Can't believe how good it was ...not that I think you don't write well , you write very well indeed but was wondering how you'd pull off the setting with A and K . But I am totally convinced with the wild west background and they all seem to fit right in ..Kudos !
Loved how you established NK , Happy ,JP and HP and how their names came into being . All the Raizadas and Guptas are in place with their entourage ,just not in Delhi but in a foreign locale ...loving it .
And he wanted her to know him as Arnav ... Bring on the love story ...
Took me right back to some reading ...someone called " Sudden " , if I remember right ...a gunslinger , laconic , mysterious etc etc ...was totally hooked on the genre for a while ...
Will wait for the next and thnx for the pm.
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