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Posted: 11 years ago
here comes my next update as per promised, hope u all enjoy this part


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Khair dono apne apne soch me doobe hue the lekin unke soch me bhi ek dusre hi the, anjane me hi dono ek dusre ke bare me soch rahe the, aur dono ke hi hoton pe muskaan thi, ab raat bohot ho gaya tha, dono sochte sochte hi sone jaate hain, ab yeh dono toh chale gaye, toh humein bhi chalna chahiye, toh GOOD NIGHT everyone.



Next day in the office, everyone greeted Ram for his sagai, ab staff ko to roke par invite nahi kiya tha par sab ko pata toh chalna hi tha, aakhir sagai Ram Kapoor ki jo thi, anyways Ram ne sab ko thanks keh kar apne cabin me aa gaya. On the other hand Priya was in her college staff room where she was been congratulated by everyone, akhir sab ko pata chal hi gaya, uski aur Ram ki toh page 3 me pic bhi ayi hain, toh sabhi wahi discuss kar rahe the. Ab yeh sab Priya ko pasand nahi, woh iss tarah se apni personal life media ke samne ane dena nahi chahti thi, par kuch kar bhi nahi payi, khair dono apne apne kamon me involve ho jate hain.


Beech ke kuch din apne hisaab se guzar gaye, kuch khaas nahi hua inn dino me, atleast apne RaYa ke zindagi me toh kuch bhi nahi. Kal Sharma house me puja hain aur uske saath saath tilak ki rasm bhi, toh sab usike taiyyari me jute huye the. Priya jo aaj college se jaldi wapas aa gayi hain was helping her mother in the kitchen, actually she was preparing the Prasad for tomorrow and also was checking the menu. Though there will be only family member still they don't want any thing to be left out.


Sudhirji who was sitting in the drawing room and checking the list asked Priya is everything done or not, beta kuch chhut toh nahi gaya.


Priya ' papa kuch cheezen bazaar se lani paregi, kal subah nahi hoga, toh main ek kaam karti hoon main jake leke aati hoon.


Sudhirji ' tu ruk main jata hoon


Shipraji ' arre aap kahan jaa rahe hain, yeh list ke saath cheezen tally karni hain aur phir tilak ke rasm ka bhi toh dekhna hain, Priya beta tu ja aur jaldi ana.


Priya ' theek hain ma, main aati hoon thodi der me.


Priya bazaar ati hain aur list ke hisaab se cheezen kharid ti hain ab uske haathon me kuch zyada hi packets ho gaye the, toh woh usko leke bus stand ki taraf badti hain tabhi achank barish shuru ho jati hain, ab samne koi tree bhi nahi hain jiske neeche woh khari ho sake toh woh bheeg jati hain, woh jaldi jaldi me bus stop ati hain aur shed ke neeche khari hoti hain, tabhi achanak samne se awaaz ati hain PRIYA.


Priya samne ke taraf dekhti hain Ram apne car ki backseat kholke usse bula raha hain, pehle toh Priya chauk jati hain kyun ki usne Ram ko bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha, tabhi Ram ne kahan invitation card chhapne me thoda waqt lagega agar tab tak bheegna chahti ho toh bheeg sakti ho, yeh sunn ke Priya ko bohot ajeeb laga, socha yeh kaisa tareeka hain baat karne ka, woh kuch bolti nahi aake seat pe beyth jati hain. Ab itna sara saaman leke beythi hain toh jagah thoda kam par gaya hain toh yeh dono thoda close me beythe huye the. Tabhi Ram ne poocha itna sara samaan leke tum bus se janewali thi?


Priya ' mujhe adaat hain, waise main bus ka wait nahi kar rahi thi, barish se bachne ke liye khari thi, yeh bin mausam barish, hamesha achha sandes lata hain.


 Ram ' tumhe barish pasand hain


Priya ' bohot, kyun aap ko nahi pasand?


Ram ' I hate rains.


Priya ' qaynat ki sab se khoobsurat cheez hain yeh, I love it.


Ab iske baat koi baat ki gunjaish hi nahi bachi, Ram was thinking we are so different from each other on the other Priya was not thinking anything but was enjoying the way water droplets which were falling on the windows use mann ho raha tha ki woh barish ki boondon ke saath khele par aisa ho nahi sakta. Yehi sochte sochte woh log Sharma House aa gaye, Priya got down and asked Ram to come in, Ram was not in mood to come but Priya insist aur usne kahan ki woh baqaida invitation de rahi hain toh ana toh parega hi, yeh sunn ke Ram ne smile kar di aur he came in.


