Valentine's Special OS: Bin tere kya hai jeena.. - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
fantastic OS :) loved every word of it
it was mahical  just like ArNi
loved this line "Aur pyaar ka izhaar karne ke liye ya usse celebrate karne ke liye, hum saal mein ek din ka intezaar kyun karein? Ab yeh to naainsaafi hogi, hai na..'"
loved his valentine's day surprise for her :) and then the cake part was really cute...
their conversation in the hospital was mind blowing :) and then her comment on his chai habit...
awww he cooked food for her 😃 and loved the sindoor scene
the kiss was so romantic ❤️
i am glad that she survived in your story :)
the way you have portrayed arjun's emotions and pain was just beautiful..
the song was amazing and the VM was fantastic...
ArNi are just too adorable 
thank you so much for writing ArNi OS on valentines' day
thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Avantika I just watched the VM, it fantastic, and all the pictures are great. I loved the song you chose for it too, it's perfect.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Wow..Great..love it...
Amaizing..Just awsome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My dear Avantika,

I have been so taken up with your Lady in Red  that I  had almost forgotten how well you can handle pure love stories. Not romance, that over-used word, not passion, not overt sensuality, but simple, enduring, all encompassing love. The kind of love that can defeat near death, and pull the loved one back to the living by sheer force of will. Like the love of Savitri for Satyavan. So here you have Arjun as  a sort of male version of Savitri, and how beautifully it works!

This one is so redolent of that kind of love that it warms the heart. I generally have no use for these over-commercialised events like Valentine's Day, or for the Karan Johar trademark excess in accessories - heart-shaped red balloons, creamy cakes, and the lot. But your Roshni and Arjun are  so genuinely in love that I forgive her (and you) even all this tripe.

I have always loved the flashbacks with Roshni, which are the only times Arjun comes alive, when his unexpected smile is so sweet as to be shocking. She is not just very beautiful, lively, fully alive. She is all woman, very feminine, and yet so much her own person, secure in her beliefs and in her power over him.

How can anyone expect him to forget such a woman, even after her death, and pass on to another - Riya or someone else? I would have no regard for him if he had done that. So I am truly happy that you have here rescued him from the slough of despond and given him back his love, and thus his life.  I am not at all a mushy romantic, but this was one happy ending that I cheered unreservedly.

Just one doubt: why would his colleagues in the police mock his steadfast devotion to his comatose wife? It sounds very unfeeling, indeed cruel, and downright ugly.

Shyamala Aunty

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Part 3..   (Now this is the Valentine's Special bit.. ) 😉😳



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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Not fair Di!

I had been smiling by the end of the update. But then the video. I had tears at the end. Anyways, I loved it. You are right. The love lives on in our hearts.  
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
avantika di when i first read your note i was super glad that u took  an initiative to write about arni😊
but as i read futher i started feeling wrenched...when i realized that this os may just end in he just reminiscing those beautiful memories...ofcource those memories brought a smile on my face...i loved the way u wrote but u know deep down i felt bad that he could just remember those sweet memories😭
but when i proceeded to part 4 i had to read the initial few lines twice to make sense of what was written...she was alive...yes ALIVE😃...i was enthralled 😃
each n every emotion was superbly described...n the unusual idea of roshni not being dead but in coma was the icing on the cake😊
 u have made me fall in love with Arni all the more...😃
thank you so much avantika di for this beautiful story!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
beautiful
lovd every bit of it
👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Awww dear tat take ma heart away yaar❤️

cant describe in words ke mjhe kitna acha laga hai yeh emotional.sweet,cute,romantic etc etc etc...
i just loved it...
hats off to yor writting dear👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Wow!!! Superb OS!!!
Beautifully written!!!
Cute & sweet!!!
Love ur writing!!!
The vm was awesome!!!
Loved it!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Lovely and very emotional love story😭
you are right, Arjun and Roshni shared such a sweet closeness, and their love was always so pure, even i felt the same thing when watching the FBs
Kash as you wrote, really Roshni is still alive, and that Arjun would finally be happy
And i also think that Arjun might never forget Roshni, she meant his whole life😳
and you wrote so beautifully about it, about their love, about Arjun's pain when she was in coma, and his joy when she awoke😊
Lovely Valentine gift Avantika😊