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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely teaser
continue soon
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Edited by BULBUL.A - 11 years ago
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teaser
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Nice teaser
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  Nice teaser...😛
 Waiting...😊
 
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wowow dii soo sweet poems 
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hi congrats on the new thread! lovely teaser! update soon
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wonderful lines but scaring me...

are u planning some twist...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HERE IS HAQ UPDATE READ WITH PC AND LAPPY BCOZ OF SOUND EFFECT ... NOT ANY SONG BUT SOMETHING ELSE

CHAPTER 13

Recap: maneet with mitu come out for seeing local market... and mitu and geet were exited with small small things and making maan amused...

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Maan start to play with mitu with her newly found teddy bear...  touching her nose with teddy bear... nuzzling her with her teddy... and mitu is laughing with every action of maan... geet is also smiling to see her bacha like that... maan made mitu stand on his thigh and hold her with her waist... and give her teddy to geet and start to have his coffee with geet... suddenly geet made maan shock with her words.

"Thank you" geet said with little tear and smile.

Maan just shocked and see upper from to geet slowly... geet again mouthed maan "thank you".

"Why geet" maan asked with frown.

"To give mitu her dada" geet said very slowly with lost look.

"And what about you" maan asked with seriousness.

Geet stand up and went at the edge of hill and said to maan who is just behind her now... geet has very serious and an unknown expression on her face...

"kya pyaar dubaara hota hai maan jii" geet asked and watching far in nothing and searching her answer.

Maan come and stand beside geet and hold her hand with his free hand... and press little and said in very lost and slow voice like his heart is speaking today.

"geet pyaar... pyaar ek ahsaas hai... ek anchaah ashaas... ek ankaha ashaas... ye tu dil se dil ki baat hai... vo pyaar jo saari duniya ko samat le lata hai... use kaise samte diya logo nai... pyaar ... pyaar vo hai jo maa apne bachoo se karti hai... pyaar vo hai jab papa thake hue ghar aate ha mager phir bhi apni gudiyaa ke kahe te hi gummane le jaate hai... pyaar vo hai jab koi bejuban janwar apne malik ke liye jaan bhi de deta hai... pyaar vo hai jab ek dewaani apne pati ke liye muskrakar pure din vrat rakhti hai... pyaar vo hai jab maa apne hisse ki roti apne bacho ko khila deti ha mager uff tak nahi karti... pyaar smauder hai geet... pyaar akash hai annant hai... aur sabse bada pyaar jab ek nayi dulhan puri tarah sampard kar deti hai khud ko apne pati ke liye... dil se kisi ko nikale dusre ko waha lane ki jarurat nahi hai geet... dil mai tu bhout jagha hoti hai bas kisi ko vo haq dene ki der hai... i understand your situation geet... but mai bhi kisi se bhout pyaar karta tha... she is died with cancer... but to love you I don't need to pulled her out from my heart geet... love is wide geet... wide so wide" maan said also with lost look his eye is fixed in nothing just searching love in deep far valley.

"jab pyaar itna hi khoobsurat hai tu... log apna vaada tode kar hume yeha akala kyu chode jaate hai... kyu hume akele saari duniya se ladne ke liye chode jaate hai... "kyu ishq itna dard deta  hai... kyu dil ka suda hum assu se karte hai" kyu" geet asked slowly and turn her face and see maan with tears... one pearl is resting on her chubby cheek.

In answer maan just said 4 lines...

Hume atbaar kaha tha pyaar kya hai...
Kiya tu jaana ye to saaza hai...
Kabhi dilbar ki wafa ki saaza hai...
Yaa phir jafa ki saaza hai...
Mager ye naa hu tu zindgi saza hai
Kya musibt hai, dil ka suda kiya
Aur phir bhugti saaza hai...

 

In reply geet also said 4 lines from her heart...

Saaza mai itna mazaa hai

Ye pyaar kiya tu jaana humne

Ek jine ka mazaa aaya

Tu dusre pal muat ka manjer paya humne

Zindgi mehak uthi thi isse pyar mai

Dusri taraf umeedu ko murda paya humne

 

Maan and geet is lost in each other ... searching peace for their thumping hearts... their hands is entangled with each other and eye is promising to each other that from now onward they are have a life partner for them... this feeling is unknown to geet but maan knows... marriage is powerful from any other feeling and geet inner soul already start to see maan as her humsafer.

"ahh .. hh" maan little shrike broke their moment.

Geet raised her eyebrow and ask what happen... and maan see mitu is playing with his ear and sometime tickling him with her soft face touch... make maan shrike... maan shirt is wet full from his shoulder as mitu is sulking his shirt from so much time when she felt bore... she start to touch his ear.

"kya badmashi hu rahi hai haa" maan asked mitu who laughed dearly and throw her hand in air.

Geet shook her head to see her so much active rabbit... who is always ready for playing.

"chale" maan asked to geet and offer his hand to her.

Geet nod her head and hold maan hand and they come to their table... geet took out towel from mitu bag and wet it from water bottle and wipe maan shirt as this is wet because of mitu sulking.

"Let it be geet... I am ok" maan said and stand mitu on his thigh.

