ArhiFF:UC-T-B2YP-Thread 2 link - Page 4

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

hey no prob at all...m glad that i found it soon n now will be able to part of something this good...so if u dont mind can i share ur story with a friend of mine????

u deserve it gal😉

m just waiting for the day when u'll reveal more about their love😉😆

Originally posted by: babyhumz

im still new to the 'my writing thing'... and currently im just enjoying writhing this story. so go for it you can share the link or the work i don't mind. heya thanks...m just gonna share the link n she'll be here to comment on the work..after reading 😊

theirs love??? when that's going to be revealed???? 😳well u surely dont plan to make them siblings...then whatever they share in past...love or friendship...when that'll reveal..u know😆

wow love thoses pics 

omg the hug *sigh* 

and the pride and love in there eyes wooow

thanks😉

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

hiya...!

Just read all of this story! and gal it's really good!

I like the concept of the story...! And wow...Arnav-Khushi had always been practicall together earlier... then what happened later? why don't they share same bonding now as they once used to b. 

u have presented a  wonderful contrast between the camaradrie they had in past and the present day's bleakiness between them.

I was moved by the contrast u showed where they want it to be like they once had in past...on the other hand...both forced to be maintaining distances between them

I like the way u presented Arnav's vulnerabitity to Khushi...through his manhandling. Despite, how much he's trying to keep it hidden..he jst cannot.

Then, constant Sarcastic remarks tht Arnav throws on her abt her having family...very painful! Arnav..is gonna have a hard time regreting it later.

in all...i like the Story very much. thanx to Jahnvi.luvs.ASR...who recommended this to me! 

Thnks to u for this beautiful story. 

You...know...i have in my mind tht this story's title is- the Legal Guardian. I m not saying tht title u gave is not good or replace it wat i told...it's just tht I like it tht way! 😃

Please accept my buddy request...and lemme get more closer to ur story in everyway! 

Thanx 😃 

Originally posted by: babyhumz

 

Thank you very much for reading, im happy you enjoyed it and im reli grateful to Jahanvi.luvs.ASR for sharing it with you. you picked out my favourite bits that you liked. Hope you'll like it as the story moves on. 

all your thoughts and your questions will be answered slowly hopefull not to slow i know how annoying it can be to wait for a update. 😉

i came up with the concept and it was one that had to be written. your right it should be called the legal Guardian, but that never popped in my head. and im really bad with titles. but i think the title will work for now. 

Enjoy rest of the story update on Saturday!!!!