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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's a completely short and lame os it was just a thought that came into my mind

Re- main who keh raha tha ki kyun na tum aur swayam dono ek saath strategies banao ki humhe clients se milkar kya kya aur kaise discuss karna hain

Forced by gang and rey sharon din't had any other option other than discussing strategies with swayam

In the rehersal hall as soon as they entered swayam bolted the locked and pinned sharon against the wall

Sh-Tum yeh kya kar raho ho swayam chodo mujhe

Sw-nahin sharon aaja main tumhari ek nahin sunoga jab tak tum mujhe yeh nahin bata deti ki achanak delhi jaakar aisa kya ho gaya hain jo tum mujhe iss tarah avoid kar rahi khud se itna dur kar rahi ho aur please yeh maat bolna ki aisa kuch nahin hain kyun kuch toh hain jo tum mujhse chupa rahi hoon aur who kya hain main abhi jaana chahta hu

Sh- kaise baatau tumhe swayam ki main tumse kya chupa rahi hoon mujhe mein tumhe sach baatane ki himmat nahin hain kaise tumhe batadungi kyun main tumhe apne aapse door kar rahin hoon

Sw-ab chup kyun ho bolo bhi kyunki main ab tumhara yeh cold behaviour mere tarah mujhe iss tarah se ignore karna khudko aur mujhe takleef dena aur handle nahin kar sakta

Sharon instead of replying to swayam just hugged him and cried swayam hugged her back

Sh-swayam please tum mujhe force maat karo kuch bhi tumhe batane ke kyunki main tumhe sach nahin pata sakti sach jaan kar tum humhare firs t promise nahin rakhoge jo main nahin chahti

Swayam borked the hug cupped her cheek and made her look into his eyes

Sw-sharon main tumse promise karta hoon ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye main humhara first promise kabhi nahin break karunga sharon please mera sach jaana bahut zaroori

Sharon moved away and turn her back to swayam

Sh- swayam tum jaana chahte hona ki main dance aur tumse itna dur kyun jaa rahin hoon toh suno mujhe aasthma hain doctors ne mujhe dance karne se saaf mana kardiya hain aur main yeh achi tarah se janti hoon ki jab tumse iss baare mein pata chalega toh tum bhi khudo dance se dur karloge jo main hote hua nahin dekh sakti

Sw-tumhe aasthma issliye tum dance se dur ho par tumne mujhe batana chaiye tha agar tum mujhe achi tarah se janti hoon toh tumhe yeh bhi pata hona chaiye ki main kabhi bhi tumhe diya hua waada kabhi nahin toduga jo cheez mujhe tumse jodti hain aur tumhare aur kareeb laati hain main kaise break kar sakta hu main tumse waada karta hu sharon ki main dance aur tumhe kabhi nahin chodunga lekin tumhe bhi mujhe aise avoid karna aur cold behaviour dena band karna hoga because I love you sharon

Sh – I love you too swayam

Swayam couldn't believe his ears and stood there like a pillar sharon turned and wasn't surprised to see this reaction from him

Sh- haan swayam yeh sach hain I love you I love you a lot delhi jaakar mujhe yeh realize hua ki main tumse kitna aur naa jaane kabse pyaar karti hoon aur Mumbai waapis aane ke baad jab bhi maine tumhare saath rudely behave kiya tumse se zyada mujhe takleef huyi aur main tumse waada karti hu ki ab chahe jo bhi ho jaaye main kabhi bhi tumse rude nahin hongi aur na hi koi cold behaviour dungi

Swayam slowly moved towards still not been able to believe what he had just heard and took sharon into a tight hug

Sw- I love you a lot sharon tum nahin jaanti ki aaj main kitna khush hoon aaj meri khushi ka thikana hi nahin hain aur yeh jo tumhara aasthma hain na isse theek karne ki responsibility meri hain tum bhi bahut jald dance karogi yeh mera waada hain tumse

Sh- I trust you swayam mujhe pata hain tum aapna yeh waada zaroor pura karoge

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How is it? Feel free to critize if it is not upto the mark it will help me improve likes and comment are necessary as a writer acha lagta hain even if its just a word

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Really sweet os :-) please pm me when you write something new

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pari ne likha toh nice kaise nai hota 😃 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Dii It was a wonderfull os.
Confession part was sweet.
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
WOW...Beautiful OS dear...
loved it...
I wish could see it in the show...
Loved the way you cleared the doubts...
And finally sharon confessed 😳
Lovely OS 😊

Do write more n pm me...
@lalita..thanx swthrt for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice work Pri! (x Enjoyed reading it after a disappointing episode. You wrote it short, crisp and interesting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

WOW...Beautiful OS dear...
loved it...
I wish could see it in the show...
Loved the way you cleared the doubts...
And finally sharon confessed 😳
Lovely OS 😊

Do write more n pm me...
@lalita..thanx swthrt for the pm😊


di mere os par bhi comment do na 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was really cute.

okay I know myself m not a good writer but there are a few points that I as a reader felt were lacking. (sorry I didn't intend to offend you. I'm really sorry if in any manner I hurt you or your sentiments.)

1. you could have mentioned where all it was a mind thought. like the first one for Sharon.

n rest all were just few spelling mistakes n grammatical mistakes. [I guess I'm following Anky di's thread a lot]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a really sweet OS
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
It was nice but little small.

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