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Posted: 11 years ago
here comes the next part, enjoy


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In the meantime Panditji came up and all were anxious to know the marriage date, aaj kal ki shaadiya muhurt dekh ke nahi balki, ladka ladki ki waqt ki sahuliyaat dekh ke tay karna padta hain, dono jo thehre naukri karnewale, toh Panditji ne teen mahine baad ka muhrat nikala, jo sabko theek laga and date is fixed.


Krishnaji ' Panditji kya ek hi mandap me do shaadiyan ho sakti hain?


Pandit ' jee ho sakti hain



Krishnaji turning to Dadi and they have some ankhon ankhon me baat aur phir Krishnaji turn to Sudhir and Shipra, agar aap dono ko koi aitraaz na ho aur Priya ko pasand ho to main apne Ram ke liye aapse Priya ka haath mangna chahti hoon.


Upon hearing this both Ram and Priya got shocked and look at each other.

Krishnaji said main samajhti hoon key eh bohot bara faisla hain aur Priya se pooche bina aap log koi jawab nahin denge par phir bhi mere taraf se yeh prastav main rakhti hoon, mujhe aapki beti bohot bhaayi hain, mere Ram ke liye isse achha mujhe nahin milegi koi.

Sudhirji ' yeh toh humara khush kismati hain ke aap Ram ke liye Priya ka haath mang rahe hain, dekhiye humari taraf se koi apatti nahi hain, par kyunki inn dono ko rehna hain jeewan bhar, let's they decide.

Ram who is still in a state of shock that how come Ma come up with such thing and what Priya is thinking about, on the other Priya is equally shocked, never in her wildest dream she thought about such.

Krishnaji ' aap sahi keh rahe hain, mujhe bhi yehi lagta hain, toh jab aaj mauka haindono baat kar sakte hain, saying this she turned her face to Neha, and Neha made the arrangement and finally Ram and Priya was in Priya's room. Ram was sitting on the chair and Priya standing near the table. Both can't say anything as the situation is too awkward, par baat toh karni paregi, so Ram started dekhiye am sorry who ma ne achanak se aisa bolengi mujhe andaaza nahi tha

Priya said its ok, lekin bura mat maniye I need some time to think about it.

Ram who was perspiring was somewhat get relieved on hearing this. He said mujhe bhi, toh kya hum baad me baat kare?


Priya instantly said ok


Both came out of the room, every one was anxious to know, everyone was looking at them, so Ram said hum dono ko kuch waqt chahiye sochne ka, we need some time.


Dadi ' theek hain puttar, tu soch ke batana, koi zabardasti ya jaldbazi nahi hain, saying such to Priya, dadi turn to Sudhirji, aapki beti wakei me bohot achhi hain, iska jawab kuch bhi ho par aaj se maine isse apni poti mann liya hain, hearing such Priya took blessing from dadi.


Sabhi koi neeche ata hain kapoors ko choodne, and Neha hugs Priya tightly and said something in her ear and she smiled. After they departed sudhir and Shipraji came back to the drawing room and was discussing about today's evening. At one they are happy that Karthik's marriage is fixed and on other Priya ki shaadi ki
baat ko lekar thode se pareshaan hain. Aisa nahi hain ki Priya ki shaadi ki baat chali nahi thi par baat humesha age bar hi paye, sab ne haal chhod hi diya tha, Priya khud bhi yeh baat kismet par chood diya tha, lekin Shipraji ne kabhi nahi chhoda, akhir ma hain na, beti ka dukh unhe chhubhta tha, Priya muh se bhalei na bolti thi par uski ankhen who sab bayan kar deta tha, Priya ki sari sehliyaan settle kar gayi hain, jab bhi unhe dekhti hain Shipraji seene me kuch chhubta tha unka. On the other hand Krishnaji ka bhi wahi haal hain, unke zindagi ka sabse bada regret yeh hain ki who ram ko settle nahi kar payi, jab se business me aaya hain ram din raat bas kaam kaam aur kaam, kabhi bhi apni zindagi ko enjoy nahi kiya, kabhi kabhi toh Krishnaji ko lagta hain unhone Ram
ko kisi prison me band kar diya hain, jab bhi Ram se shaadi ke baat karne jao toh who taal deta hain, kehta hain aap sab ho na mere saath toh aur kya kisiki zaarorat hain, am happy, par who bhi ma hain Ram jitna kuch bole phir bhi ek khaalipaan uske aankhon me dikhti hain, who bhale hi kuch na kahe par Krishnaji janti hain kahin na kahin who akela hain, usse ek sahare ki ek dost ki ek
humsafar ki zaarorat hain, isi liye aaj jab Priya ko dekhne ke baad unhe laga she is perfect for her Ram, acche log hain Sharmas, aur uar se Priya me who saari khubiyan dekhne ko mili jo Krishnaji chahti thi apni bahu me ho, isi liye Ram se pooche bina shaadi ka prastaav rakh diya.


Dadi ' kya soch rahi hain Krishna?


Krishna ' beeji, kya jaldbazi me aake maine koi galat faisla toh nahi kiya na?


