Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 3

Party mein Anjali ji Kokila ji ko keya gul khilaenge ? 😉😆 Edited by sadianabil - 11 years ago

The only shortcoming ...it was too short !  But lovely nonetheless ...and well picked up from the last writer...

Throughout the update you've used varied ways to describe Payal and Aakash kissing. That was very creative of you.

Anjali's dialogues were the funniest.

Now V has to come up with a plan to justify the party!

What a challenge! Great update. Flawlessly written

Awesome update! It was funny too! The FF is turning out to be quite interesting... looking forward to more from you all amazing authors...

AN AWESOME AND HILARIOUS UPDATE.
GOD ARNAV ANJALI AND KHUSHI THE WHOLE TRIO CAUGHT THEM IN ACTION.
AND ARNAV WAS TEASING KHUSHI LIKE HELL.
I GUESS ARNAV WILL BE WAY MORE INFURIATED WHEN HE COMES TO KNOW ABOUT KHUSHIS FIXED RISHTA.

JIGAR KA TO ASR JIGAR HI NIKALDEGA. 😆

I have a lot of catching up to do ;(

Updated in page 1Edited by Omoraboti - 11 years ago

I have been stalking this fan fiction since I found it waiting for an update. Pria, you can wing it any day of the week!!! Great fun writing, all authors. Thank you

Good one Priya. Interesting chapter.

I love and adore this FF. It is so much fun to read this FF. Truly, I really salute all the writers. I think this is the first FF I have ever read with so many writers, and has surpassed all my expectations. You have given a completely different angle to the story. And so far, I am loving it. I am also loving the fact that I get to see different types of nuances of each writer. For all of u a big hug!! 🤗