REGRET virika SS (finished) on page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi everyone i came up with the idea of OS
 
the topic is same virika fight over swamini...
 
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jeev in mind: virenji ne mere 1 baar bhi bt nhi sunni woh tou ab mere shakaal b nhi dekhna chahte he hates me๐Ÿ˜ญ mjhe yakein nhi horha yeh wohi virenji hain jo mjhse 2 min bt kiye bagair b nhi reh sakte the aur ab woh mere shakaal tk nhi dekhna chahte  
kya mere itni badi galti hai...? kse mae unhein samjhoun ka yeh sab mene jaan poch kr nhi kya... kya woh mjhe sirf itna hi jante hain.. kya itna hi pyaar woh mjhse karty hain... kya unka bharoosa itna kamzoor tha... woh sub jhoot tha jo woh aj tk mjhe kehte the...
 
ab jab unko mere parvah hi nhi hai aur na woh mere sath rehna chahte hain tou mae khud hi yahan sae, subki zindagi sae bht dour chali jaounge...
 
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viren in mind: how could jeevika do this mjhe usse yeh umeed nhi thi mene uspar bharosa kya tha usse mana kya tha badi maa ko sub batane sae par phr b usne sub kuch bari maa ko bata dya agar badi maa ko kch bhi hua tou i will never forgave her...
 
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viren was in swamini room came out of his thought when he heard swamini voice
 
v: badi maa ap theek tou haina
s: han ab hum theek hain
nurse ab inki halaat pehle sae kafi behter hai u don't worry
v: thank u nurse he was so happpy๐Ÿ˜Š
 
viren called whole family there..
 
bauji: swamini beta ab tm kse mehsoos kr rhi ho
s: hum theek hain
k: haini did ap jaldi sae thk hojaein apke bina blkl maza nhi ata..
swamini smiles..
they had there small chit chat
after a while swamini said
 
s: bauji hamein ap sb se 1 bt krni hai
b: han bolo beta
s: bauji humse bht badi galti hogae hai (whe nshe was saying this jeevika was passing frm there she also heared wht swamini said)
b: kse galti?
s: jeevika ko is ghr ki bahu bana kr viren humne tmhare zindagi kharab kr di 1 aise jhooti aur chalbaz ladki sae shadi karwa kr hum pata nhi kse uske masoomiat ka jaal mae agae
 
everyone was shocked after hearing her specially jeevika she was unable to here her
 
s: viren tm jante ho usne kitna bada ilzam hamare bete karan pr lagya hai.. woh apne ap ko samjhte kya hai.. viren humein ab uspr bharosa nhi hai
viren tmhein hum pr bharosa haina hum sach keh rhai hain usne humse yeh sb kaha hai aur hum yeh b jante hain woh ro kr sbko apne batoun ka yakein dila skti hai bt humein nhi
viren tm b uski bataoun pr bharosa mt krna woh jhooti hai viren tmhein hum pr bharosa haina?? hum sach keh rhai hain
 
viren was shocked
 
v: badi maa ap aram karain ap ka lye abhi zyada batein krna acha nhi hai
s: nhi pehle tm humein btao woh jhoot bol rhi haina? tmhein b uspar bharosa nhi haina??
 
viren was confused wht do know
so finally he said YES to console her
 
every one was shocked so was jeevika she was crying when dadaji saw her he was feeling bad for her knw everyone saw her except swamini
jeevika ran frm there manvi n virat also follows her
 
jeevika went in her room n locked it
m: di plz darwaza kholo bt didn't get any rply
finally jeevika said mannu plz leave me alone PLZ
 
know everyone was in living area n sad
 
m: jiju mjhe apse yeh umeed nhi thi apne kitne asaani sae di ko jhoota thera dya kya itna bharosa karte the ap unpar u don't deserve my diii apko woh jhooti lagti hain i hate u... n she went in her room
 
v: bhai apne bht galat kya bhabhi ka sath mene apki aur bhabhi ki bt suni thi...!!
 
he also left frm there
 
bauji: viren beta hum jante hain tm swamini ka lea bht pareshan ho tm jao jakar jeevika sae bt karo hum jante hain woh aise nhi hai
v: nhi bauji is br uski galti hai... n he left
 
in night every one was sleeping
 
jeev with her bag
j: ab mere koi jagah nhi hai mae ja rhi hn bht dour subki zindagi sae hamesha ka lye...
and she left with memories...
 
1 year later...
 
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plz let me know tht did u all liked it??? dont forget to press like tab n dont forget to leave comment
 
i want honest reviews
 
everysort of comments r welcumed๐Ÿ˜†
 
Index:
part 1 page 1
part 2 page 8
part 3 page 13
part 4 page 19
part 5 page 24
Thank u post at page # 34
last part page 36
imp note at page 42
Bonus part at page 46
 
 
virika FF link
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres, awhh its so sad, I hope viren has been suffering without her, please continue and pm,, really good start ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why stop there? Why?
This is amazing, Poor Jeevs ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshabfd1

Unres, awhh its so sad, I hope viren has been suffering without her, please continue and pm,, really good start ๐Ÿ˜Š

thanxs ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HappyDayDasies

Why stop there? Why?
This is amazing, Poor Jeevs ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Continue soon.

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thanxs for liking๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg you have to continue like today i mean like right now!!!!!

im so glued to this story plz plz plz plz plz!!!!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kays94

omg you have to continue like today i mean like right now!!!!!


im so glued to this story plz plz plz plz plz!!!!! 

thank u so much for liking hahah not so soon๐Ÿ˜† w8tng for comments ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanxs๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start...
Plz pm me when u continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it !
Feel so bad for Jeevika.
Please continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š