Dadi ' tune koi galati nahi ki hain, mera mann keh raha hain ke Priya humari ghar ki bahu banne ke liye ekdum fit hain, mujhe lagta hain who mere Golu ke liye theek hain, who samhal legi usse, tu bilkul chinta mat kar, waheguru sab theek karenge.


Jahan ek taraf gharwale excited hain inn dono ko leke wahi yeh dono apne apne thoughts me doobe hue the. Priya ko abhi bhi bohot ajeeb lag raha hain, sab kuch bohot filmy jaise ho raha hain, aisa kaise ho sakta hain, aisa nahin hain ki Priya ko shaadi nahi karni aur usse koi RAJKUMAR ki talaash hain bhi nahi, par phir bhi sab kuch itna ajeeb mehsoos ho raha hain, on the other hand Ram is equally confused and agitated, who soch hi nahi paa raha hain ke uske gharwale aise koi harkat kar sakta hain, sitting on his favourite chair, Ram was in deep thought and his eyes were also closed. Itne saal ho gaye aaj bhi usne who lamha bhool nahin paya, haala ki usse abhi koi farak nahi parta, kyun ki who bohot aage nikal aaya hain lekin phir bhi bhool nahi paya. He was so deep in his thoughts that he couldn't hear the door knock, when for the third time it knocked he came back to his senses and saw Krishnaji was standing there.


Ram ' arre ma, aap, aiyye na


Krishna ' mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi Ram


Ram  ' ha kahiye



Krishna ' main janti hoon aaj achanak se aise maine Priya ke ghar pe tumhare rishte ki baat chher diya, shayad tumhe accha nahin laga hain par mujhe aur tumhare dadi ko Priya pasand hain, humein lagta hain who tumhare liye bilkul perfect hain, mujhe lagta hain ab tumhe shaadi kar leni chahiye, bohot ho gayi responsibilities, ab yeh ghar chal sakta hain, aur tumhare saare
responsibilities khatam ho gaye hain, Rishabh business me aa gaya hain, Natasha ki shaadi ho rahi hain, main aur dadi theek hain, tumhare babuji ka sapna tumne sakaar kar diya hain, aaj jahan tumne Kapoor Industries ko leke gaye ho agar Lalaji zinda hote toh who garv se phoole nahi samate


Ram ' lekin ma, mujhe shaadi nahi karni, am happy in my own space


Krishna ' wohi toh main poonch rahi hoon tujhe shaadi kyun nahi karni?


Ram ' kyun ki mujhe nahin karni, main khush hoon, mera pariwaar mere saath hain bas mujhe aur kuchh nahi chahiye


Krishna ' ha hum sab hain tere saath par zindagi me aisa koi hona zaroori hain jo sirf tumhare liye ho, jiske saath tum apna puri zindagi share kar sakte ho, ek humsafar ki bohot zaroorat hoti hain, tere babuji jab chale gaye tab mujhe mehsoos hua maine kya khoya hain, duniya ke liye who mere pati the, mere bachhon ke pita
the lekin mere liye who mera sab se achha dost the, ek aisa hum safar jiske saath har cheez maine baati hain, aaj umar ki iss parav me aake mujhe lagta hain maine apne dost ko kho diya, apna saathi kho diya,

after sometime she again said, main aur tere dadi tujhe aettle dekhna chahte hain, I will not force you but think about it once, rest is up to u. OK, u freshen up and come to downstairs, main khana lagvata hoon.


Kapoor khandaan me ek reet Ram ke dadaji ke waqt se chala aa raha hain jo aaj bhi sab nibhate hain, ke, raat ka khana sab ek saath khate hain, koi kahin pe bhi rahe raat ko sab ek saath dinner table pe baith te hain, aur wahi ek waqt hain jab sab ek dusre ke saath baat karte hain, din bhar ki saari baatein.


Toh jab Ram neeche aya toh already dinner table pe Rishabh aur Nuts baithe hue the, Ram ko aate dekh kar they start giggling. For outside world Ram is very serious person par ghar me he is very chilled out one, Natasha being the youngest always leg pull him and in that Rishabh also join.


Nuts ' maa aaj pakora nahi banaye, bhai ko aaj sirf pakora khaane ka mann hain. Kyun bhai, Karthik se kehke Priya di ki haath ki special pakora order karu kya?


Dadi ' oye chhoti, mere Golu ko taang mat kar, kahin Priya ko bura lag gaya toh teri kheyr nahi.


Ram ' yeh kya hain, aap logon ko aur koi kaam nahi hain kya mere peeche parne ke ilava and he gets irritated.


So the topic changed and it comes to Nuts marriage, and this time Rishabh pulled her leg along with dadi, Krishnaji was smiling all the while, and Ram was thinking how happy are all looking.


After the dinner was over everyone retired to their room, Ram came to his room sat on the sofa and started to think what Krishnaji has told him, he could not come to terms that he can get married, he has crossed the age and moreover can he give that happiness to Priya, she deserves to be happy but can I do justice with her, all these ideas were travelling in his mind. The more he thinks the more
he gets confused. Lastly he decides he has to talk to Priya and only after that he can take any decision.

