os : intresting love story

hello guys i am gonna to write an another os on jaj it is not like all the 3 other os its really different

believe me ...😛

i am asking before as there i no use to write if u guys don t like it ...

o k dear i am gonna to post 1st part by tonight


 

part 1 :
there lived a guy vicky in a bungalow who was always happy who had no tensions in life but one day

vicky : i am going to the terrace to have a look from there

and he heads of 2 terrace and he finds a v old bottle with smoke whiffing inside he decided to open

it and see whats there inside so opens it and a whiff of white smoke emerges from the bottle and a

beautiful girl is seen vicky gaze at her in wonder

girl : hi i am jeannie and u

vicky : how u came out of this bottle ?

jeannie : an evil jin captured me 8000 years ago and locked me in this bottle and now i will live

with u

vicky : i am afraid of u jeannie

jeannie : juju i wont do any harm 2 u so don t worry

vicky : juju ? nice

jeannie : o k now i am going to my bottle when u need me u can call me o k bye

vicky : bye

inside the bottle :

jeannie : i love my juju v much and always want to be with him 😳😳

on the other hand

vicky :  i love priya so much

jeannie overhears this and feels sad and she comes out of the bottle

vicky : hi jeannie wats up ?

jeannie (sad) : fine

vicky : so tell me about u some thing

jeannie : before i was captured i used to live in jeannie land where i used to have lots of fun and it

 was ruled by a king

vicky : u miss all that

jeannie exclaims : juju ! u care about me so much u r the best juju in this whole world

vicky smiling : really

and they had an eye lock

so u guys really liked it or it is a waste of time ?




Edited by jeanniejuju1111 - 11 years ago

its really nice yaar
want to read more
continue soon

Originally posted by: gmsaurabh

cont.dear

thanks 😛😛😛

part 2 :

many days passed away quickly and one day :

vicky : jeannie ! jeannie ! where r u come here soon

jeannie appears

vicky : thank god u came here

jeannie : wat happened juju ?

vicky : i want urgently ur bottle with u inside okay

jeannie : y juju ? wat happened

vicky : jeannie some one was searching 4 u and i will hide u

jeannie : juju ! u care about me so much 😳😳😳😳

vicky  this is no time to feel shy pls go in the bottle soon

jeannie : ok i am coming my bottle

saying this she vanished from there and entered right in to her bottle

vicky : thank god she obeyed me

and he hurried of to his room to hide the bottle

vicky : where shud i hide this bottle ? in the cupboard ? no , yes in the safe

and he opens the safe and keeps the bottle in the safe

Originally posted by: fan-gia

please write

thank u for encouraging me 😛

it is a short story which has only four parts so it will be over soon

Originally posted by: giafan.1

nice

thank u i feel encouraged 😳

thanks to everyone 😳😳😳😳