jaj os : the spirit of the miklam palace(pg27pt14)

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

wow sumi ben it is an awesome update well done 👏

really enjoyed reading

plz continue soon cant wait for the next update 😊

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XScarletHeartX

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

awesome update

waiting for next update

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

(hope u enjoy reading n pls pls comment if u don t comment i will

stop this os seriously)😭😭

part 6 : the hunting starts !!!!!

juju was angry on jeannie but he dint said anything to her n he went to sleep in his tent

n jeannie was in her bottle

jeannie : yeh sab kaun kar sakta hai ?(who can do all this things ?)

n she fell asleep

n then at 12:00 midnight it was friday the 13th a new moon day

then a v scary ghost appeared there !!!!

n it hovered around sandy (who was a part of the camping trip) n it sucked out the blood from

her neck n lo ! she was lying lifeless there n suddenly her body vanished

when everyone woke up the next morning n they were searching sandy (who was dead)

juju : where is sandy ?

priya : yeah where is she ? she was here only yesterday

boss came there

then

vicky : sir sandy is missing

boss : what ? she came wid us on ur responsibility ? how can u be so careless

i don t know u must find her

vicky : but sir...

boss goes from there in anger

n then a shadow is seen behind juju

precap : part 7 : little moments of fun

part 7

Edited by .nightqueen - 12 years ago

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Thank u n I will update part 7 soon

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Yes I changed it yesterday n till now u dint noticed it

😆

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saurabh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

ya,bcz yesterday i didnt cme online,thats why.

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saurabh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

ok,bye mitram feeling sleepy.and good ngt.

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Even me too inspite of being night queen 😆

Gud ni8

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

why v less members comment if u don t want tis os then pls say me i will stop it 😭😭😔

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Dr.Fear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

part 7 : little moments of fun

as juju felf that there is someone behind him he turns back but sees no one

juju : kya yahan par koi hai (is any one here ?)

but no reply n juju joins the group

vela : hum apne tym pass ke liye games khel sakte hai ( to pass the time we all can

play games )

jeannie : velu bahut achcha idea hai ( velu this is a very nice idea)

vela : hum looka chupi khelenge ( we can play hide n seek)

vicky : kya vela jaise batein kar raha hai (wat u r talking lyk vela)

vela : main vela hi hoon ( i am vela only )😆😆

jeannie : hum spin the bottle khel sakte hai ( we can play spin the bottle )

priya : nahi hum adventure ka game khelenge ( no we will play a adventurous game )

juju : wow babe kya brilliant idea hai ( wow babe wat a brilliant idea )

jeannie : kya juju aapko meri jara bhi chinta nahi hai ( wat juju u have no concern for me)

juju does not give any reply

jeannie : kya juju jab dekho aap us teekhi mirchi ke aage peeche ghumte rehte hain ( wat juju

u always roam around priya )

juju : pls jeannie abhi kuch mat bolo warna musibat aajayegi ( jeannie pls don t say anything

now it will be a problem then )

jeannie : teeke teeke ( ok ok )

priya : chalo ab hum yeh khel shru karte hain ( now lets start the game)

vicky : ok babe par hum jayenge kaha ? ( ok babe but where we will go ? )

jeannie : chalo teekhi mirchi tume mein africa mein bej do 😆 ( teekhi mirchi let me send u

to africa )

juju : tum toh kuch bolo hi mat ( better u don t interfere)

priya : yeh toh meri line hai ( hey tis is my line )

vela : lets go to the miklam palace which is 20 miles away from here

vicky : waah vela achcha idea hai ( wow vela this is a gud idea )

vela : main itna bhi gadha nahi hoon ( i am not this much stupid ) 😆😆

so jeannie , juju , priya , vela n all the other members start their next journey to miklam palace

part 8 : entry !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOTE : MITRAMS IF U DON T COMMENT THIS TIME I WILL SERIOUSLY STOP IT 😭

part 8

Edited by .nightqueen - 12 years ago

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