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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update diii...
haila ye ram babu ne kya kr diya 😲😲😲
ha ha ha ha...jo bhi kiya bada mast kiya πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Ab hitler priya aane wali hai 😳😳😳
waiting for mahabharat πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
continue soon dii !!!!!!
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Originally posted by: Mini1991

awesome update diii...
haila ye ram babu ne kya kr diya 😲😲😲
ha ha ha ha...jo bhi kiya bada mast kiya πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Ab hitler priya aane wali hai 😳😳😳
waiting for mahabharat πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
continue soon dii !!!!!!

tumko bhi laga na Ram ne jo kiya mast kiya
lekin Priya is not hitler in this SSπŸ˜•.
she is in trouble so no mahabharat
thanks dear for commentsπŸ˜ƒ
 
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn


tumko bhi laga na Ram ne jo kiya mast kiya
lekin Priya is not hitler in this SSπŸ˜•.
she is in trouble so no mahabharat
thanks dear for commentsπŸ˜ƒ


Are bhai mere manne se kya hoga...
ki ram babu ne jo kiya mast kiya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Are priya ji ko kya hua πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
ab aap bhi mast uodate jaldi se de diziye πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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This part I am dedicated to viny and sangs and everybody who comment on last part. thanks allπŸ˜ƒ

Part 6

In the morning

6'oclock,

She very lazily opens her eyes. She looks around and suddenly she realizes that she's in a new place. She also realizes that she is nude.  She covered herself with the duvet tightly. She tries to remember how she came here. But she only remembers "It's raining heavily and somebody asks her for lift and she said no".

 

Tension grew in her mind. Her full body is shivering in fear. She doesn't know what to do. She search for her clothes and looks everywhere but could not find her clothes. She goes to washroom, splash water on her face and started crying.

 

After some time she came out from the washroom and wanders in the room insanely.

With little guts she opens the door and peep outside. There is silence all over. She again closes the door and sits on the ground with the head rest on the door and started crying very loudly. Suddenly she feels dizzy, she close her eyes.

 

After some time she again gets up and properly covering herself and goes back to Bed.

She is sitting in the middle of the bed with the legs bend and head rested on the leg.

She has no option left than to wait. She doesn't found any other clothes to change.

All time she is praying a lady will come and said whatever happens.

 

Around 8'oclock,

It's Sunday

Ram opens his eyes and goes to washroom for freshen up. He came back and stands near the window and taking the fresh air when he suddenly realizes that the girl is sleeping next to his room. Tension grew in his face.

Whatever he did yesterday under what circumstance is wrong and he knows that he has to face the consequences.

Ram looks for his new clothes and takes his one new kurtha pyjama. He walks slowly to her room and knocks the door. She from inside gets scared and covers herself very tightly.

Both are scared. Ram is already sweated.

 

Ram opens the door and peep inside. He enters and stands in front of her.

She at one point believed that her life comes to a halt. She is numbed and shocked.

She doesn't believe in her eyes. Her eyes get moisten. She is trying to speak but words are not coming from her mouth. Again she feels dizzy but she manage.

 

Ram saw this and tries to soothe her.

Ram:- dekhiye aap jaise samaj rahi hai,eisa kuch nahi hua. Mein aapko samjata hoon kya hua. Actually''

 

She put her head rest on her leg and screaming very loudly. She is shouting only one word. NO'.NO and said him to go from their otherwise she will kill herself.

 

Ram trying to stops her but she is not ready to listen. She cried for some time and Ram just standing their putting his one hand on his forehead. He doesn't know how to calm her down.

Ram steps little near to her when she shifts and warned him not to come near to her. Ram is pissed off her behavior.

Ram suddenly sits near to her and pus his both hand on her shoulder and told her to stop crying. She tries to get away from his hold, but, he holds her very tightly. Ram told her to look into his eyes. She stopped crying but she is really very scared.

 

She:- chodiye muje'.

Ram:- No'. pehle aap meri baat suniye.

She:- muje appse koi baat nahi karni'''.

Ram:- sunna padega '''''and press her very tightly which hurts her badly''''.Aap ek aurat hai,ek baar mehsoos karo apne aapko''.aur socho kya aap ke saat sach mein eisa  kuch hua hai ya nahi''..mein jaanta hoon meine jo hi kiya galat kiya. Lekin mein aapko eisi haalat mein chod bhi nahi sakta tha'aap behosh ho gayi thi'aur beegne ke kaaran aap buri tarah se kaap rahi thi. Mein yahan akela rehta hoon''muje yeh karna pada'..

