OS: Stay - Madhu & Sultan Note Pg 10 Mar 30 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
love it...pls write more on mb-sultan-aryan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Its awesome dear plz add me to ur pm list & pm me when write another one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
So very well written please add me to your buddy list and pm me when u write the next one !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Excellent work Jaz.
Am a fan of both RishBala and Madhu Sultan.
Sultan's emotions were well potrayed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
hi jaaz... beautiful OS.  i love the way u described "cry" . keep writing... 😊  Edited by harshdb - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
WOW. 

... it was simply epic and deeply moving. I loved how your past and present concept flowed and ah, loved the whole thing to bits. 
this is a such a stunning piece of writing in all honestly .. adored the attention to detail that you paid attention to bringing out the thought process that Sultan held - the realizations, the empathy, adoration, care, the tinniest part of his heart wanting Madhu to stay - simply beautiful the way you put it. 
read it twice and i'm really looking forward to more .. So, will you really please continue ?! 
I just can't wait :D 
PS; I hope to wish she stays ;) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wow loved it plz pm when you have an update. Don't wanna miss a bit thank you sending buddy request plz accept 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
simply love it...eagerly waiting to devlop a friendship at first... let's see😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Jaz ... my dear ...  👏 👏 👏  👏 👏 👏 

Take a bow ... that was amazingly beautiful ... endearing and heart warming ... 

Fabulous take on "stay' by Rihanna !

It suits Sulbala to a T !

Would love to read more from you ...  plz PM if it's not too much of a bother !

PS ... Am Usha ! 😳 ... Gald I met you here !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
it was so beautiful!!!!!! amazingly written and the emotions were beautifully portrayed!!!! very well done!!!! loved it!! 👏