Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for pming me this was so freaking adorable!!!! Loved how he knew everything about her!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice 1st os, arnav and khushi were really cute 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey when i started to read the os i thought it will go up to some 3 to 5 chapters but when you ended it in one page i was kind of disappointed

this one page had so much of detail i loved every line of it

arnav being an gentleman was good too but if you could make this more elaborate and write the chapters as how khushi and kamya met and how everyday things happened and how they ended up in the disco and arnav noticing her and asking her for dance and then her sadness of being a second fiddle and then her receiving flowers and other gifts from unknown person finally arnav getting his di and family to come to her house and propose her

buying and doing all the things which she wanted as a child girl woman

please would you do that for all of your fans it is your idea please give us the wonderful piece of work as always
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely and so much valentine day story
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet ...very sweet...
After all only they were meant to be together...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a cute and sweet OS.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry I am late. But loved this piece totally. Actually would have liked a short story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful and interesting OS! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anony_mous


Thank you all SO SO SO much for appreciating this OS. Means a lot to me. I have got some very sincere feedback from you guys and I really value it. Shall keep all that in mind in my next OS. I am not planning to convert it to SS for a few reasons:


1. I haven't thought it THAT through that I can write 20-25 chapters on it :D

2. I can take only so much of nice Arnav Singh Raizada. For me he is always better when he is flawed and complicated!!

3. I already have a few idea bubbling in my head, so wanna pen them first :)


Please let me know : Idea of my next OS which I am planning is based on a TV couple of an American political sitcom. I want to take a dialogue or two as it is from that too. Please let me know that if you guys know of some rule on the forum that stops me from doing that. I will give due credits. Does that come under Plagiarism or not because as far as I have read the rules I can write it with proper credits. Any help will be welcomed!!



OMG do you mean scandal??? I LOVE THAT SHOW! Infact I was thinking listening to some of the lines Fitz says to Olivia that it would be perfect for Arnav and Khushi. DO IT! I don't think its plagiarism as long as you acknowledge it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: trisasak


OMG do you mean scandal??? I LOVE THAT SHOW! Infact I was thinking listening to some of the lines Fitz says to Olivia that it would be perfect for Arnav and Khushi. DO IT! I don't think its plagiarism as long as you acknowledge it!


NO. Its called The West Wing!
But I have written half of it and have managed to surprisingly avoid any similarity between the show and my OS so for, so not even sure if I'll have to worry about Plagiarism :)


Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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