 

She is listening very silently.

Ram continued'.

Lekin meine aapke saat kuch bhi nahi kiya na dekha. Muje pata hai mujpar vishwas karna bahut katin hai lekin mein sach keh raha hoon mein aapke kapde utharthe waqt aapko nahi dekha aur naa hi aapke saat kuch galat kiya. Trust me'.

 

Ram leaves her and put his head down.

She-(very confusedly and slowly):- mere kapde'

Ram:- woh''actually nikaalte waqt thodi problem ho rahi thi''toh'..toh mere haat se woh fadh gayi'.but please kuch galat matt sochiye'.meine kuch nahi dekha.

 

She wanted to believe him but, present condition is not allowing her to believe him. But, she keeps silent.

Ram:- (handover his clothes) Yeh kapde'..aap change kar lijiye'..mein aapka neeche intezaar karta hoon.

                               Thodi badi hai '.abhi ke liye aap yeh pehen lijiye mein baad mein aapke liye laa dunga.

 

Ram left and she takes the dress as she has no other option. Ram came out and wipes his sweat.

She falls on the ground and cried loudly. She takes bath and rubbing all over her body insanely.

Ram is waiting for her when she came out wearing his outfit. Outfit is loose. Ram looked at her and smiles (funnily) at once. She saw and uncomfortably covering herself properly. Ram said sorry for his act.

 

After having breakfast, Ram left for shopping for her.

 

Ram used to stay alone at home and most of the time he is in the company. Gopal kaka(servant) used to work in the morning only and after that he left, so she is alone at home.

 

Ram is feeling very awkward; but with the help of sales girl and the description given he selected two dresses for her.

Here in haveli,

She is open one bedroom which is adjacent to her room (Ram bedroom) and enters. She saw the room is neatly cleaned and all things in the perfect place. She takes one book from the shelf and turning pages when Ram enters in his room. He stands very near to her; she didn't notice. She turns and gets scared and faint and fall when Ram hold her and she fall directly on his chest. Book also falls from her hand. She becomes conscious and said sorry and put back the book on the shelf and turn to go when Ram called him, he gave dress to her. She takes said thank u and left from there.

 

Ram is taking rest in his room. His head is paining because of yesterday's rain.

Here she changes into a new dress and ready to go. She waited outside for some time for Ram to come.

After some time, she knocks the door but there was no response; then slowly she opens the door and peep inside. She saw Ram is taking res t, she goes near to her and call him but Ram in deep sleep. She touches his hand and found that Ram is running with fever.

 

She wanted to go but, she doesn't want to leave him like this. She removed his boots then socks and places it properly on the bed. She covers him with a blanket. She went to the kitchen and prepared khada for him.

She called and gave khada to him when Ram said that he will manage and don't need anybody's help. In reply she said "me too"

Ram:- mein kuch samja nahi????

She:- even I can manage. Kal jo aapne kiya uski koi zaroorat nahi thi.

 

Ram smiles and keep silent. He takes khada in one sip making faces.

Ram:- khada kafi yucky tha.

Priya:- khada''.khada and she feels dizzy????

Ram:- r u OK????

Priya nods her head and said she is ok.

She left and Ram taking rest.

 

In the afternoon,               

She told Ram that she wanted to go back. Ram told her that he will drop her home.

She said that she is staying in women's hostel and she will manage for which Ram said he is feeling well and he will drop her.

She said thank u to him and Ram once again said sorry to her. He drops her to the hostel, both said goodbye and left.

 

Next day,

Ram told Gopal kaka to clean the room.

Gopal kaka kamra saaf karne chale jate hai,tabhi unhe uss ladki ki payal dhikta hai.

Gopal kaka payal Ram ko dete hai aur kehte hai ki yeh unhe bed par pada hua mila.

 

Ram takes the payal and put it into his pocket.

In the office,

Ram in his cabin. He takes out the payal and keeps looking at it and remembers the moments. After some time he put it back and tries to concentrate in his work but he is distracted with the thought of the girl. He thinks it's because of this payal he is not concentrating in his work. He decided that he will return it to her and depart straightly to her hostel.

 

In the hostel,

Ram enquired about the girl to the warden.

Warden:- naam?????

Now, Ram realizes that he never ask the girl her name. He tries to explain about her, but warden didn't recognize.

Ram:- madam shayad aapko yaad honga woh parso raat aapke hostel mein nahi thi. Hostel mein entry hoti hai na kon kitne baje aata hai jata hai. please aap check karke dekhiye.

 

Warden checks the register and shows it to Ram.