Next day all were busy with last minute preparations for puja, in the meantime Neha came there and offered for help, she has become another member of this family, both Shipraji and Sudhirji love Vikram and Neha from the core of their heart. Lag bhag sab taiyyari ho chuki thi, ab bas Panditji ka ana baki tha. In the mean time Kapoors also come and with them Vikram with his children. Ghar pura bhar gaya tha, bachhon ne toh ate hi masti karna shuru kar diya, toh Priya unn logon ke saath milkar unhe company de rahi thi aur baki sab ke saath mil bhi rahi thi. Toh tabhi Panditji aye aur puja shuru kar di. Puja khatam hua tab Panditji bole ki tilak ki rasm shuru karne ko. Sabse pehle Ram ne Karthik ko tilak kiya aur shagun bhi diya, uske baad Karthik ne Ram ko tilak kiya, jab yeh sab ho raha tha sab bohot khush the aur Natasha muskura rahi thi par Priya ke aankh me aansoo aa gaye lekin saath saath hothon pe muskaan bhi tha, yeh aansoo khushi ke the, usse lag raha tha Karthik kitna bada ho gaya hain, hamesha se Priya badi behen nahi balki ek ma banke apne dono bahi behen ko usne protect kiya hain aur aaj Karthik ek bada bhai hone ka farz nibha raha hain, usse bohot garv bhi ho raha tha Karthik par. Yeh sab sochte sochte use achanak Ram ki taraf dekha toh dekhti hain ki Ram usiko dekh raha tha ek halka sa smile hothon pe liye mano jaise keh raha hain don't worry, tumhara family ab mera hua. Yeh kaisa bandhan hain jo inn logon ke beech me hain, itne alag hain phir bhi ek dusre ko kitni achhi tareeke se samhalte hain bina kuch bole, shayad isse hi companionship kehte hain.


Ab bhai puja khatam ho gayi thi, aur tilak ki rasm bhi, ab ayi Prasad lene ki bari, toh Prasad Priya baant rahi thi toh tabhi Natasha wahan ati hain aur kehti hain Priya main madad karu kuch? Priya ko bohot achha lagta hain aur woh haan kehti hain. Isi beech Neha bhi aa jati hain aur teeno milke Prasad baantne lagte hain. Prasad me fruits the, thoda dry fruits bhi the aur Sharma House ka all time famous halwa tha aur woh bhi suji ka, jo Priya ne banaya tha. Toh sabhi Prasad enjoy kar rahe the par Ram ko toh fruits pasand hi nahi, lekin woh sab ke samne mana bhi nahi kar paa raha tha toh tabhi usne apne saare fruits Vikram ko thama diya aur sirf dry fruits aur halwa khane laga, (ha ha Ramji aapka size aise hi nahi hua hain, ek toh dry fruits ki calorie aur upar se itna sara meetha, net result toh aisa ayega hi na, khair let's not discuss this waise bhi mujhe Ram Kapoor jaise hain waise hi BADE ACHHE LAGTE HAIN)


Sabne halwe ki bohot tareef ki toh tabhi Shipraji ne kahan ki yeh unki family ka speciality hain aur yeh Priya ne banaya hain. Ram bade maze se halwa khaa hi raha tha ke jab usne suna yeh Priya ne banaya hain toh usne aur relish karna shuru kar diya jaise mano ke yeh akhri niwala hain unn ke liye.


Ab Prasad ki baari toh ho gayi, toh saare beyth ke baatein kar rahe hote hain, aur Priya kitchen me Neha ke saath milke puriyan bana rahi hoti hain.


Neha ' Priya tumko apna sagaiwali ring kaisa laga?


Priya muskurate hue Neha ko kahan ke tumhe kaise pata chala ke maine yeh''.


Neha smile karte hue boli ke maine uss din tumhe dekh liya tha, toh pasand ayi na?


Priya ne thanks kahan aur dono hasne lage.


Baki bahar sab beyth ke shaadi ki baat kar rahe hote hain, toh tabhi Neha aake kehti hain ke dinner ready hain toh sabhi dinning table me aate hain. Ab itne saare log toh fit nahi ayenge wahan, toh dadi, Krishnaji aur Shipraji aur Vikram ke teen bachhe wahan beythe hain aur baki sab sofe pe beythe hain. Menu bohot simple sa tha par bohot tasty tha. Puri, chholey, paneer matar, alu ghobi, veg pulao aur boondi ka raita, iske saath meethe me kheer tha. Sab ko khana bohot pasand aya, lekin Ram ko toh non veg ke bina khana, khana hi nahi lagta par phir bhi usko aaj ka khana bohot tasty laga toh usne thoda zyada hi kha liya, jab sweet dish ki bari ayi toh usne toh mano jaise uss par tut hi para, ek toh uska bohot strong sweet tooth hain aur upar se uska favourite hain kheer toh he couldn't control himself. Anyways the food were really tasty and everyone enjoyed it. Ab waqt tha jane ka toh phir Priya aur Karthik ne dadi aur Krishnaji ke peyr chhuye aur Neha ne Priya ko hug kiya, Vikram ke teen shaitanon ne bhi Priya ko hug kiya aur Priya ne unn teeno ko  gifts diya aur woh bhi Priya ko ek bada wala hug diya aur chale gaye. Sab bohot khush the kyunki sab kaam shanti se nipat gaya, ab shaadi me sirf 3 haafte baki hain, toh uski taiyyari shuru karni paregi.   


