importance uski costly ya cheap hone se nahi hota ...whats important is kisne kitne pyaar ke saath ye diya ..chintu ne mujhe ye card kyunki maine uski mom ki help kiya ..jab bhi ye card dekhti hoon I feel like chalo kuch tho acha kaam kiya maine ..it means a lot to me .tho main ye card nahi deksathi 😊 dnt mind pls

Daksh is totally dumb struck...he never thought his card would mean this spl to naina 😊😊..

naina ; offo daksh tum intelligent ki yahi problem hain pata nahi beech main kaha ghum hojaate ho😆 lekin tum tesnion mat lena ..maine iske xerox nikalvaaye ye lo

she gives him a copy..looks at her watch; oh god we are getting late isse pehle tum mujhe ghadi dikhakar kaho ki I am late by so & so seconds main bhaag jaati hooon.😆😆.shyam ko milte hain ..bye

Naina starts running away in her as usual toofani style daksh just keeps looking at her ...she stops for sec and looks back gives him a smile😛😛 waves her hand daksh without a sec thought just waves her back with his cute million dollar smile😃

contd;

PS; I am so sorry guys ..just had some writers block ..I will be regular from now on ..hope u will like update I am not sure if u guys are still interested or not do pls let me know..post your comments pls😉

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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sitakshi

@sitakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#822

Uske baad kya huva,arre lucky my heart beat is going faster and faster.

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: sitakshi
Uske baad kya huva,arre lucky my heart beat is going faster and faster.

will post by tomm ...😉😉 just wait and watch aap

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

#824

lucky ... jee nai bhara yar ... poora do bar pada aur phir jake poora series pada phir bhi ... sari raat tuje pata hai ... god miss them so much ... aage ka kab lagayegi sk ... lagana jaldi ... waiting here

ps : jahampana ... tussi gr8 ho👏👏👏 ... had to say this esp aftr recap rewind ... haaye mere dakshna ... le jadu ki jhappi ek 🤗

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LadyMystique

@LadyMystique

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

#825

I like like like like like like😃 it sooo much!!!! plsss write mooorrreee... and want longer parts too so that our blood pressure wont go up when u end each part with too much suspense!! 😛

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: sweetaish
lucky ... jee nai bhara yar ... poora do bar pada aur phir jake poora series pada phir bhi ... sari raat tuje pata hai ... god miss them so much ... aage ka kab lagayegi sk ... lagana jaldi ... waiting here

ps : jahampana ... tussi gr8 ho👏👏👏 ... had to say this esp aftr recap rewind ... haaye mere dakshna ... le jadu ki jhappi ek 🤗

tujhe bhi .🤗.le le dakshna hain itni magical ki😉😉

dnt worry sk aage ka part on its way😉

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: LadyMystique
I like like like like like like😃 it sooo much!!!! plsss write mooorrreee... and want longer parts too so that our blood pressure wont go up when u end each part with too much suspense!! 😛

lol mysti darlin ..jitna bhi long likhu u know i like cliff hangers na ..😆😆 dnt wry will post two parts today😉

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#828

Next part

evening 4.30

daksh lib main hain ..when his phone beeps ,daksh opens up msg.. its from naina

" Coffee day near college BY 5.00PM

IMP info (MC.)...

Naina

Looking at msg..

Daksh ;oh god not again y this naina is so obsessed with finding chintu..and what to say if she asks about the matching handwriting..he didnt even try😕kya karu yaar?? ab poochegi tho kya kahu??

thinks for while )😲hmm.kehdunga ki ..hmm jyada nahi karpaya and I am sure writing kisi se match naho hoga .

.(with lil guilt)

is that a lie??.and next min like he's justifying;

.no its not ..ab logically thinking uski handwriting, how come its gonna match with somebody else ..no way so hes saying the truth ..haan yahi teek hoga ..

ab jaavu ya na jaavu ?? ab madam ne bulaya tho jaan hi hoga na ..ab mission ka hissa jo hu ...agent 3 ..aur waise bhi ..

stops looking at other students in his lib section who are looking at him like he's some..😆😆

Student sitting in front of daksh ; R u ok??..😆😆

damn all this time he had been talking to himself obv logon ko ajeeb laga hoga,with diff kind of expressions he has been giving🤣..better I leave

Daksh ; ya ya I am fine

he rushes

dakshu darlin is out of lib😊

4.50

Coffe DAY

Daksh reached on his bike starts looking for naina ..

