abhiya os:catch me if u can

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                             CATCH ME IF U CAN :p

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bhay is feeling restless..''where is piya?why isnt she coming?our guest is coming home..and she is not here.''he thought...the guest is piya's ownbrother...still she sould be here...her
brother may feel bad without her.
.abhay likes his brother in law kabir very much..every sunday abhay invite him for lunch...he himself shop for him..fresh vegetable and fish..Today is sunday..abhay is looking very tensed.

.kabir came and silently finished hislunch with abhay..one item abhay himself cooked..abhay asked, which item u liked most??
Kabir said, That one which was cooked by u...
"which one i cooked?"
"that magic daal..
"Abhay surprisingly asked ,how do you know??

kadir didnt answere..some times he can say the right things..like when abhay was starting a new bussiness kabir said
,Jiju ur this bussness will profit good.
"how do u know that..
."just saying.."
They finished their lunch..abhay said,it would be fun if piya also be here..she has gone somwhere..i dont know where. she is not picking up her phone..Kabir simply said
di left u..shewont come back..;
abhay shockingly asked, what did u say?.
kabir said,your body smells bad..di doesnt like it...there are some peoplewho cannt tolaret bad smell..di is like that..
"My body smells bad??"
"i dont think that.di thinks..her nose is very sensitive.."
"Has she told u that or u r just saying?"
"no..di told me on phone.."
"Where is she now??"
"she is with your business partner jay khurana..jiju are u feeling very bad??"
"hmm..i've decided that i will kill that jay..i need a contract killer.."
"why do u want to kill him..its not his fault..the fault is di's..do u know any contract killer??"
"no..."
"i think i can manage one..if u want ican send one to u.."
"u know contract killers??"
"no..but my x-father in law may know..if i tell him..he will manage..."

abhay didnt say anything..he is sitting like a statue...then take a small breath
and asked,kabir have u met ur wife awhile.??
"no...jiju u should not call her my wifeshe is not..."
"i met her once..she acked like she doesnt know me..kabir dont ever
believe girls..remember that.."
"ok i will remember.."
"ur son looks just like u.."
"jiju change this topic..my doctor said me to be happy all the time.."
"How can anyone be happy where
  unhappiness around u.u'll have to  chang ur doctor.."
"Jiju r u feeling bad.."
"yes.."
"than ride cycle..u will feel better.."
"who said u that..ur doctor??"
"no..its my invantion..will i explain the reason?"
"no..u dont need to.."
"di gave u a letter.."
"where is it?"
"with me."
"what did she write?"
"i dont know. i didnt read it."
"do u have it now?";
"yes.."
Abhay read the letter..his face's light switched off..he started to breath irregular..the letter is like this-

suno,
this is my first and last letter to u.husband and wife who live togather 24 hours neednot write letter..but i need
i kicked u out ..i know this is rude..i get some reasons to left u like this..reasons are
1.u smell like a goat
2.ur mouth remain open while
sleeping
3.u snore a lot while sleeping like
presher cooker..
4.u stay shirtless at home..
5.u cant see anything without ur
business.
6.u r a first class idiot.
these r the reason to left u.stay good
                                             piya

Abhay said,ur sister is mentally sick..she stayed 6 years with me..she never said i smell like a goat?
"May be slowly the smell developed."
abhay said,has ur di ever smelled goat?has she ever seen that?
"jiju u r getting angry..i never see u likethis. for that reason i'm feeling strang."
"I didnt smell like goat then..now i smell like that thus i'm getting angry.."
"make ur toung out..ur anger will gone."
"Who said?"
"my art teacher.."
"this strang things ur teacher may do .but i wont.."
"its not wrong to do an experiment."
abhay did that..strangly his anger got down.Kabir said ,jiju r u feeling
good?
"hmmm"
"i need to go now .may i?"
"ok.."


