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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Thank u rami dear fr fulfiling my 1st chalenge
2nd pending lol
truly awesum vm
loved it
thank u re
haye ur science wow..
reasn fr red fire claps hehe
hws it means kaise lge questions!.
all d best dear
enjoy lol
love u
hugs n
tc..!!



nai di 2nd is up on same page
by the way thank u .
thnx to god too...
1st challenge completed

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: haruhi26

hmmm I'll let others do the grilling, for me a small challenge

write an OS of Arjun practising to propose to Riya, by practising with a tomato and Rathore sees him and hears his talk😉



Tina ur os is here

OS : Practice

ETF headquarters
It was 8 pm now , everyone was busy in their works ...
arjun was sitting down on his knees holding a flower
Riya mein tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon mujhse shaadi karogi ?
plz naa...mat kehna mera dil tutt...jayega ( He was saying in filmy style ) she slap him and say '' idiot ''
she grab the rose and throug down while puting her feet on the rose she walk away
arjun was crying like a baby he hold a rose petal in his hand and BG song was playing
Dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye
Hum wafa karke bhi tanha reh gaye
Dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye
arjun come in his sence and say '' uff...Thanks god that was just my imagination not in real he hit himself
budhu aise filmy style mein karega toh wo tujh pe kabhi vishwas nahi karegi stupid !!!
he start  walking here and there in his cabin while thinking and was more tensed ...
Arjun : Ab..kya karun mein...Kese kahun ?
god plz help me...kese kahun apne dil ki baat riya se ?
he go ahead and open the window , a cold and fresh air was Flickering outside his eyes was closed and he was enjoyinh the air..
suddenly he open his eyes and say '' arjun to hamesha nikama nikama hi rahega ek choti si baat nahi keh sakta ...huh !!!
Okay one more time
he turn back and walk with full attitude ...
riya mujhe tumse ek baat kehni hai , mein tumse pyaar karta hoon agar shaadi karni hai to thike hai warna...
shit yaar arjun...aise baat karega usse to wo definatly na bol degi kuch aisa soch jisse wo teri baat samajh jaye
practice shuru he hold a tomato in his hand and put his hand far mamimum 50 cm
Riya...aaj mein jo kehne jaa raha hoon usse dhyaan se aur dil se sunna
Har Pal Har Waqt
Har Saans
Aur Dil ki har Dharkan kehti hai
ke mujh tum se pyaar hai...mujhe tumse pyaar hai
suddenly he heard voice of rathore '' ye kya ho raha hai rawte ?"
arjun got shocked
rathore???
uski awaaz kaha se aarahi hai ???
rathore : tumhare peeche se rawte
he immidiatly turn back and look at him
his mouth was open " Ra...ra...rathore tu..tum yaha ???
rathore : kyu ?
kya mein yahan nahi ho sakta ?
arjun : umm...nahi mera wo matlab nahi tha
rathore : ye kya ho raha hai ???
arjun : kya ho raha hai ???
rathore : rawte mein subha se dekh raha hoon kabhi yaha ghoom rahe ho to kabhi waha ...
aakhir tumhara dyaan kaha hai ?
arjun : nahi rathore wo bs aise hi...
rathore look at tomato in his hand
rathore :  ye  tamater ?
rawte jaha tak mein tumhe jaanta hoon you hate tomatoes na ?
to aaj ...????
arjun : ( fake smile ) ahaha...wo...wo iss mein shock hone wali kya baat hai , of course
tamatar to khane ke liye hi hota hai ( He take a bit of tomato and again give a funny smile )
rathore : ( laugh ) rawte tum bhi na
arjun was again the hell shocked
arjun : ye tumhe kya hua rathore ?
rathore : sorry sorry kuch...nahi
acha batao ye kar kya rahe the tum ?
arjun : woo...rathore rehne do tum haso ge
rathore : chal zyada bhao mat kha aur bata ye tamatar ke saath kya kar rahe the tum huh ???
arjun : mujhe wo gaya hai...
rathore : oye...tu itna sharma kyun raha hai ?
aur wo kya ??? , dekh sidhe sidhe bata officer se panga nahi lena ..?!
arjun : yaar woh tu ( he make heart with his hands ) yeh !!!
now this was time for rathore to get shock
rathore : kya baat kar raha hai rawte ?
arjun : dekha...dekha...mene kaha tha tum haso ge , meri feelings ko koi nahi samajhta jao nahi karni mujhe tumse baat...
rathore : acha baba sorry ab itna to bata do ke wo hai kon ?
arjun : ( smile ) R...riya aur mein usse propose karne ki practice kar raha tha ( He was not able to control his smile and emotions )
rathore : kya ?
he again make face to laugh and finally laugh out loud ...
rathore : sorry again...dekh agar tu riya ko aise propose karega na toh pakka 100% wo tujhe na hi kahe gi .
arjun : kya...to ab ?
malab mein riya ko kabhi i love u nahi keh paunga ( he made a sad funny face )
rathore : bache...to ye tera bhai kis liye hai ?
arjun : Matlab ?
rathore : matlab ke ab se tujhe ek practice mein dunga propose karne ki samjha ?
arjun : ( Big smile ) Samjha to shuru karein ?
rathore : kya ???
arjun : practice...aur kya ?
rathore : sabar beta sabar ...kal...huh ?
after saying that he leave with high on floor
arjun jump away on air saying " Yahooo..."
rathore turn back and give a look to him saying " pagal hai..."( with a smile he walk away )


