new remix fanfic ....page 14part 11 - Page 5

part 4..

i m s ry frednz dis very very samll lekin dont wry iske baad ka part suer bada hoga
as u all wanted next part i m posting a very small one

dey go 2 some coffe cafe......der dey discuss abt demselves n their old days....dey aall ver real;ly xcited meeting after so mny years....it was unbelievable for dem.....it was now 3:00 am of the morning.....n it was raning outside9now dont ask me how did it ain...it is obvious becoz it is may end n at placs it does start raining in d end of may)...ranveer decided 2 drop tia....ashi wanted 2 go alone but finally accepted 2 go wth uv....

bth the couples leave...

now wat happens....ne idea...does ne1 wannna give suggestion most welcome...

i will b sun posting my nxt part....

l;uv ash

tahxn a lot remxier

luv ash

HEY PLZZZZZZZ call me kriti tht sound betta dont you think so 😆

oops remxier i eman kriti i enver knew ur name

lvu ash

hey ash short but awesome part 👏
plz do cont fast.

titli

hey ash sorry 4 late replying.neway these 2 parts r toooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud. 👏 cont soon with a huge part.

wow ash...it was soo chweet..i luved it so much..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..

hey frednz yeah iw ill sun post d next part and athxnf ros ur commenets

lvua sh

ash..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post soon..were are u?

okei part 5

it is raining heavily.....now der goes a scene bbetween tia n ranveer....
suddenly ranveer's car stops...ranveer chceks but der is osme problem in acr vic he cud not amke out jh eden calls a mechanic who wud take atleast half an hour 2 come...dey finally agres 2 stay der only in d car....
rain stops outside....dey get out for sometime
ranveer: tia aap kaisi ho...
tia: mein theek hu...tum kaise ho ranver
ranveer; hum bhi theek hai
ranveer: tia hume aapse ek baat poochni thi
tia: kaho ranveer
ranveer: kya aappko itne saal mein koi nahi mila....
tia gets liitlee shy
tia: woh ranveer..woh ranveer..actrually
ranveer: iska matlap koi nahi mila....
ranveer bends down n asks tia...
ranveer: tia kya aap hamesha ke liye hamari zindagi banogi...
tia becozmes more shy....she thnk little den bends her face liutlle down
tia: ha ranveer
deb dey share a very cute mom ent till dat mecahnic comes in between n breaks it....
mechanic: sab kya apne bulaya tha...
bth gets little depress
ranveer: ha....zaraa dekhna ar mein kya hua...
mechanic luks thru d car
meachni: wohg zaara engine mein problem hai
ranveer: kitna time lagega
mechanic; bas dus min
den mechanic leaves after his work gets oover...
den again tai n ranveer romance starst tia hugs ranveer.....n na jaane song in played in background.....n some flashback romantic scenes r shown.....

nxt scene nxt part...later on

hope u all will like it

luv ash