Ab jitna shaadi ki waqt nazdeek ate jaa raha hain utni hi ghabrahat badti jaa rahi hain apni RaYa ko, lekin Natasha aur Karthik me bechaini aur basabri bar rahi hain, ab woh dono ek pal ke liye bhi ek dusre se juda nahi reh pate hain. Jahan yeh dono apne honeymoon ke destination discuss kar rahe hain wahin pe Ram ne apni ek bohot bari business deal ke liye out of India jane ki soch raha hain aur woh shayad usse shadi ke turant baad hi jana parega. Uske liye apne business se important kuch bhi nahi hain. Yeh business deal woh age bhi kar sakta tha par sirf chhoti ke wajah se usne isse thoda sa postponed kar diya aur udhar Priya ko bhi apne college ke exams ko leke pareshaan hain, kyunki uske shaai ke baad hi uska college ka exam shuru honewala hain, toh basically yeh dono apne kaam me hi busy ho gaye hain ke honeymoon ke bare me sochne ka fursat tak nahi hain.


Ab sab taiyyarion me lage hain, kuch khaas changes nahi huan hain jaise sab chal raha tha waise hi chal raha hain, almost all things have been purchased sirf last minute final checking ho raha hain. Shaadi wali costume bhi ready hoke aa gayi hain aur Priya ne usse trial bhi de diya hain, udhar Natasha ne bhi trial kar diya hain aur iss bar 10th time trial diya hain. Karthik ki sherwani bhi ek dum ready hain sirf Ram ki sherwani me problem hain, use woh fit nahi aa raha hain. Jab yeh scenes chal rahe the tab Vikram aur Neha Ram ke kamre me hi the, woh dono isko trial de rahe the, Ram ko sherwani fit nahi aya toh Neha bharak gayi, kya fatty, tum bhi, ab shaadi tak strict dieting karoge tum.


Ram ' arre dekh Vikram, tu apni biwi ko samhal, mujhe dieting weiting nahi karna.


Neha ' karna toh parega, tum din bar din balloon hote ja rahe ho, iske baad tumhara naam Ram Kapoor se change karke Balloon Kapoor rakh dungi.


Ram ' abbe oyyyeehh, teri tarah nahi hoon main, Punjabi hoon, toh kya hua thoda mota hoon, khate pite ghar ka lagta hoon, teri tarah nahi ke sukhe patte ki tarah


Ab Vikram inn dono ko shaant karwane ka koshish karte hue kehta hain, guys, ab jhagda karne se kya fayda? Pehle yeh socho iska sherwaani ka kya kare.


Neha ' karna kya hain abhi chalo aur isko phir se alter karo


Ram ' mujhe kahin nahi jana.


Vikram ' jana toh parega, ab chal, abbe utth na, haath kheench ke uthha ta hain usko.


Threesome went to the mall and there the sherwaani gets altered and after 2 hours it fits Ram. Now all were bored and went to the cafeteria to eat. Ram who was about to order a three layered favourite pastry for him, suddenly was stopped by Neha and said to the waiter that this will be all.


Ram who was staring at her in disbelief and was making puppy face said that he wants the pastry.


Neha gave him a stern look and said that he is on diet and for next 3 weeks he will be on diet.


Ab Ram ki patience jawab de gayi, usne kahan yeh kya hain yaar, ab main apna man pasand cheez kha bhi nahi paunga iss shaadi ke chakkar me


Vikram haste hue kehta hain Ram ko ke ab itni si sacrifice toh kar hi sakta hain Priya ko pane ke liye.


Ram who was angry by now said main kyun karu sacrifice aur waise bhi I am a Punjabi, main oxygen ke bagair jee sakta hoon par ghee aur makhhan ke bagair nahi.


(sorry guys, I know this line is quoted from the serial, but I just love the scene isi liye, scene ko nahi sirf yeh dialogue ko incorporate kar rahi hoon, I love the way Ram enacted in this scene, hope u don't have any objection with this, once again SORRY for this


I know this is a short update, but next update will be a long one. Hope u all enjoy this update and guyz please comment and if u like it then please hit the "LIKE" button. will continue and may be in next update shaadi rasm will come, so enjoy, keep reading and commenting




Edited by jineejiggs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyee meir golu putta ko  moutu kaha😭 😆 oye bechara.. kana kilado yaar motu hain phir bhi hot hain naaa chalega... continue sooon😉
Edited by shamavi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arre you have to  include always  the lines spoken by RaYa and Nevik in the season1,they are so apt,so funny and so relatable to any scene in any FF or Os.
You are very good.keep it up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh loved it, please continue soon...i like this ff more for the reason that it has all season 1 scenes. 😊 Thanks for writing from the beginning😊 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update didi👍🏼...aap ki har ek update mein ek apnapan mehsoos kiya ja sakta hai😊...you write from the reader's perspective and view👏...really love that approach😃...keep rocking..⭐️Edited by TVserialfreak - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
tooo good
amazing write up😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
lvly update..i like it because of it reminding me season 1 which is very nyc..cntinue soon nd thankx for PMEdited by anuraya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aapne likka tha ki seaon 1 aapko bahut pasand hai. same here.
isiliye aapke update mein season 1 ki jhalak rehti hai.
don't worry, we like it very much.
love all the scene.
puja scene is very good. then diet scene.
update soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE+FUNNY UPDATE...CONTINUE SOON.