Actually i don't know kesa hai ?
funny hai ya emotional
if emotional hua then plz forgive me coz mein khud emotional insaan hoon 😆
but just jo mere mind mein aaya mene type kar diya..
sorry for any mistake :)
and waise bhi first time hai challenge mein and it's my first os i am writing ever...

Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: kunchu

hey Saba 

congrats again dear!!
so hows the hot seat???too hot???😆😆
well its just a beginning my dear!! 

so from my side a few questions:

1. tell me yr fav story written by u?
2. the most memorable FF you ever read?
3. which character do you relate most to?
4. give me the dialog if Liza is proposing Sree?
5. best buddies over here?
6. how do u get the ideas for the VM?
7. how do you think Chotu's 11 30 wali would look like?

8 a small os challenge:  imagine Chotu's 11 30 wali is Rathod's little sister. Riya and Sree agrees to help Chotu to propose her without knowing this fact (even Chotu didnt know it). they reach the venue and see her with Rathod and thinks she is Rathod's GF. how would they handle the situation? and then after knowing the truth, how will Chotu propose her, and that too in front of Rathod????

hows it dear???😆😆😉



OH MY GOD ...
tough challenge diya hai...😆
but will try my best to present OS and os ke saath hi answers bhi dungi😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Okay few question for u

What is ur full name ?
why you are my best friend ?
what is your height ?
How would you describe your best friend?
your favorite question ?
why your name is ramisa ?
what is the meaning of ur Name ?
Where were you born?
What is your eye color?
What is your full name?
Would you ever smoke?
Schools?
Favorite subject?
Favorite teacher?
Type of shampoo?
Kind of phone?
Favorite chocolate?
How many friends have you had?
Favorite movies?
Favorite actors?
Favorite actresses?
Favorite TV shows?

i know some stupid questions hain but fir bhi answer :)
and real challenge to abhi baqi hai
enjoy grilling😆
Edited by -lisana- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Rami...!!

My OS challenge...

On Arisha after marriage... Typical husband-wife fights on small matters... Arjun Shows his male ego and determines to prove that he is better than the Ayesha ... What she can do, so can he..

Ayesha asks him to handle household work for a 3 days... Arjun readily accepts, but then he realizes he cant... Ending mein he bends down to Ayesha sayin he cant handle, but Ayesha says he has to now as he is going to be a father now...!!!

Make it comedy, with the ending confession of Arjun a bit emotional...!!!

(After WOTW, please post all ur OS challenges in the Forum at one thread.)

(Get ready for more OS challenges!! U are going to be grilled tough)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rami here i cum

My challenge
:

Write n Ariya OS: Arjun planning to propose Ria. He decides to propose her one day. he reaches d place n finds shree proposing her, (Shree was practicing to propose Liza with Ria n Arjun misunderstands this). 
He was upset, n backs off thinking Ria s happy with shree.
Ri notices a change in his attitude. 

She s irked woth sudden change n finally confronts arjun. Ariya fight n den finally ria coming to know d reason of arjun's behavior,. n she proposes to arjun instead. 

Write n OS on dis whole concept. I want only 1 chapter. (600 words maximum limit)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Arjun sounded just like a kid, wonderful Saba🤗
 
Now here's your next challenge😉, kuch hatke hein😆:
well continue from this, Rahore teaches Arjun how to propose, and thus Arjun is practising with Rathore, and Riya sees this and her reactions...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

Devildiva21

Answers


If you could learn one random skill, what would you learn? i will learn designing coz i am fail in designinglol

What's your favorite joke?  Who died and who lived?

What's your favorite part about today so far? my fav bart so far is my 4th class school days...

If someone asked you to give them a random piece of advice, what would you say? paani mein doob maro 🤣

What's one of your favorite habits you have? swimming

What's your favorite color? red , blue

What's your favorite dessert? rice kheer 

What did you do on your 14th birthday? nothing much just celebrate 2 times once with family once with class...

Why does glue not stick to the bottle? It does stick to the bottle, it's just not as obvious. That's why the cap to the glue bottle always gets stuck or clogged. Inside the bottle the glue doesn't dry out as quikly thus it is not given a chance to stick. Leave the cap off your glue bottle and you will see it stick to the bottle.