Sir, Daksh Sir ..turns back listening his name ..its riya ..

Daksh ; Hi riya

Riya; hello sir ..

Riya ; Aap ko bhi naina ne bulaya

Daksh : ..haan lekin woh hain kaha..

Riya : aati hogi ..

daksh ; actually main lib main tha aur ye madam (pauses)..chalo chod ..chalo bet te hain

both get seated ;

Daksh: tum kuch loge ?

Riya ; naina ki aane ki baad ..

Daksh ; ok ..

Riya ; Aap ko kuch lena ho tho

Daksh :naina ke aane ke baad

hmm till naina comes let him dig some info from riya..but how to start a convo..looks at her ..she smiles he also smiles (awkward)

Daksh ; hmm kaise chal raha hain clg

Riya ;fine sir ab college hain chal ta hi rahega

Daksh ;aur investigation tumhare MC ka 😉

Riya ; Woh (with so much excitement) bahut acha ...ek do din main uss chintu ki tho bajegi no doubts.😆

Daksh ; HOW HAPPY SHE SOUNDS.. MERI BAJEGI THO ISKA KYA??🤣🤣

Daksh ;acha! ..woh kaise??

AISE..!!..TAPK PADI NAINA..

Daksh within himself ; Lo aagayi lady jamesbond 007😆😆

Contd..

Nxt part

Spoiler ; Naina gets hold of another clue ..daksh decides to confess he's chintu😉😉..keep watching the space for more

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#829

Dono girls hug each other ..hi hello hogaya all get seated

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Riya; milgaya jikse liye gayi ..hogaya kaam??

Naina; Haan milgaya! bahut mehnet karna pada yaar

Riya ; dnt wry yaar ab woh chintu humse jayad din bach nahi payegga

Naina ; bachne dunga tab na ..😆😆

.Riya ; poor baby kitna stress le rahi hain .tera hardwork jaroor kaam aayegi

Daksh looking at this ladies drama ..😆

Daksh ;excuse me !koi mujhe batayega ki yaha kya ho raha hain and FYI sirf tum dono nahi ho yaha par ..

Naina ; sry sry ...waise tumhe kuch mila had writing ka

Daksh ; ;nahi mila .(lil chor nazar ). i mean ..kisi se match nahi ho raha tha

Naina ; mujhe riya ko bhi kuch mila nahi .(lil dull).lekin ab ...pehle kuch order kare?

order hogaya coffes on their way

Daksh ; tho aage ka kya plan hain?

Naina ; Tumne kuch socha?

Daksh ;mujhe lagta hain we hsould (sips his coffee) lookS at both of them ad says drop MC

Riya and Naina ; kYA??

Daksh; haan ab hamare paas koi clue tho nahi hain na

Naina ; kisne kaha nahi hain ( Winks at riya and looks at daksh and says..

haina!..ek aisa clue jisko dekh kar usse tumahre hosh udd jaayenge ..

Daksh ; phir se kya milgaya usko??

Riya ; jaldi bata kaunsa clue hain

Naina ; ye ..gives a paper to riya

Riya ; opens up her mouth saying ..OMG .chintu ka sketch??

Daksh about to sip his coffee puts cup down ; kya??

He hurriedly takes paPer from riya and sees the paper and says ; Lekin ye tho main nahi hu..

Naina and riya shocked!

PS ; Next part TOMM😊 ...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

#830

abey sk nai tu tho mega sk hai ... cliffhanger wo bhi aisa 😲 ... ab nxt part tak kaise rhu ,,, kal meetng me baithke main chintu chintu na bol du ab 😆😆 manna padega madmji ... sahi jaga roka *sigh* aage ka ab kab ayega ...

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