OS- Sandhya Ki Bicycle safari

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Sandhya was sitting with Maasa. Suddenly Maasa asked " Beendini tune Gaav ka sair kiya hai"
" Ji Nahi Maasa". Then Maasa remembered. " Kaise Kiya Hoga, Jab pichli baar aayi tho jaldi chali gayi. Lekin Iss bar jaroon dekhna. Ruk tu kuch na karengi. Main aakar Sooraj se bol dethi hoon"
 
Telling this Maasa pulled Sandhya along with her and went to Kuwar Nivas. Once reaching there she called " Are Sooraj". Sooraj came out and seeing Sandhya with Maasa his expression was like "( Ab Kya, Kal hi emily ke baare mein ek pareshani door ki thi. ab kaun si nayi noubath hai jo subah, subah Maasa ise leke yahan aayi hai")
 
" Are tujse sab kuch kahna padtha hai kya. Tujhe kabhi nahi laga ki theri beendini ko gaav dikhana hai "
Now Bhabasa and Dadasa also came out. Bhabasa was like " Maasa teek hi tho kah rahi hain, ja beta beendini ko Gaav dikhake aa"
 
Sooraj knew there was no other option so he went towards Sandhya " Chaliye Sandhyaji mein aapko Gaav dikhata hoon" ." Teek hai Sooraji " Sandhya replied.
 
As they were just about to leave Dadasa told . " Are beta paidal javunge, cycle leke jaa"
 
Now Sooraj and Sandhya were blushing and were looking at each other. " Cycle ki jaroorat nahi hain dadasa, paidal teek rahenga" told Sooraj
 
" Kyon tu tere beendini ke saath jaa raha hain, aise sharma raha hain jaise naya dulha ho" thundered Maasa. Sandhya looked away and smiled.
 
Sooraj  went near the cycle, slowly took it and sat on it and looked at Sandhya.Sandhya went and with some hesitation got in front of the cycle.
 
Soon they were on the way. Sandhya was literally sitting in front of laughing. " Aapne cycle kyun nahi liya Soorajji, kham kham maasa ki ghali suneni padi naa"
 
Sooraj looked at her. He saw her happily enjoying the ride. He placed his hands over hers. She turned back and gave one of her naughty smiles. Then she noticed. Her hair was disturbing Sooraj when the wind was blowing. She tried to take her hands from his grip. But Sooraj was being naughty and not allowing
 
" Soorajji wo mere bal,mein zara teek karun, varna aapko thakleef hogi" . He smiled and freed one of her hands. Sandhya softly took her hair and put it in front. Then she looked back and gave Sooraj a shy smile and blushed. Sooraj also smiled as he gently put his hands on her and leaned against her. It was as though their hearts were singing
 
" Hawa ke Saath Saath, ghata ke Sang Sang, oh saati chal
 
Cycle ki safari dekar this what came into my mind. Comments are welcome.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think this may happen
because without forcing Surya bicycle ride
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice shruthi
as always surya  need a push 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one shruthi😳 I liked it. It is same like the serial.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks all. It is because of your encouraging comments  I am writing more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice Shruthi! πŸ‘πŸΌ This is exactly what Surya behave like πŸ˜† Do write more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS Shruthi.  Keep writing more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice OS!😎 It made me feel like the scene was actually from DABH!πŸ‘πŸΌ Well Done!πŸ₯³Keep writing more OS!⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nyc dear keep writing