Why is a second hand called a second hand when really it's the third hand? Skip

Why is abbreviations such a long word when it means the opposite of long words?really didn't understand so i guess i should skip it😆

Rank the colors of the rainbow from best to worst and state why? 
Blue: my favorite!
Violet: my second favorite!
Red: I love red, it's so outstandish
Yellow: It's bright and cheerful
Green: Mother nature is always beautiful :)
Orange: It makes me feel like popsicles :P
Pink: I've never liked pink much, don't know why, but I think of food coloring and that's just eww LOL

 Describe yourself in three words ok..so i will say Funny , friendly , emotional

 If you were a superhero, What would you catch Phrase Be ? I look far more helpful, than I truly am...

What is the first word that comes to mind when I say the word " Awesome" ? great ! ( Coz will be happy hearing that )...

What time is it right now? 6.44pm

   
Which came first, the egg or chicken? lol same questionjiska sience bhi answer nahi de paayi but the answer is Eggcame first...

if you had a super power what would it be and why? i would love to help poor pplz

What are you listening to right now? my mom...

You're driving a car to new york and you've driven 100 miles already. your car has 4 seats and 3 of them are filled. its you, your friend, and your cousin in the car. who's driving? Hard even no answer i have in my mind 😆

Give your 10 favorite songs.Why do you like each one?
1.Uska hi bana
2.Khud ko tere
3.Raabta
4.teri jhuki nazar
5.khudaya ve
6.anjana anjani
7.mujh mein tu
8.darmiyaan faasle
9.ek ehsaas hai
10.punjab song mein tenu samjhawan ki

    What's the funniest movie you've ever seen? 3 idiots

    Your views on the questions? Nice questions but hard for me and take much time to understand each question

What have you learned today? how to face the challenges and how much fun + tention it has ...

    How do you feel right now? What are you thinking about? i am feeling hot and right now in tension to answer the questions 🤣

Whats a question with no answer called? BOYCOTT 🤣

What is your favorite subject in school? urdu which is myown language ...

Why is it that people say they "slept like a baby" when babies wake up 10 times every hour? Does it really Matter? Is this suppose to be a joke? lol

    Some words for me u r a sweetheart , funny girl the time spend good with u

Huh these questions took my heart away...
🤪



hahahah rami these questions took your heart away😆 abhi to challenge baaki hai😉🤣
btw thanx for answering my questions...!!!😳
Edited by devildiva21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Rami...!!


My OS challenge...

On Arisha after marriage... Typical husband-wife fights on small matters... Arjun Shows his male ego and determines to prove that he is better than the Ayesha ... What she can do, so can he..

Ayesha asks him to handle household work for a 3 days... Arjun readily accepts, but then he realizes he cant... Ending mein he bends down to Ayesha sayin he cant handle, but Ayesha says he has to now as he is going to be a father now...!!!

Make it comedy, with the ending confession of Arjun a bit emotional...!!!

(After WOTW, please post all ur OS challenges in the Forum at one thread.)

(Get ready for more OS challenges!! U are going to be grilled tough)



Shit shit shit shit shit...
Mithuz u and ur arisha i was know ...
mujhe pata tha u will give me os of arisha and wo bhi aisa jaisa i neer expect...
huh !!!
don't worry hot seat mili hai toh clallenge to pura karna hi padega
soon will give you your Arisha os sweetie 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: -lisana-

Okay few question for u

What is ur full name ? Ramisa ilyas ( Kitni dafa pucho gi sahiba ? )

why you are my best friend ? i am your best friend coz you are a person 😉

what is your height ? ummm...5 foot 😆

How would you describe your best friend?
My friends in Heart
As we walk our path of life,
we meet new people everyday.

Most are simply met by chance,
but, some are sent our way.

These become special friends,
whose bonds we can't explain.

The ones who understand us,
and share our joy and pain.

Their love contains no boundaries,
even when we are apart.

Their presence enhances us,
with a warmth that's felt in your heart.

This love becomes a passageway,
even when the miles disappear.

And so, these friends, God sends our way,
Remain! Forever near. !


your favorite question ? How old are you ? i ask this question before i start my conversation so i can know that person i older or younger then my if older so i can respect that person and if younger then khoob khechayi karu😆

why your name is ramisa ? pata nahi...but my dadu give me this name...and i proud on Him⭐️

what is the meaning of ur Name ? i guess White rose😳

Where were you born? of course in my hometown Gujrat , Pakistan

What is your eye color? Brown

Would you ever smoke? Nah,...kabhi dekha hai kya ?😆

Schools? u know Al-Iqbal international school

Favorite subject? Urdu

Favorite teacher? fav teacher...hum...miss razia😛

Type of shampoo? Soft silky hairs wala

Kind of phone? Samsung , Nokia

Favorite chocolate? Galaxy , dairy Milk yummmy...

How many friends have you had? Out of range

Favorite movies? Dil se , SOTY , and ...much more

Favorite actors? only one Shaleen and after thar Karan singh grover

Favorite actresses? Sana khan and then surbhi jyoti

Favorite TV shows?
Arjun...and Qubool hai...

i know some stupid questions hain but fir bhi answer :)
and real challenge to abhi baqi hai
enjoy grilling😆


( Hmmm...mazza aaya...easy questions the...
and in my range the )