Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 5

Congrats on the new thread

Lovely update.. can't wait 2 c what's gonna happen in the party

congrats for new thread!
awesome loved it!!

Nice part. Looking fwd for the party.Edited by bhaktiii - 11 years ago

Congragulations on New thread;)



Nice Update!

I enjoyed the description of each of their reactions--Khushi,Arnav,Anjali-on witnessing glued Payal and Akash with their mouths.😆

So,only one half of truth is out i.e. payal being fixed in proposal with Ahem.Khushi rishta truth yet to be out.I can already visualise Arnav exploding.😆SO am very much gearing up for the party,Looks to be dhamakedar already.

Great Job!:DEdited by GrumpyBee - 11 years ago

congrats on new thread ...
great update

Thank you for the update.  I was beginning to think we had been abandoned...

wowww!!!
loved the update!!

congrats on new thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n about the update...it was really nice...
w8ng for next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by jisa - 11 years ago

This was a very 'feel-good' read, if you know what I mean.
Everyone was in character, except of course Payal. Arnav's sarcasm and Khushi's ambivalence were both very well illustrated.

I have a lot more to say in appreciation, but it's past midnight here and I'm horribly sleepy, so I'll edit tomorrow.
😊

Edited by Cantthinkofone - 11 years ago