At night,kabir is writing a novel..very complicating part..he doesnt know what to do now...suddenly his phone rang...he picked up his phone.
"hello"
A lady voice said,what r u doing?"
"who is this?"
"u didnt recognize my voice,i'm urdi."
"how r u di?"
"fine.u r ok na?"
"hmm"
"have u talked with ur jiju aboutme?"
"no"   
"how much he is upset?"
"dont know..but he is angry with jay khurana..he said he will kill jay by a contract killer."
"seriously said that?"
"hmmm"
"nothing is imposible for him."
"di i'm cutting the phone.i'm verysleepy."
"dont cut the phone like that.say something interesting.."
"u say..i dont remember any interesting thing.hold on.let me check the window".
"what happend to window?"
"i think someone is looking at me throw this"
."who will looking at u now?"
"dont know."
"are u taking the medicines regularly?"
"yes.."
"do one thing..i'm going to singapor..u also come with me..there is a hospital name mount Elizabeth..u can do some check up there.."
"di at first i will check the window..i think someone is trying to come throw it."
"oh god,what kind of thing is this.who will come thro ur window."
"i dont know.."
kabir went to see the window..he saw no one was there..he didnt pick thephone..piya waited for some times then cut the call..

The next day again kabir'sphone rang..it was abhay...he said in a sad voice,
"have u heard anything..ur di hasnt just left me.she also made me
beggar.."
" just know di left u.she made u beggar of road i didnt knew that."
"my all money was in our joint account just to make her happy..i had 9 million 30 thousand rupees..she took 9 million away..its not the end.."
"whats more?"
"my all bussiness was of her name.i think she all this gave to that moronjay..i went to office today.everyone was looking at me straingly..i'm sorestless..i dont know what to do."
"jiju if u ride cycle.u'll feel good..will isend my cycle to u.."
"no..i cant ride cycle..change the topic.have u talked with ur di?"
"yes..she called me yesterday night."
"did she say anything.."
"she said they r going to Singapore.".
"oh so they r going to Singapore.when?"
"i dont know.."
"i have to talked to u face to face..comenow.."
"i cant come now jiju..i didnt sleep at night.."
"when is ur next appointment with the doctor?"
"The day after tomorrow.."
"i'll take u there."
"ok"'Take care."
"ok.bye."


Taday is 17 march.its raining outside kabir is thinking very complicating part
of his novel..his phone is ringing..he picked it up.
"hello,who is this?"
"its me."
"who is me?"
"cant u recognize my voice..i'm piya.ursister."
"Di,where r u?"
i'm in Singapore.i will do a full check up in m.e hospital.then will go to Malaysia by ship..there is a casino in ship..i will play poker there.."
"di,i'm doing a very important work."
"i've also called u for an important work.do u know whats the date?'
"No"
"17 march.mom's death anniversary.i also forgot like u..after remember the day i felt too sad so i thought to call u."
"oh"
"though we all forger the day..but ur jiju always remember it..he feeds the orphans this day..also donates to the orphanage..i dont know has he done the same today or not.may be not.he always does it to make me happy..i'm not there now..so he doesnt has to do anything.."
"he always do this..then may be today also'
"Pls call ur jiju and ask him about it..i'mholding the phone.."
"di, i dont have his number..i dont call anyone..they call me and i talk."
"i'm giving u his number..u call.."
"no di..i'm very busy now..i will ask him latter..then will inform u.ok.bye.."


Abhay and kabir are returning from Doctor's appointment...kabir said,jijudid u feed the orphans on mom's death anniversery?''
"ofcourse,i feed the children and donate to the orphanage...but why r u asking?"
'di thinks,u do this to make her happy.'
'very wrong thoughts..my mother in law liked me alot when she was alive.she was a very nice person.all the great virtue u and ur sister have just because of her.'
"have u talked with di?"
"no"
"di will go to malaysia by ship..there is acasino in the ship.she will go thereplaying poker"
"good..i dont care if she play poker or get drunk...change her topic.would u have problem if i smoke cigerrate?"
"but u dont smoke"
"now i do..just to dis-crease the tension"
"is it dis-creasing?"
"no,still trying,i have to leave the
  apartment also"
"why?"
"that's of ur sisters name...i never knew that she would do any thing like this.i will come to ur house then"
"ok"
"i need ur help..how to punish both ur sister and jay...i have some plan..first to out that jay...i have a master plan for that b*****d jay..i'll tell u latter.."
"ok"

