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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited!

@Tanvi, Liya, Deeps, Shweta, Maria, Saba, Amrita, Jas and Vishu: Edit ASAP!! :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
PREETHA!!!!!!!!!!!
I actually have tears in my eyes!😭
You are such a brilliant writer!!
OMG!!!
i have no words!!
everything was described to beautifully!
Jeevika knew and she didnt tell anyone!
and Viren he is Heart broken!!!
 
THIS OS IS JUST AMAZING!!!
 
WRITE MORE LIKE THIS! (Happier though 😛)
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kryanvirika05

PREETHA!!!!!!!!!!!

I actually have tears in my eyes!😭
You are such a brilliant writer!!
OMG!!!
i have no words!!
everything was described to beautifully!
Jeevika knew and she didnt tell anyone!
and Viren he is Heart broken!!!
 
THIS OS IS JUST AMAZING!!!
 
WRITE MORE LIKE THIS! (Happier though 😛)
 
 


Thanks re. 🤗 I am sorry for making you cry. Smile:) haha! I will try to write more provided that I have time and I have many likes for this. 😆 Thank you once again! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Preetz it was mindblowing,awesome,brilliant.
Im just sleechless after reading dis os.
I literally had tears in my eyes while reading dis😭
Such beautifully written n emoted.
Frm viren wishing jeevika😳to partyyy n till end it was just suprbly written.
Ohhh jeevika knew bt dint tld😒
Viren was left hearbroken after knowing d truth so beautifully written😭
Nnn d last whn jeevika left in viren arms😭

Luvd it to d core ❤️

Do write moreee in future also Me😆Edited by Virika-luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear i loved it sooo much👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
THAT WAS EMOTIONAL AND HEART WRENCHING STORY. FABULOUS WORK
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww
it was kind off a sad one
viren n jeevika romance at the sTART
n viren suffering after jeevika's deatth 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for the late comment!
Got to say Preetha, this was beyong beautiful ❤️ 
Everything about this just gave me goosebumps and now this is saved on my phone!
It was the touchiest story I have read, and literally send shivers down my spine...
The way you handled the concept and the story twisting it
just hats off to you
👏 👏 👏
This was very very beautiful and everything was written perfectly!
The way you described our beautiful couple really just made me imagine and picture everything!
I wish you would write more because you are a flawless writer and wayyy better than me!!!
Thanks and sorry ❤️ 
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
so sad jeevs is dead leaving a broken heart viren
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Posted: 11 years ago
absolutely beautiful had me in tears