If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 50 | Geet

palindrome

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Out of sight of the strangely intense eyes paired with a serious look.

She is seriously smitten by his eyes..How much snobbish and curt he would appear to her,she simply can't ignore the intensity in his eyes..Its really true,what your face conceals,your eyes reveal(s)...!!!

I really pity this "tongue tied" hero.. and somewhere secretly my heart enjoys his predicament too.{yeah devil me..😆}

And the team which will look after the arrangements for the decorations of the event is Miss Geet Handa and Mister Maan Khurana.'

I knew very well,that this was going to happen but still my heart was jumping in excitement when i read this line..Thank you so much professor{ mariam} for pairing them...I desperately want to see them spending some time together and opening up little..😊

I cross my fingers without making it very obvious. Please, please, please, please, please let her be my partner,

aww..i wanted to pull his cheeks at this moment...His "crossed fingers" did their job..Its time for him to open them as well as his tongue and heart too...!!!

The thing that has intrigued me very much is this "special friend" of geet..He/She made his/her appearance in the first paragraph of the update..I am very curious to know how "special" he or she is???and geet's choosiness regarding her friends is increasing my curiosity very very much...!!!!

Over all wonderful chapter mariam...

I completely agree with avi..Your story is indeed "chashni mein dooba hua rasgulla"..but its very well squeezed {by you} to release the "extra chashni" and maintaining the right amount of sweetness...😊

Edited by palindrome - 11 years ago

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Aaahaannn

updatewa on tuesdaywa

i likeyyy

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

superb update

y he is so scared to talk in front of her

jab bhi geet samne aati hai Maan Khurana ka mind kaam krna band kr deta hai😉😉

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

maan babu found out where to find her..
nice..

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

me thud.!!

yaar mariyum.. i am in awe..!!

what a turn in starting..

they being partner in event.. was something which we were able to guess!! :P

loving it more and more.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

I am sat here with the biggest grin on my face, this is so sweet and romantic! The song 'Pehla Nasha' immediately comes to my mind as I read this, I love how you write from both of their POVs - it's so refreshing to see Geet acting more calm and collected whereas poor Maan turns into a pool of love filled drool whenever he sees her.

Please do continue soon, I genuinely can't get enough of this so I'm heading back to re read the previous chapters and let my heart swell with this beautifully romantic story.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

😊Tuesday!

Reading your story is like having a chasni mein dooba hua rasgulla. Sweet!

The first meeting, his quietness, his hmmm... uncertainity on both ends. The pace of their thoughts almost even in their steps toward each other. Must say it is nice to have a hero jiski bolti band ho jaati ho😆. If he is such a gone case already from far away what will happen to him when he has to start working with her.

Looking forward to their project together.

Bhooton ki fan --- appreciating the wonderful story... Subtle, sweet and totally addictive.

Thanks for updating Mariam!

Edited by had2bu - 11 years ago

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#498

The story is getting pretty interesting.Tho less but Maaneet are talking.But really yaar,jake ko aaj ka hi din mila tha to talk with Maan.

Anyways loved d update.

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mayyo

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