OS : Noticing you, Noticing me - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
*Shakes head at all the sloppy kisses and the diaperish huggies*  πŸ˜³
Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Rofl. If you hate diaperish huggies, you can do with mammie poko pants. I mean come on why the hell is the voice of the cartoon so sugary sweet? I don't like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
good going girls :-) enjoying Sunday
hmmm beautiful dreamyOS.
Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Sapnon di duniya se sirf Crayon mila?
 
Beautiful continuation of the story...
 
You actually knew the song suggestion?πŸ˜†  Boy country music on sheesh thread...  where the unexpected can happen and usually does...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
please have another part to it is so good pleaseee😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Beautifully written..πŸ‘
You just described how a girl wearing braces; considering herself ugly would think like. But I loved Geet's optimistic attitude...
I wonder which dictionary she referred to..
I like Geet's thinking when her parents referred to her birth as an accident.
You ended it..😑I hope there is more.. I wanted to know why Maan fell fro her...😭

@Crayon: I loved the way you described geet's contrast opinion on the surroundings after she saw Maan's smile..It shows that once you experience something positive, something good; you look for the good in everything..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Woah !! just came across  this os πŸ˜•

The way u potrayed geet is very rare here 

I had always seen   girls wearing spectacles or braces shying away  

I initially felt wierd   as i had always wished   to waer specs 

When  my desire came true , i was on the top of the world 

I believe that  wearing spectacles  makes a  person loo uh...illectual πŸ˜†

I find people wearing specs actually dignified and well poised 

I  just love geet because there are very few girls who wear braces as   ppl believe that braces make people ugly πŸ˜³

Braces make a person look better  ,  it is something   which we  do so that we dont look ugly in the future  

Geet  instead  of  throwing away the braces , had worn them ...it takes guts to do that  

The beggar part was  actually nice   

 it feels good to be blessed 

and the way u ended it was amazing  

Ruskin bond-ish  style   -  I  just   looveee it  !!!!!!πŸ˜†




























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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
really nice start of love story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I can never explain how I explain how I feel after reading your writing.So i'll jst say I loved d OS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
aww dat was a cute love story...