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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is dedicated to Deeksha (-Dee-) who encouraged me to post my poems here. Thank you, buddy!
I hope you enjoy this.

Music

In the first cry of a newborn
as she enters an unknown world
and in her unconditional first laughter,
I hear music.

When a mother sings a lullaby
to her child on a difficult night,
in that beautiful, pristine melody,
I see music in its purest form.

The rain pitter patters,
it splashes down on the scorched earth,
In the joy of laughter,
as the farmer sings the advent of monsoon,
music is in that moment of life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you!
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Marvelous! You have shown some scenes which are Realistic and a person who is Positive towards Life can Only See and Experience the Feelings which you have depicted in your Creativity.

I really appreciate your way of writing it simply, please write and share here with us. Regards.:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI

Marvelous! You have shown some scenes which are Realistic and a person who is Positive towards Life can Only See and Experience the Feelings which you have depicted in your Creativity.

I really appreciate your way of writing it simply, please write and share here with us. Regards.:)



Thanks a lot! :-)
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My pleasure! Whats ur name?
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nice name:) . I'm Dev , so you like writing Poems?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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'Music' is absolutely beautiful, Tanisha. It has an innocence in it - very simple but profound - very true. It is untainted by sorrow and that makes it really beautiful.

Thank you for the dedication :-)

P.S - I noticed your signature. HAHA! ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am so glad you do! Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Dee-

'Music' is absolutely beautiful, Tanisha. It has an innocence in it - very simple but profound - very true. It is untainted by sorrow and that makes it really beautiful.


Thank you for the dedication :-)

P.S - I noticed your signature. HAHA! ;-)


Thank you! 😊
And the dedication was only fitting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI

nice name:) . I'm Dev , so you like writing Poems?



Hi Dev!
Yeah, I do. Very much. 😉

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