FF-Seduced in the Dark(ch-12/pg-127)*24th FEB*

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                       SEDUCED IN THE DARK 




Character Sketch



Rishabh Kundra aka RK - owns ' Kundra chain of 5Star Hotels ' . The biggest businessman currently running 15 hotels in different parts of India . Hot , Muscular , strong headed but Dark in his personality . He never let's anyone come close to him . Achiever at a young age of 26 he's every women's dream , but RK the hottest bachelor in town is haunted by his Dark past every minute of his life due to which he just believes in just one night stands .


Madhubala Mallik -22 , just finished her Management degree and is finding a nice job for herself . A sweet , simple yet Reserved girl . Believes in her dreams and is waiting to fall in love with her Mr. Perfect ! She is an epitome of beauty with big almond eyes and luscious lips she can capture anyones heart in one go . But she's just waiting for her Mr. Perfect .

Deepali - RK's Mumbai Hotel's receptionist ... Sexy and witty . Never leaves a chance to pounce on RK . Has slept with a million times but now wants to marry him and get all luxuries in the world .

Rest all characters are as follows -

Bittuji - RK's PR ( Public Relations )

Radha - RK's Mom

Bhatia and Sikky - RK's Step dad and brother

Padmini and Shamsher Mallik - Madhubala"s Parents

Trishna - Madhubala's elder sister

Roma - Madhubala's Aunt

Mostly in my writings , the family members don't have much role to play I mostly stick to the main leads except for a few short scenes wherein the family is required .😛

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                                                                     SNEAK PEAK
                    

Ever since she walked in to my cabin struggling with the papers in her file . I felt a strange sensation creep into my whole body .

I couldn't stop staring at those deep brown eyes . They had so much of Love in them . And nervousness ..

Her shivering Pink Lips wanting to be touched ...

Her lean figure covered with a high waisted Black skirt and Golden satin blouse , hair tied up in a neat tail, just a lock covering a forehead fallin onto her eyes .


Her milky white complexion

Is she for Real I wondered ?

I got up from my leather chair

And in no time I walked towards her and held her by her waist tightly

Her eyes widened
And her mouth opened up to say something

When I placed my lips on hers before she could utter a word

I kissed her Passionately with all my strength,  I tasted her with my tongue and held her even more tightly pressing myself on to her

I didn't want to stop

I wanted to taste her
In and out


When suddenly

I was disturbed

RK sir ?!!!


Sir ??!

Hello !!????

I'm Madhubala Mallik !!

Mr . Kundra ? !!


And I snapped out of my thoughts

Crap !!!! I was day dreaming .

I need to stay away from her . I NEED TO STAY AWAY !

Please have a seat Miss Mallik .




NOTE - Please let me know what u guys think about it ?!! Should I continue or not ?!!!! Please leave ur comments ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me 1st me 1st me 1st ðŸ˜†
Congrats fr the New FF Zara 🥳
Concept sounds damn good. Super liked..!!
Cant wait 2 read 1st part...!!
Cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome blossom!do pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Concept & CS..Loved it..Its different..Can't wait to read more..Plzz continue soon..Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting FF dear.
And what a super hot title..! 😆
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Ohmygod Zarooo...I'm actually excited! !

I love the character sketches! And I want to know about RK's past! Love how he's a business man :)
Ewww Dips...slept with him...😡

The sneak peek was exciting! RK already fantasizing over Madhu haaha! Love it! Can't wait to read more!

I'm sad I wasn't first...:(
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Superbb start.. Plzz plzz update soon.. Excited fr readng it.. :)
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nice concept plz continue..
Posted: 11 years ago
continue it dear, title is nyc. love dark theme stories. update soon