OS: Rukhsat

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Riya's last words were ringing in Rathod's ears like gong bells.
Rathod looked completely lost.He just looked at his hands,with which he gave fire to Riya's dead body.He looked at his hands,with which he carried Riya's lifeless body,for the first time.
He wasnt related to Riya by blood,but,Riya,always,considered him,as her mentor and her elder brother.
In every raksha bandhan,Riya used to tie a rakhi in Rathod's wrist.
Now,that,wrist will remain empty.
No one will be able to fill up the void of Riya.
As he looked at his hands,he remembered the departing words,last words,said by Riya.
Flashback:
Rathod(pulling Riya's seriously injured body on his lap): Riya... Riya... Aakhein kholo... Dekho... Tere Rathod bhai aaye hai...Tujhe kuch nahi hoga...
Riya(taking her last breaths and crying): Bh...Bha..i... Mer...a... wa...qt khh...a.tam... hogaya hai. Mm...ain toh apke haatho se ek dulhan ki bhh..e...s mein rukhsat hona chahti thhi,par,I am sorry,bhai.Yeh nahi ho paya. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dijiyega... Bhai,vadaa karti hu ki,mm..ain agle janam mein apki beti hoke apke haatho se rukhsat houngi,apne sasural jaane keliye.
Aa...yesha ka k..kkhayal rakhiyega.
Mujhe rote rote aise rukhsat mat kijiyega,haste haste meri rukhsat kijiye.Koi bhi nahi royega,samj..hhe ya sam..jhhau?
With that,she closed her eyes for eternity.
Rathod let out an animalistic groan,"Riyaaa..."
Flashback ends.
Rathod was brought out of his thoughts,when Aayesha kept her comforting hand on his shoulder.She understood his situation.Aayesha moved towards him,and wiped his tears and cupped his face.
Aayesha:Sam,agar aap hi aise toot jayenge,toh phir,hum sabko kaun sambhalega? Main janti hu,ki,aapko Riya ki bohut yaad aarahi hai,par,hum aur kitne din usske maut ka gham leke jiyenge.Riya se main bhi bohut close thhi,par,maine,Shree aur Chotu ne uske saath bitaye huye har khubsurat pal ko apne dil ke ek kone mein rakkhe hai.Aapko bhi aage barrhna hoga,hum sabke liye na sahi,par,humdono ke baby keliye.
Aayesha takes Rathod's hands and keeps it on he tummy.
Aayesha: Sam,isko mehsoos kijiye.Shayad,nau mahine baad,humein Riya wapas miljaaye.
Rathod(wiping his tears away): Haan,Aayesha.U r right.Mujhe aage barrhna hoga,tumhare liye,mere liye,sabkeliye aur sabse khaas,hum sab ke Riya keliye.
Chalo.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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riyaaa died๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ!!

waitng to read moree!!

update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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riyu...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
touchy OS...
awesome๐Ÿ˜ญ
do continue...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww...
so emotional..
loved it
nyc title
do cont soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely yr...
very emotional... my riya... :'( :'( :'(
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnk u all for liking this OS.
Who wants a sequel to it?
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me...!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
do write a sequel to it...!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Riya...meri riya:((((((((((((((((((
my riya๐Ÿ˜ญ
sam and aisha...!๐Ÿ˜Š
emotional and lovely os
please write a sequel for this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Emotional one! ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Loved this OS! Please please please Continue!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Niceee...veryyy niceee
very emotional...