Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
🤣 Yeh sab tu hi likh sakti hain!! 😆
You know, the way you narrated it, felt like you were actually saying it to me! I could actually imagine you sitting here and saying it all in your own voice and your informal language! 😆Now to Asad's Zindagi... What has happened to her actually? From where did she start bleeding?And damn! How did he know who it was that took her to the Gudiya Factory? Through the phone? As in, while receiving her call, did he hear voices in his phone, making him realise who it was? And where is Tanveer?Arre yaar!! Itne saare questions hain yahaan! BUT... this was ah-maz-ing!!!! Just like my Zaki says!! Very well written, and that is why you were not replying to me hain na?Mallika-e-Ankita!!Well, idhar udhar ki baatein, vagaiyra vagaiyra.. Loved it! Now CONTINUE!!!!![You Know My Name!]😎
Originally posted by: malini1996
loved it
plz
plz
plz continue soon
i am begging u...and as said u r a cliffhanger ...hate u for that
and love u for the awesome story...
and plz plz add me to ur pm list...
Originally posted by: chicksoup
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unres.Reserved before I read it!😆 Wanted to be on Page 1!I get the feeling right! 😎 we are on the first page commentators know 🤣Beautifuuulll!👏 BAS if you see sarcasm here, I'll throw noodles at you!😈I want some! Like NAOOOWW! 😆I can't think of any one being offended by this sweet SS of yours..😉 Haaye, seriously you are good at this.But I think that disclaimer was aimed at poor old me!😭😆Noodles you are too much 🥱 Its just that sometimes people get offended by language structure and the vernacular used. Thats why i dont want to hurt anyone, hence the disclaimer 😳 Biggest of all i dont want anyone to be offended by the disclaimer 🤣Ha! I can one answer one Q:Kaun hai jisne Zoya ko Zindaa jalaane ki saazish ki?ANKIE & Co!🤣(She has been planning this for a long time, I swear!😆)Please spare me this one time...Didn't get to pull your leg for a long time.😳How will you pull?! for that you have to be less busy and also spend a few mix with this deariee little one Ohh gooddyy damming YES it is MEE! 🤣 Asad Miyaa will kill me i know! Haiyee mujhe toh unke haath se yea murder bhi qubool hai 🤣Everything about it was beautiful. The scene at the kaarkhana, Ayan's response to his bhaijaan gone numb, Asad's painful fb of the events of the morning, the guilt that keeps resurfacing...Beautifully conceived and written story!👏Noodley, i hope it was okay. i dont know, cause this is not what i write generally. Dont know how it might turn out to be! Dont keep much of an expectations thats all to say 🤣
Originally posted by: Manpreet23
I really wished it would not end :( sighh, second part fast okayyy :P
And your writing, Awesome, as usual :D
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