Abhay is in kabir's house..he is cleaning his new room there..karir came..abhayasked,your house is full of people..who r they?
'actually i dont know'
'what??lots of unknown people are living in ur house and u dont know anyone.'
'i think i brought them when i was sick. i dont remember those time'
'sabko nikalna hoga is ghar se...i saw a man ,he said he is ur art teacher..is it true.?'
'yes'
'he was drinking some thing..when i asked what are u drinking, he said 'vodka'..asked me to drink also..use bhi nikal na hoga..saab jese normaly niklenge wese nahi..kaan pakad k wo nikle ga...'
'jiju he is my teacher..'
"so what..what teacher does,students
also do the same...i wont let ithappen"

In the ship,way to Malaysia

Its a co-incident but true that piya was also drinking vodka..a cocktail made byvodka..color of it is light green.she is sitting in rulet table.jay is sitting there with dump face..piya is losing alot of money there..jay is paying all the money..piya is wearing a black saree with diamond jwelary.she is looking like an angel.many people are looking at her..jay said,stop this for today.
"i will play a last deal..taking number 15 its my birth date..birth date is alwayslucky number.give me 200 dollers."
"200 dollars"
'yes'
'u will lose the whole money'.
'impossible.15 is my lucky number...giveme 600 dollers.'
"600"
"yes 600 dollar..just wait and watch what will happen"

jay gave her 600 dollars ..and piya lost the whole money.
.jay said,lets go to sleep
"no.i will drink another coctail.and will play rulet till the end of the drink.'
i'm not gonna give u money''
'why would u give me money.i'll play with my money.i'll take number ten ur friend abhay's birth date..i'll play with 1000 dollar.'
'i think u are fully drunk'
'yes may be..first time i'm drinking.'
piya took her credit card from purse.jay saw in surprise that the ball is in number ten..piya very simply won 2 million dollar.jay said,lets go to dec.

.we'll drink last cocktail there..Theywent to the dec.sat infront of the bar piya is looking more beautifull now. She is drinling her cocktail.
jay said,you r a strange girl.
'i am not strange.my brother is strange.If u meet him you willunderstand whatis called strange..'
'u r drunk.but i have to talk some thingimportant with u.'
'go on'
'half of the talk wont go into urmind'
'but the half will.'
'u left ur husband forever, it is trueright?'
'why would i leave him forever..if i left him,i would sleep in ur cabin.but i'mnot. I dont even let u touch me.you say did u ever get chance to hold myhand?'
'i dont understand what u r saying.'
"how can i leave a person just becausehis aura smells bad.if he bath with neem soap,bad smell will gone.."
"then why have u come with me.?"
"to punish ur friend a lesson.he thinks of his business 22 hours in a day.hedreams about bussiness while sleeping..but he wont do itagain.wheni will return he will be straght like a pipe."
"u have come with me just to punishhim?"
"yes.the man who doesnt even look at his pregnant wife,needs a punishment.'
'u r pregnant?'
'yes.14 weeks.i have join the baby club.they give me baby update every week.wait i'm reading the 14 week's  update..
jay is looking at her shockingly..
piya said typing her i-phon,listen carefully

The baby is about 12.5 cm or 4.92 inch
.he/she is now producing urine and
actually urinating into the amniotic flui
.at this week your baby is a regular
wiggler but because of its small size u
 probably wont feel it yet.

"you will return to ur husband"
'ofcource.he will come to malaysia..we will see the whole country.then willreturn home.'
'whats about me?'
'u r in trouble..i wont leave u easily mrjay.'
'u bitch,u r saying all this now?'
Piya said laughing,ghau ghau..
what r u doing?"
"i'm a bitch,so i'mbarking..ghau ghau ghau.!!"


