very sorry for the late comment dear
no need to apologise andy.the update was just awsomeThank uloved both the chapters😉you write romance so well dear😆all the feeling are so real that i can feel itmanveer romance was just heavenly😳the rest of the update was just superforgot to say somethingcongrats for the 2nd threadcontinue soon and thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: ...navina...
Sorry Shahi for the late comment!!! NO PROBLEM. DONT BE SORRY. The fact is ; I'm a very slow reader 😒. I KNOW I AM JUST THE SAME. Even now ... I haven't read both chapters ... I read only 1 - and this comment is for that. 😆 THATS OK. I loved the teasing of Manyata by Unnati & Jai. That was priceless. I actually tried picturing Manyata face at that moment😳 !!! I wish we were given an opportunity to see a scene like that on tv.
EVEN I WOULD HAVE LOVED TO SEE THAT ON THE SERIALManyata evading Uday and carrying out her own task ... was not a bright idea - poor BalSingh has to pay the price for that! 😆 YES THATS THE OVERBEARING PRINCE... Karan & Ria sequence was very interesting.😉Awesome update Shahi ,not to mention ; very well penned👏.Thanks Navi😉Thanks for the PM😊. Promise to read the next chapter tomorrow, ... hope that's all right with you😊😊!
Originally posted by: pia.raha
wowww,double update mein double mazaa!!!!!!!!! suprbbb!!!!!!! udayy is soo possesive bt love his attitudeee!!!!!!! and manveer momentss ssoo filled witt loveee,they rr trulyyy passionatee!!!!!!!!! lovely,gr88,suprbbb!!!!!!!!😊
Originally posted by: sweet_gargi
Shashi I don't remember whether I commented on your update or not. So i am commenting now..😆...Both the updates were more than superb and as usual you have again succeeded in giving me sleepless nights. lol sorry yaar.. its not me its uday. HE HAS THAT EFFECT ON EVERYONEThanks for that😆...I so much love the possesive and controlling UV that you won't imagine..😳... I KNOW HOW MUCH YOU LIKE THIS UDAYand his last dialogue on the sore part gave me a heart attack...pata nahi bechari Manayat ka kya hoga😲😆LETS LEAVE THAT TO YOUR IMAGINATION THEEK HAIN😉
☺️...Plz continue soon and yes one add on from my side...next chap me plot ko continue karna...I mean u know which part i want.😆😉..U eneded in the right time😡...when the ahem ahem had just started...so you can't escape with that...I want it😉🤣
Originally posted by: ...navina...
I finally completed my reading .
Thats good👏Great update (ch24) Shahi 👏. thank you I loved the dialogues between Manveer - that was superb! thanks navi I could just picture Uday's possessiveness & anger there😳. And don't think that because the chapter ended there ... the hot /romantic Manveer scene ends there! Oh no - u have to continue that part☺️ ... we are all EAGERLY AWAITING THE CONTINUATION! 😆😆The "PRIYA / TINA" scene was very interesting. I'm waiting for the mystery to unfold.Thanks for the pm😊,u welcomesorry about commenting so late.you are not late navi, dont apologise. You have taken the time to write 2 lovely comments, thank so much.. muuaahh
Originally posted by: angelina6
first of all thank u that u dedicated chapp to me and saira lol... you and saira derserved it.
and sorry for making your thread a ct literally
nautanki.. dont be sorry.. muuaahhand thanks for making such wonderfull thread 😉
coming to update
chappy 23
it was fantastic and really very well written and once again i m in love with this ff Thanks iqroo
and i really like manyta in this chappy she addresed villagers like to ruler a perfect yuvrani yes even i like her, she a little bit more mature and civilised, lol
and j and unati allways teasing manyta 😆😉thats their job
and that msg so sweet though last msg was so angry young man type nbut indeed i love this chappy thanks dear
chappy 24 😳
awesome speechless mind blowing wonderfull fantastic
in this chappter all emotion anger happiness emotioneeverything was there i really like argument of manveer specially when uday become calm dosnt read to listen anybody side that time when manyta speaks to brave you wake the sleeping lion lol
but manyta now her husband very well he make him calm but i like the way they arguie so beautifully written and i hate when u stop at that end ohhh i was s o angry that u stop at int part lol
so dont u dare to run start from that part only
so very good chappter so update asap as i cant wait to read ahead so make it fast plzzz
THANK YOU NAUTANKI NO 1 FOR SUCH A LONG LOVELY COMMENT. MUUAAH. I AM SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED. LOVE READING YOUR COMMENTS. 😆😆 SEEMS LIKE EVERYONE IS ANGRY FOR ME STOPPING AT THAT POINT, BUT LETS JUST LEAVE IT TO THE IMAGINATION THEEK HAI😆. NEXT CHAPTER WILL HAVE THE NEHA STORY SLOWLY UNRAVELLING AND A LITTLE BIT OF EVERYTHING... MUUAAHH. THANKS IQROOO.
THANK YOU NAUTANKI NO 1 FOR SUCH A LONG LOVELY COMMENT. MUUAAH. I AM SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED. LOVE READING YOUR COMMENTS. 😆😆 SEEMS LIKE EVERYONE IS ANGRY FOR ME STOPPING AT THAT POINT, BUT LETS JUST LEAVE IT TO THE IMAGINATION THEEK HAI😆. NEXT CHAPTER WILL HAVE THE NEHA STORY SLOWLY UNRAVELLING AND A LITTLE BIT OF EVERYTHING... MUUAAHH. THANKS IQROOO.
Originally posted by: MsLuscious
Shaista first of all i would ask your pardon for commenting so so late but i wont give any lame excuses... so its better i shut up😆
Congratulations on the second thread of this FF... i might be new reader but ur FF is truly amazing it deserves much more threads... thanks sarah muuaah for such kind words, means alot coming from you
alright i loved chapter one because it was 1 st day after manveer became one and the possesive nature of uday was prominent and manyata has to bear her stubborn arrogant extra possesive hubby and i know she will find a way to make him the way she wants... chapter two was good two hot and cute...😊
Originally posted by: sunshinehkl
Sorry I am late 😔 but hey u've got a new thread! Congrats shahi! 😃 🥳. And wah kya baat hain U gave us a double dhamaka!!! Both the chapters were awesome! Oh I just love the over- possesive and over-protective uday. And he is damn adorable when he is pissed off! 😳 Hmm now u got me wondering what Jay and Unnati had find out! Can't wait to knw the answer! Great job dear. 🤗 Now update the next part soon. Love u. muuuah
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