"arre let me clean naa or else there will be a spot after drying" geet said and wipe shirt with soft crease make maan restless so maan tried to change topic... so tell me what you want to see.

"Hmm as you wish maan jii" geet said softly and set towel in bag.

"arre tell me... ok we have 2-3 option... we will go on some hill point... or will see so many Fruit Orchards... and third option is we will roam in local market... now choose which one you want" maan asked and sipping his coffee.

"Fruit orchards... are there fruit also on trees?" geet asked like excited kid.

"haa geet... in this season you can see fruits also" maan said.

"So we will see fruit orchards then local market" geet said excitedly... and forget all hesitation in excitement.

"Ok.. Ok" maan said and shook his head and smile little... he is sipping his coffee like turtle making geet restless.

"arre maan jii fast piyu naa" geet at last tell her desire.

"Ok.. Ok chalo" maan standup and paid bill and took geet and come out from open restaurant.

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They settle in the car and maan order to take them in very big orchards... mitu is standing on maan thigh and enjoying view which is so pleasant and attractive in all way. She is making sounds ... and trying to jump on maan lap ... but not able to do so. Geet come near her and kiss her hard and she jumped in response... she is so naughty so maan is holding her very tightly from her tiny waste... which is giving her independence for masti.

This is the first time geet is spending so much time with mitu or else she is always in office and just come in night when mitu was slept mostly... geet want to just spend her all time with mitu but circumstances is not in her hand.

Geet is thanking maan for this in her heart... maan is so busy with mitu who is touching his eye nose with her little chubby pink palm and laughed after touching him making maan and geet smile ear to ear.





This girl can filled any one with happiness and maan feeling proud to have two beautiful angels in his life... off course because of dadi advice. Car comes to orchards gate to make geet exited to exploring it.



The sound of birds and chill wind making atmosphere as divine like they are on some heaven place... big trees... different birds nest on them... butterflies... and not too forget all trees and bending because of fruits and flower... no this is not earth this is heaven... or god garden... don't know but if you come here you just want to lost in it.



Geet eye just roaming here and there to see nature... she even twirl in happiness to see all this... ohh this is incredible. Maan is holding mitu who is not less then geet she is clapping to see all birds is flying from here there... she is clapping with her little hand but always miss... her didn't met sometime and make maan laugh... maan took her both hand in  his hand carefully and kissed her.

"chalo naa maan jii we will go inside" geet said in impatiently.

"ok ok chalo take mitu bag" maan make her remember.

Geet bite her tongue cutely and took mitu bag in her hand they took mitu trolley also full roaming freely... but now mitu is only in maan hand and her eye is shining to see atmosphere which is making her laugh.

At last they enter in orchid and a dancing peacock welcome them by chance make mitu and geet excited more as peacock is twirling with open den. All different and unseen birds sound is filling place... and different type trees with fruit and flower.

For roaming in orchid there is a mud road no artificial thing is here... some hill people is working there and smiling to see them.

Geet see one pomegranate tree which is full of fruits... geet leave maan hand and run to see it... maan try to call her but stop to see her so happy like she is also a butterfly of this orchid and went with mitu near geet.

"maan jii see how beautiful they are"  geet touch them slightly .

"Hmm very beautiful" maan said in dreamy voice his eye only on geet.

Geet just like butterfly run in other direction see some other gooseberry trees... maan shook his head and smile and went fast near her.

She is just running here and there... suddenly mitu start to shout in excitement and showing something with her finger... maan turn and see a old pot there and so many parrot is sitting there and drinking water... maan took her near them with a safe distand and she is jumping in maan's arm... and in friction of second all parrot fly... and make mitu hug maan with their sound... maan laughed.

Geet took maan hand drag him near very big tree and see kathal is beautifully blooming there... make her smile... some village people set shop there of all fruit... geet went there with maan and her mouth become watered... they are making kache mango chat with salt and re chilly... she make puppy face to maan and maan said "no geet will fall ill".

"please naa" geet said.

But maan again show his eye.

"bas thoda saa" geet show him her finger how little she want.

"accha chalo thodi sii.. ek choti plate bana" maan said to old shopkeeper couple.





"jii saab jii" they said and start to make their chat.

There thay are having toy fruit also as tourist buy them as memory and mitu wants them so maan took so many... and give her a watermelon toy... which she put instantly in her mouth and made geet laughed... a cute hamming bird come near and geet and mitu is watching her keenly... geet try to hold her and she fly again with lighting speed... geet pouted cutely.

Old couple gave geet ami chat to her... and she start to relish it like she is eating world best cuisine... maan sat on one old bench and watching geet who is making all kind of face and eating ami.



Mitu see geet and start to wriggle and want to taste what geet is eating... geet make baby face to maan... but mitu is verge of crying... as they are not giving her which geet eating.

"nahi nahi bacha ok we eat this" maan try to console her.

Maan took one ami piece without chilly and salt and touch her tongue with ami... and mitu turn her face instantly and its taste is sour which she don't like it... and her attention turn to other thing.

Precap: you tell me more nature scene in orchid or skip it and aage badu.


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Edited by BULBUL.A - 11 years ago


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