On the other hand in Sharma House, everyone is beaming with joy. Ghar me khushi ka mohol bann gaya hain, ek toh Kathik ka rishta tay hua hain aur upar se Priya ke liye itna achha rishta aage se chalke aya hain. Both Shipraji and Sudhirji are very excited and happy. Aaj tak Priya ke liye bohot saare rishte aye lekin ek
bhi click nahi hua, aisa nahi ke baat age nahi badi par baat beech me kahi jura nahi, Priya ab early 30's me hain, bohot kam umr se usne mehnat karna shuru kiya, aisa nahi ke ghar ke pressures the, balki who kuch karna chahti thi, kuch banna chahti thi, ghar me sabse badi isi liye parents ka sangharsh usne dekhe hain, middle class family se belong karti hain isi liye hardships kya hain ache
se janti hain, apni family ko support karti hain aur khud ka ek mukaam bhi haasil kiya hain, bade bade sapne dekhna hum middle class family afford nahin kar sakte par phir bhi sapna toh sapna hota hain, toh Priya ne bhi dekha tha, she wanted to pursue her Masters degree from abroad but that couldnot be possible but for that she don't regret. After all uske liye apne pariwaar se zyada kuch matter nahi karta hain, in fact jab bhi who sochti thi ke who abroad jayegi padai ke liye uske dil me ajeeb si loneliness aa jata tha, yeh soch ke hi usse dukh hota tha ki use apne pariwaar se dur rehna parega, who kehte hain na agar apni marzi ka hua toh achha aur agar na ho toh aur bhi achha, isi liye jab Ayesha ne bola ki usse higher studies ke liye abroad jana hain toh usne Ayesha ko mana nahi kar payi, isi bahane who apna sapna pura hota hua dikhegi.
Lekin inn sab ke bawajood, ek khaalipaan uske aankhon me dikhayi deti hain, who kabhi zahir nahi karti par agar koi gaur se dekhe toh usse pata chal jayega, who akeli hain, pariwaar hain, dost bhi hain aur kaam bhi hain par phir bhi kahin na kahin bohot akeli hain, jab bhi koi rishta toot ta hain kuch bolti nahi par uska akelapaan chalak jaata hain uski aankhon me, humesha hassti aur
muskura rehti hain woh, apne students ki beech bohot popular hain, apni papa ki jaan hain aur apni ma ki dost hain woh, Karthik ke liye badi behen toh Ayesha ke liye ma jaisi. Sab kuch hain phir bhi bohot khali khali jaisi hain.

At the dinning table everyone was discussing about wedding preparations bas Priya chup thi, who soch rahi thi jo aaj hua uske bare me. Sudhirji was observing her and said


Sudhir ' kya soch rahi hain beta? iss rishte ke bare me? dekh agar tujhe pasand hain Ram tabhi baat age baregi warna nahi. 

Shipra ' dekh beta, kuch bhi faisla karne se pehle tu ek baar Mr. Kapoor se mil le, aise hi faisla mat karna.


Priya ' pasand na pasand ki baat nahi hain papa, main bas soch rahi thi ke ekdum achanak se aise rishte ki baat chhed di unhone.


Ayesha ' di I still can't imagine Mr. Kapoor ka rishta aap ke liye aya hain, I mean he is going to me my jiju, wow!


Priya ' yeh jiju kya hain, maine abhi tak haan nahin bola


Ayesha ' toh kya hua bolengi toh zaroor


Priya ' tujhe kaise pata ke main haan bolungi


Ayesha ' kyun ki aap ke paas koi options nahin hain, aap ko haan bolna hi parega, aapne liye na sahi kam se kam mere liye toh bolna parega


Priya ' kyun?


Ayesha ' arre aap haan bolengi toh mera studies me kitna faida hoga, sochiye main THE RAM KAPOOR ki saali bann jayungi aur mujhe apne studies me kitna help ho jayega.


Priya ' Ayesha ki kaan khinchte hue (pyaar se), waah kya noble thought hain, tere studies ke chakkar main me kyun shaadi karu


Everybody started to laugh, sab ek dusre ki taang kheechne me lag gaye, and with this finishes their dinner. 



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Edited by jineejiggs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
good way of portraying character yaar .. loved the dilemma they are going through.raya time to  get married commonnn ram priya ki pakoda keliye hii haan kardoπŸ˜†..priya say yes...

conda jahan bhi hoo she is sirf anaconda 🀒 always selfish ..

looking forward for the weddinggg
thanks for pm
Edited by shamavi - 11 years ago
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awesome dear waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! thanks for the PM
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raya in kashmakash 
that part was really well done
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the way the story is heading
want to read more...
jaldi next part bhi updtae kar do na
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Ram toh haa kar he denga.But,idar bhi Ayesha apne matlab ki baat ki.
kk dadi rock. please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow, loved it, hope they dont fight and the rishta happens in the next update πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good one Jinejiggs...
keep going...

Apne wo dilemma wo kasak Priya aur Ram ki chaarcters me dikhaya hai jo log apni shaadi jaise faisle lene ke liye kitna sochte hai...
well done

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update KK & DADI rocks πŸ‘ waiting 4 nxt keep it up