Wow i read the whole thing in a go! It was beautifully written!!! Well the sadya or feast was just like the food we serve in konkani marriages!! I need to tell my mouth was watering!!!
Claps jayshree that was completed very nicely and in style. Thanks for the awesome updates it was a pleasure to read and the writing is so fine that it gives the picture so clearly to you like you could visualize it. Just caught with many of the last updates and loved it. Do write more stories your writing style is magnificent.
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Jayshri thoroughly enjoyed reading the final updates. It was finished off with pulses raising. The final confrontation was awesome. Thanks for enthralling us with this wonderful story. Hope to see many more from u. 😊
Loved reading all the updates together. It was mind boggling and very intense loaded with power. Totally fab updates. As a reader it was a thorough pleasure. Thank for completing it and making it so special for all of us. 😊
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