Kabir was writting his novel,when his phone rang..he picked up it..it wasabhay...
"hello kabir..were u sleeping?"
"no jiju."
"i thought u were..still i called u cause ihad no way"
"did anything happen?"
"ur sister has called me from malaysia..when i said,hello.she saidghaughau."
"what did she say?"
"she barked like dog"
"really"
"at first i thought i heard wrong.when iasked,who ?piya?..she again said ghaughau ghau.."
"did u cut the call?"
"yes"
"call her back..may be she is really answering.but u r hearing the barking.jiju i'm hanging up"

Some times latter abhay called kabir again.."hello kabir,i called her.she againbarked.what would i do now?"
"may be she became dog mentally..sheis thinking herself a dog..i'll talk to my doctot then will inform u.'
'u dont need to.take ur medicine and sleep'
'ok.'

Next day abhay came to kabir's house with two suitcase..he didnt exited tosee his room all clean.
kabir :jiju,u r looking sick.
Abhay:night to morning all the time my
wife is calling me and is not saying a word just barking.
k:will u go to my doctor?
a:why would i go to ur doctor..i'm not barking on the phone.
k:ok.jiju i have an appointment with the
doctor.but i will go alone
.a:why?
K:my doctor told me.
A:u will have to change ur doctor.

Abhay's phone rang.he is looking atthe number in sad face.piya call
him.
'kabir'
'yes jiju'
'ur sister is making me crazy.'
'dont pick it up'
'but how long.she will keep callingme?'
'then throw ur phone in the swimmingpool.'
'what r u saying..just to get rid of it i will throw my i-phone.i can just switch itoff.'
'no..u cant rid of it like that..cause u know one button can switch the phoneon..'

abhay went to his room with phone

.When kabir came back from his doctor he saw abhay is sitting on the stair.heis shivering.kabir said
",jiju why r u here.i think u r sick."
"come with me kabir.ur sister sent mean sms..i cant understand anything of it.i think she has also taken ur path.her
mind gone with wind.
Piya's sms

the baby is about 12.5 cm or 4.92 inch
.he/she is now producing urine and actually urinating into the amniotic flui
.at this week your baby is a regular
wiggler but because of its small size u
probly wont feel it yet

abhay:what does it mean?
k:di is pregnant..its about the baby.
ab:really?
k:i think u should go to malaysia now
.ab:how can i go now..whats about visa..oh i have a visa..i made it for me and ur di.she said she will give me a good news there..but we could not go for a bussiness problem.but she went
with another person.now i understand why she is barking on the phone
.k:just to irritate u.
ab:but that b*****d jay.
.k:dont worry jiju,i'm sure di doesnt let him touch her.
ab:i'm such a fool.

Few days letter..Malaysia
the name of the hotel is sagrilla..its not like hotel its like haven..abhay is sitting there with dump face..piya came there with two glass of orange juice.

piya:why are u sitting with an owl face?
abhay:where is that b****d jay?
piya:how can i know where is he?whenhe got to know that i brought him here as a 'charandar' ,he has vanshed.now
dont sit like this.say somethinginteresting..tell a poem.
'i dont remember any poem.'
'any poem of school.'
' i remember twinkle twinkle littlestar'
'tell it'
'really?'
'yes'

'twinkle twinkle little star
how i wonder what u are,
up avove the world so high
like a diamont in the sky.'

'do u want to know how much i'mhappy to see u?'
'yes'
'i'm feeling like i have no sorrow in my life.its like i'm in heven.look i have tearsin my life.'Abhay saw that.

'drink the juice.they mixed something init..it tasts different.
'abhay tasted it and said,its really different.
'i'll take the recipe from them.'
'you r looking so beautiful'
'every lady looks beautifull in pregnancy.imprtant thing , i will stay
the whole month here with u
'of cource'
'today we'll go for shopping.there are found stroller for twin babies..i'll buyone.'
'are u going to have twins?'
'i dont know yet.but i think.'
'if u want then we will buy stroller fortwins.'
'i have decided a name for one'venessa'.u will keep another
name.'
'girl?'
'dont know yet but i think twin daughters.doctors can say by altrasnography after 4 months.'
'find a good doctor for me.'
'why?whats happen to u?'
'my aura smells bad'
'no..its not.i told that to irritate u.'
'what?'
'yes.i have a book named  'how to annoy someone'.i jusy used
those tips.'
'tell me some of them'
Piya said,men get angry too much when any one says him that his Iq is higherthan gold fish
'why?'
"you wont understand it because u r one of the most foolish person of india'
Abhay smiled..he is feeling good though piya called him fool.

