ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5)

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Ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Hey 😊

So sorry for commenting so super late. Just read the prologue and the first chapter today and simply loved it! I tried to look into the family tree, but I think I would want to just read the story to understand it better, I always prefer it that way :D

Okay now coming to the chapter... The prologue was so interesting and well written. And even though there was no mention of Arnav or Khushi, it really interested me. Not confusing at all...don't worry about it 😊 But I must mention that since I din't really study the family tree, at first I thought that Khushi was Thapa's granddaughter. But she clearly isn't.

Now coming to Chapter 1...I really liked Shyam Jha's entry. Loved how Khushi fooled him :D She's so badass, I think I'm in love with her already. Really waiting for her to arrive in India now, and of course, Arnav's entry 😃

And thank you for this story, It was really intriguing to read it. I love a story with a lot of detailed characters, with proper justification and you din't fail to provide it.

Also, It felt like I was reading a novel. And right from the prologue I knew that this was going to be good stuff!

Cheers!