Originally posted by: herms_angel
Another beautifully written part, Mahi! Tugs straight on your heartstrings. <3 Don't really have much to say because its done really well. By the way, is it just me or others took time to digest Dean saying 'I love you' to Emery? I couldn't believe its DEAN. 😆
Originally posted by: -Mystery-
@Sayanti - It was a very heart breaking scene for me to write too. I don't even have a count of how many times I had to go back and make changes. I'm glad you liked the simplicity of the scene. That's how it was meant to be and without any melodrama, that should be enough to tug at your heartstrings. Glad you like the title! Thank you! Took me long enough to come up with it.@Husna - Thank you! And double thanks for bringing up Dean saying 'I love you' to Emery. I must've spent at least 3 hours off and on just contemplating if I wanted him to say those words or not... in the end, I decided that he should. There's no point is writing a story if your characters end exactly the way they began. Part of the point of this story is to show that change in Dean. I hope that the transformation was believable from the beginning to this chapter. I do believe that if Dean really fell in love with someone like Emery, he would hold on to her. And if he thinks that maybe he can hold onto her by saying those three words, he would say them. We know that Dean is not very verbal with this feelings, that's why he hugs people a lot. But at this point, he also knew that Emery was determined to leave, nothing would stop her. He just wanted to make sure that she would come back... and if this was the only thing that would help, then so be it.
Originally posted by: -Mystery-
@Sayanti - It was a very heart breaking scene for me to write too. I don't even have a count of how many times I had to go back and make changes. I'm glad you liked the simplicity of the scene. That's how it was meant to be and without any melodrama, that should be enough to tug at your heartstrings. Glad you like the title! Thank you! Took me long enough to come up with it.@Juliet - Thank you! Yes, Emery leaving is nothing to cherish but I think it was necessary. This is what anyone who loves someone too much would do. More coming up soon.@Ruchi - Thanks, Ruchi! I'm glad ya'll like the title. Since it took me so long to come up with one, I was hoping it'd actually be good... haha.. as for Ghazer and how he'll be dealt with, coming up soon. You and Sayanti have an excellent guess though :)@Husna - Thank you! And double thanks for bringing up Dean saying 'I love you' to Emery. I must've spent at least 3 hours off and on just contemplating if I wanted him to say those words or not... in the end, I decided that he should. There's no point is writing a story if your characters end exactly the way they began. Part of the point of this story is to show that change in Dean. I hope that the transformation was believable from the beginning to this chapter. I do believe that if Dean really fell in love with someone like Emery, he would hold on to her. And if he thinks that maybe he can hold onto her by saying those three words, hewould say them. We know that Dean is not very verbal with this feelings, that's why he hugs people a lot. But at this point, he also knew that Emery was determined to leave, nothing would stop her. He just wanted to make sure that she would come back... and if this was the only thing that would help, then so be it.
welll,,, i was teetering towards a murderous rage mahi😡..but after i saw the "author's note" this FF became much more special to me.😲.and i will count my self as blessed one to have gotten the chance to read your FF..😳Originally posted by: -Mystery-
Aww Flutter and L 🤗🤗🤗
I'm sooo sorry for keeping y'all waiting for so long. Forgive me? 😳 Please !!
Originally posted by: -Mystery-
@Husna - Thank you! And double thanks for bringing up Dean saying 'I love you' to Emery. I must've spent at least 3 hours off and on just contemplating if I wanted him to say those words or not... in the end, I decided that he should. There's no point is writing a story if your characters end exactly the way they began. Part of the point of this story is to show that change in Dean. I hope that the transformation was believable from the beginning to this chapter. I do believe that if Dean really fell in love with someone like Emery, he would hold on to her. And if he thinks that maybe he can hold onto her by saying those three words, he would say them. We know that Dean is not very verbal with this feelings, that's why he hugs people a lot. But at this point, he also knew that Emery was determined to leave, nothing would stop her. He just wanted to make sure that she would come back... and if this was the only thing that would help, then so be it.
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