||~Something About You~||#5 *COMPLETED* - Page 2

Had been waiting for this update. Came tothe forum this morning only for your update. Loved the meeting at the door. Typiczl Arnav! Not caring about the world when it comes to what he wants. Waiting esgerly for the next installment.

U're on roll girl!!
I loved the update!! Nothing happening but you want to read it on and on...
I love weddings!!! Cant wait!:D

Edited;Edited by Debarati7 - 11 years ago

Ha ha ha ha

 

i can only imagine this

 

khushi singing this song to arnav

 

farah dont throw chappal at me

 

 

🤣

Nazar mein tu hi tu hai

Tu meri Timbaktu hai

Oye boy Oye boy arnav

Tune dil ki baazi maar li

Mere ird-gird na ghooma kar

Mera haath-vaath na chooma kar

Tere scent-vent ki khushboo mein

Main khoyi khoyi si rehti hoon

Mujhe sab log chhedte rehte

Main soyi soyi si rehti hoon

superb update acidity wala, dhak dhak dhak

I had a lovely start to my day thanks to your update! 😊Edited by _disha_ - 11 years ago

Lovely interaction between arshi! But could not understand 1 thing. Why Rohan has to move to a new house? Why doesn't he live in Nikunja with Anjali after marriage? Is Anjali insisting him to move to a new house after marriage leaving Nikunja and his parents behind? If not then I seriously did not get the logic behind Rohan's moving to a new house with Anjali which leads to selling off Nikunja as Shashi Garima alone wont be able to bear the maintenance of it! I really dont like the idea of selling the house only coz Rohan and Anjali wanted to shift to a new home most probably gifted by Arnav (i read in previous chapters where Khushi was indignant towards Anjali initially about it ) . Whatever it seemed so selfish of Anjali and Rohan to me !

awesome update

My apologies Farah for the late comment but hey I wanted to tell you that you have a wonderful style of writing which which transports the readers right into the scenes. Absolutely love your rich vocab. I do find your character Arnav tooo sex minded 😆 but I guess that is what you want him to be. I loved the explanations you gave throughout the FFbut the only one I wasnt quite convinced with, was the one for Nikunja.

 

Why would Arnav want to pay and send his sis to live far away when he can have her next door? Shouldnt he do everything possible to ensure she stays close by and easily accesible to him and family? Rather he should be gifting a far away property as an investment property to Anjali so she can get returns from it that might help keep Nikunja and his Di close by. Anyhow thats my practical thought on the storyline but you are the writer, hence I don't mind going with what ever you have in mind. I read your FF for the pleasure of reading great text and expressive writing and if the story is strong, that is like an icing on the cake.😉

Edited by Shariqa_here - 11 years ago

Absolutely wonderful, have recommended your story to several friends...this needs to be shared...

The whole door scene bought back the memories of the drama! It was so sweet and Khushi had a momentary lapse and almost gave in to Arnav's touch at the end. Its going to be really interesting to read how these two are going to behave in front of the families since they will be meeting frequently because of weddings😊 and while serving tea Khushi's resolution to avoid looking at Arnav as a way of getting back to him, but failing as a result of her caring nature beating everything, that was a really nice scene, and you write so descriptively could imagine everything! So finally it's decided they will be selling the nikunja even though verbal consent wasn't given.. I have a feeling it will end up been Khushi's some how thanks to a certain Raizda😉 and too sure he won't like Khushi leaving Delhi, so lets see how you are planning on bringing all these factors together😊