hi everyone i came up with the idea of OS
the topic is same virika fight over swamini...
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jeev in mind: virenji ne mere 1 baar bhi bt nhi sunni woh tou ab mere shakaal b nhi dekhna chahte he hates me๐ญ mjhe yakein nhi horha yeh wohi virenji hain jo mjhse 2 min bt kiye bagair b nhi reh sakte the aur ab woh mere shakaal tk nhi dekhna chahte
kya mere itni badi galti hai...? kse mae unhein samjhoun ka yeh sab mene jaan poch kr nhi kya... kya woh mjhe sirf itna hi jante hain.. kya itna hi pyaar woh mjhse karty hain... kya unka bharoosa itna kamzoor tha... woh sub jhoot tha jo woh aj tk mjhe kehte the...
ab jab unko mere parvah hi nhi hai aur na woh mere sath rehna chahte hain tou mae khud hi yahan sae, subki zindagi sae bht dour chali jaounge...
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viren in mind: how could jeevika do this mjhe usse yeh umeed nhi thi mene uspar bharosa kya tha usse mana kya tha badi maa ko sub batane sae par phr b usne sub kuch bari maa ko bata dya agar badi maa ko kch bhi hua tou i will never forgave her...
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viren was in swamini room came out of his thought when he heard swamini voice
v: badi maa ap theek tou haina
s: han ab hum theek hain
nurse ab inki halaat pehle sae kafi behter hai u don't worry
v: thank u nurse he was so happpy๐
viren called whole family there..
bauji: swamini beta ab tm kse mehsoos kr rhi ho
s: hum theek hain
k: haini did ap jaldi sae thk hojaein apke bina blkl maza nhi ata..
swamini smiles..
they had there small chit chat
after a while swamini said
s: bauji hamein ap sb se 1 bt krni hai
b: han bolo beta
s: bauji humse bht badi galti hogae hai (whe nshe was saying this jeevika was passing frm there she also heared wht swamini said)
b: kse galti?
s: jeevika ko is ghr ki bahu bana kr viren humne tmhare zindagi kharab kr di 1 aise jhooti aur chalbaz ladki sae shadi karwa kr hum pata nhi kse uske masoomiat ka jaal mae agae
everyone was shocked after hearing her specially jeevika she was unable to here her
s: viren tm jante ho usne kitna bada ilzam hamare bete karan pr lagya hai.. woh apne ap ko samjhte kya hai.. viren humein ab uspr bharosa nhi hai
viren tmhein hum pr bharosa haina hum sach keh rhai hain usne humse yeh sb kaha hai aur hum yeh b jante hain woh ro kr sbko apne batoun ka yakein dila skti hai bt humein nhi
viren tm b uski bataoun pr bharosa mt krna woh jhooti hai viren tmhein hum pr bharosa haina?? hum sach keh rhai hain
viren was shocked
v: badi maa ap aram karain ap ka lye abhi zyada batein krna acha nhi hai
s: nhi pehle tm humein btao woh jhoot bol rhi haina? tmhein b uspar bharosa nhi haina??
viren was confused wht do know
so finally he said YES to console her
every one was shocked so was jeevika she was crying when dadaji saw her he was feeling bad for her knw everyone saw her except swamini
jeevika ran frm there manvi n virat also follows her
jeevika went in her room n locked it
m: di plz darwaza kholo bt didn't get any rply
finally jeevika said mannu plz leave me alone PLZ
know everyone was in living area n sad
m: jiju mjhe apse yeh umeed nhi thi apne kitne asaani sae di ko jhoota thera dya kya itna bharosa karte the ap unpar u don't deserve my diii apko woh jhooti lagti hain i hate u... n she went in her room
v: bhai apne bht galat kya bhabhi ka sath mene apki aur bhabhi ki bt suni thi...!!
he also left frm there
bauji: viren beta hum jante hain tm swamini ka lea bht pareshan ho tm jao jakar jeevika sae bt karo hum jante hain woh aise nhi hai
v: nhi bauji is br uski galti hai... n he left
in night every one was sleeping
jeev with her bag
j: ab mere koi jagah nhi hai mae ja rhi hn bht dour subki zindagi sae hamesha ka lye...
and she left with memories...
1 year later...
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everysort of comments r welcumed๐
Index:
part 1 page 1
part 2 page 8
part 3 page 13
part 4 page 19
part 5 page 24
Thank u post at page # 34
last part page 36
imp note at page 42
Bonus part at page 46
virika FF link
Edited by koolgurl - 11 years ago
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