'ur having headach.tell me why?'
'i dont know'
'because u r not drinking orange juice.u r drinking taquila sunrize..it is mixed with the orange juice.'
'what is this?alcohol?'
'yes'
'how do u know the names?'
'ur friend jay told me...would u like to
drink more?"
'no.r u mad?'
'listen to me.take one more.and getdrunk'
'why?'
'people do many things getting drunk. i want to see what would u do.'
'how will i know i'm drunk'
.'when u'll see double piya.u'll know
that u r drunk.'
'double piya?'
'yes.one is real,another is unreal.
Abhay is drinking taquila sunrize withexcitement.he really wish to see doublepiya.and some times letter he felt like the world is moving.he looked at piya and saw there is another piya sitting beside her.he said,
piya i think i'm fully drunk.which one is u?
piya laught and said,catch me.
abhay tried to hold her but oops thats not the real one..piya hold hold him..abhay bend on her and kiss her lips passiontely ..they kept kissing untill they need some breath..
'oh its fun to get drunk honey,abhay said winking at her...

One year latter,
piya with her two little daughter are going to shopping mall.her partner is abhay.abhay is not consern about his bussiness.he cant spend a moment without his daughters.he says
,bussiness my foot.my daughters are fine then i am also fine...

when two beautiful little girl lying in double stroller go with mom and dad ,every one surprises and says so beautifull,so beautifull..abhay scares,kahi nazar na lag jaye..when abhay said his fear to piya she said,dont worry.it wont happen.cause they are wearing socks...
At the end they are spending the life which piya always dream...

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Posted: 11 years ago
os updated😉
Ok i'm again back with new flop os..this idea was disturbing my mind so i had to write it...i know like me many of you are in a same situation..the sadest day ever..just to ignore it i started to write this...its not that romantic at all.i tried to make it funny.and i gave a little much importance to kabir's charecter...cause i need a person for connecting abhiya..kabir's charecter is a person who is little mentally sick..when he was to much sick his wife left him...both abhay and piya like him so much..this is kabir of my imagination here..I hope u enjoyed it..pls ignore the spelling mistakes..and pls comment and tell me how is it..thank u... 😳 Edited by ririrararaatry - 11 years ago
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HEY IT WAS SO FUNNY AND GOOD😆ABHAY SMELLS LIKE A GOAT😲🤣AND KABIR WAS MENTLE HERE KYA😕😆I REALLY LOVED IT😉DO WRITE MORE😛Edited by flora212 - 11 years ago
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now wat shud i say...hasne ke siwa aur kuch sujh hi nai rha🤣
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wow great os
nice ending
thanks for the pm
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its so funny os yar...abhay smeels like goat lolzzz...piya annued abhay a much longer...kabir is so much different like a mental...ending is so nice...lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow yaar its really funny... mujhe to kabir ka character padhne mein jyada maza aaya and pia omg jeh ko kya ghumaya and abhay ko kya sabak shikaya... nice os...
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wow!! That was simply 🤣
but i loved it!😊 It was so different frm the usual type but wonderful..👏
plz do write more like this..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flora212

HEY IT WAS SO FUNNY AND GOOD😆ABHAY SMELLS LIKE A GOAT😲🤣AND KABIR WAS MENTLE HERE KYA😕😆I REALLY LOVED IT😉DO WRITE MORE😛



thnx😛...and i'll try to write more😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

now wat shud i say...hasne ke siwa aur kuch sujh hi nai rha🤣



😆😆😉..at least yeh toh kaho ki kesa hua😆
Edited by ririrararaatry - 11 years ago