ARSHI FF: ~PAWN~(BFTW3)# 6 Ch14 Pg122 25/04 EXT - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
it was superbbb!!!!!!!!
 Shayam is such a sweetheart... I really loved him...
 It was really nice way u have showed Arnav her reality ... Though he was feeling her innocence but now he will trust her... he is regretting his actions now...would really love to read how he will behave with her now... 

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...
atlast arnav is repending for his deeds...
bt still i cant accept wat he had done to khushi...
and tat wome mrs.gupta...
i hate her to the core...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Kushi suffering a lot because of Arnav. 

Hope he will change his behaviour towards Kushi now.

Nice update and waiting to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
arnav realized his mistake..he was in so much madness that he cudn't even realize b4 that khushi is a virgin...ok so repentance times have come..or maybe only for sometime..now the prologue speaks of something else.. a pregnant khushi goes away frm RM wen she witnesses arnav's deeds with her mother..does that speak of a future MU due to which he will once again resume his affair with GG?? m really scared for this girl now..so right now we'll get a repentent arnav who will take care of khushi..but this is just the calm before the storm right? 

can't believe there are women such as anjali in our society as well as men like this arnav..pls appy we want the arnav of this ff to repent really badly, not like the one in ons2..there he repented as per his mistakes.. but this arnav is really like the devil incarnate..actually they shudnt be any redemption for this sort of crime..sleeping with the mother of one's wife, having affairs with othr women and then raping one's adolescent wife n misjudging her with no validity..i'm really eager to see how u will go forward with his character development..but i really want  to see him going thru a hell of a redemption
Edited by poojasidd123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww...amazg..work...🤗..
i really wantd arnav 2 knw..dat khushi was a virgin..😭
..i jst cant express...what im fellg now.😕...ur the best writr appy...di...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...Hoping that Arnav would treat her well from now on
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Posted: 11 years ago

Gosh!! it was soo painful... it was so hard hitting tht i cudnt even shed tears...i am someone who is close to reality n i ve known such cases.. but to read wat u ve written word by word shook me inside... mostly bcz i fear its true to sooo many women n i can do nothin abt it... oly d one who bears it can stand up for themselves... i want Khushi to...

 
wonderful chap Appy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congratulations on new thread..
The update was really good, you are a great writer!
thanks for the PM :)x
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Posted: 11 years ago
GOD... that's painful... 😭
this part makes me cry 😔
true women are helpless... poor khushi ...😔
zabardast update... 
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Posted: 11 years ago
wah ASR kamaal kar diya...ab khush ????😡

agar doctor certificate ki itni jaroorat thi tho shaadi ke pehle kyun nahi maanga 😡

atlast i see some sense in nani ... 👏

pls continue soon