Warden:- yeh dekhiye parso raat yahan sabhi present the. We are not allowed any girl to go out after 7. Aur jis type ka aap description de rahe hai,eisi koi ladki hamare hostel mein nahi rehti.

 

Ram thinks how it can be possible. Meine khud uuse yahan choda tha. shayad security ko pata honga.woh uss din wahi gate par khada tha.

He goes near security along with warden.

Ram:- meine kal ek ladki ko yahan choda tha,afternoon 2 baje yaad hai

Security:- haan saab meine dekha tha.

Ram to warden:- dekha meine kaha tha na. mein jhoot nahi keh raha

Ram to security:- achha aap bata sakte hai woh kahan gayi

Security:- saab woh chali gayi

Ram:- chali gayi??? Chali gayi ka matlab???woh iss hostel mein nahi rehti???

Securtiy:- nahi saab. Woh iss hostel mein nahi rehti. Meine unhe pehli baar dekha tha.

Woh thodi der yahi ruki rahi,aur aapke chale jaane ke baad woh chali gayi.

 

Ram in shock:- aapne unse poocha nahi ki kahan jaa rahi hai.

Security:- poocha tha lekin unnhone koi jawab nahi diya.

Ram:- aapne dekha kiss taraf gayi

 

Security shows him the way. Ram said sorry to the warden and left.

Ram still in shock and don't understand why she lied to him.

Whole night he is thinking about her. He becomes very impatient. Now, he has strong feeling that she is in danger and needs his help. He take out that payal and put it back safely into the cupboard.

He decided that he will find the truth.

 

(By next update you will know who the girl is and why priya wanted divorce from Ram)

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update diii...
chalo bhai koi mahabharat nhi hui πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
priya ki payal ka kya solid asar hai
ki ram babu kam hi nhi kr pa rhe 😳😳
ye priya kha gyi πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
ab raya kaise milenge???

Last update mai sbse last conment kri aur es update mai sbse first...yayyy
continue soon diii !!!!!!Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Nice update diii...
chalo bhai koi mahabharat nhi hui πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
priya ki payal ka kya solid asar hai
ki ram babu kam hi nhi kr pa rhe 😳😳
ye priya kha gyi πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
ab raya kaise milenge???

Last update mai sbse last conment kri aur es update mai sbse first...yayyy
continue soon diii !!!!!!

milenge ji milne wale mil hi jate hai.
Mahabharat issliye nahi hua kyunki ladki jiss halat mein thi woh kuch nahi kar sakti thi.
tumhe kisne bataya ladki Priya haiπŸ˜›
thanks for commentsπŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for dedicating to me
awesome updt dear πŸ˜›
mazaa agaya πŸ˜›
priya kitni baar faint hojathi πŸ˜•
ram ji kitna samalra priya ko πŸ˜‰
waiting for next updt 😊
cont soon πŸ˜›
thanks for pm 😊
Edited by sangeethagupta - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn


milenge ji milne wale mil hi jate hai.
Mahabharat issliye nahi hua kyunki ladki jiss halat mein thi woh kuch nahi kar sakti thi.
tumhe kisne bataya ladki Priya haiπŸ˜›
thanks for commentsπŸ€—

Milne wali mile jaayenge to mila diziye na...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Mujhe kisne btaya gd question πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
ha ha ha ha...
kisi ladki ki payal ka asar agr ram babu pr ho rha hai na to smjh jaao wo priya ji hai πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ isha to ho nhi skti na 😑😑😑

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the update was interesting and nice loved it waiting for next part continue soon
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ye kya hai ..kuch nahi kiya kuch nahi hua kitna🀣 awkward si situation mein phasa diya ram n ladki  ko..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
How did she get courage to face ram😳? I was laughing throughout the scene. Actually i have to be feeling bad for ladki, i know what is she going thru..
Mera question wo baar baar dizzy kyon feel kar rahi thi??
Isn't ram getting slightest doubt on her even after knowing she isn't stay in that Hostel and lied to him. Accha move hai , instead he is thinking she is in trouble surprised..
Payal will help him find  the mystery girl...accha move hai ..
loved it.. mujhe SACH MEIN BAHUT HASI AAYI RAM  KA CONVERSATION-MEINE KUCH NAHI KIYA KUCH NAHI DEKHA AAP EK LADKI HO NA KHUD MEHSOOS KAR SAKTI HO..
GREAT WRITING well described the awkwardness between the two.
YE ladjki Priya nahi thi,Toh WOH KAUN THI?? 

thx for the PM.

Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago