Aadha Aadhura Tera Bina(AR FF) on Hold

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Aadha Adhura Tera Bina(AR FF)



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Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guyies.. this is ... ahhh...
guess karo yaar...
chalo hint chaiye kya...
mera do FF chal rahe hain...
i m being loved by u all...
chalo aab gess karo...
i m here starting new FF as u read "aadha aadhura tera bina"






here goes character sketch

DR.Armaan malik - a very cute handsom firty.. helping caring loving shaitan and bigest prankesrt of alll time.n possessive about his jaan n protective for his beloved ones... but madly in love with Dr.Ridhima gupta... who is soon going to be Dr.Ridhima Basket Armaan Malik... loud n naughty guy


Dr.Ridhima - she is very innocent very helping caring beautiful... open hearted to everyone... feel bad to express her sorrow to others but share each and evry thought with armaan malik... and always try to make others person happy even if it hurted her doing that... peace n simplicity loving girl...

Dr.Anji - sister of ridhima ... love her sister alot n great friend of armaan...loves atul very much but fail to express

Dr.Atul - for a change atul in this FF is real brother of armaan... same as dmg

Dr.keerti n Dr.Shubhankar - seniour doctor same character

Dr.Nikita - same as DMG n best frndz of armaan n atul...

DR.samrat - same as MJHT loves gunjan but unaware of his feeling for her

Dr.Gunjan - same as MJHT loves samy but determine to make him realizes his love for her... loving sister of nupur who works in Garewal n bhushan (GB company) company

Rahul - he is great frnz of armaan in school but their contact

broke down causing armaan to upset.. they bth miss eachother..

married to muskan chadda

Muskan - great frndz to ridhima since scholling but college differ causing to loss contact...same goes with her n muskan as with rahul n armaan ,,,ridhima too missed her...

Nuppur n mayank - same as MJHT but head over heel in love with each other...frndz with rahul n muskan.. sahre everything

Abhimanyu modi - CA of the GB companies..




let me put it greatly and simply their relations

ridhima-anji sisters
ridhima-muski great frndz but broken contact
armaan- atul brothers
armaan-rahul great buddy lost contacts
nikki-armaan-rahul best buddies since schooling (rahul not in contact now)



LOVERS 😳

armaan - ridhima
atul - anji
muskan - rahul (married)
samrat - gunjan (samrat not aware of feelings)
nuppur - mayank









hope u all like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey i'm the 1st one to comment:)
Hey i really luvd the other two ff's of ur's and the character sketch that u have given is making me think that this ff's too gonna be awesome...
Hey even the title expresses so much abt the ff...
And thanx for the pm:)
So continue writing...
Waiting for the parts:)
Take Care!!
Edited by Savvy11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome👍🏼👍🏼
loved the character sketch and title of the ff❤️
waiting for ur update...continue soon😊
and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice outlook ab picture bhi dikhlao na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting 4 d part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE

Hey guyies this is MISHS here i m to tell u that it is getting confusion for me to send PM to the people who want it ... as it get mix up and by mistake sometimes i missed some one and sometym i send to who don't want them... so its a request to all of u to plz add this account as ur BUDDY so it will simplfy my problem and u all can receive the updates without any missing parts...


thanku all for the comments and support you all showed me...
i really feel great seeing ur appreciations, comments and liking to it...

sry guyies i don't get time to make comment on ur comments separately... hope u all can understand...

FOR UPDATE OF FF BELOW ADD " mishs_FF.UD"

Tu sirf ''mera armaan'' ho(AR FF)

Back To My Jaan

Aadha Adhura Tera Bin

Thankk u guyies

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved da CS! plz do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Story begins from the episode where armaan n ridhima ka rooka ho chuka hain... but rahul n muski ki jagah yahan tak ki journy samrat and gunjan ne AR ke saath ki hain same as rahul n muski were...
And from where MJHT story of gunjan n samrat starts from where gunjan n samrat confessed...

hope aap sab ka confusion dur ho gaya hoga...




All the interns are at farm house still...
armaan - tum khush hona basket ...**sitting on the ground head on the wall and ridhima sitting betwen his legs and her back touching his chest**
ridhima - hain armaan mein bahut khush hun... tum mujhse ye baar baar kyun puch rahe ho.. aaj hi hamara roka hua hai... aur tum ho ki...
armaan - basket mein ne bachpan se pyaar nahi dekha... pata hai basket jab mishthi mujhe chod kar gai thi na toh mein bahut tu jaya tha...
ridhiam - mishthi ????
armaan - hain meri choti behan meri kiddoo...
ridhima - armaan !!!
armaan - mein ne aaj tak tumhe nahi bataya ki meri behan bhi thi kyun ki mein vo sab pal yaad nahi karna chahata tha.. mein darta tha ki mein aagar kamgor padhgaya toh... par aaj mujhe dar nahi hai... aaj tum mera sath ho hamesha ke liya,,,, ho na????
ridhima - hain armaan mein hamesha tumhare saath hun...**putting her hand on his cheek**
tumhe mujhe kuch bhi bolne se pehle soch na nahi padhega...

armaan -pata hain mujhe ridhima... pata hain basket mein jab se aankh kholi hain bus mom dad ko ladhte hua hi dekha hai... unki ladai mujhe kitna akela feel karati thi mein bata nahi sakta... aur jab mujhe pata chala ki meri behan aane wali hai toh mein 5 yrs ka tha... mein din raat sapne dkhta tha ki mein aapni behan ke saath khub khelunga khub masti karunga... usse khub saara pyaar karunga... use vo kami kabhi mehsus nahi hone dunga jo mein ne mehsus ki thi... aur jab vo is duniya mein aai toh mein toh jaise 7 heavens mein tha...
meri khushi ka koi theekana nahi tha...
** saying all this looking above at sky while ridhima head on is heart and listening him lovingly**
mein 24 hrs uske saath rahta... usse khilat ... usse taiyar karta... uske saath hi aapna sab kam karta... aur school se aate hi uske pass chala jata...
hum dono ek dusre ke liya bahut protective the...
kabhi mukhe koi daat ta toh mishthi uske saame aake bolti thi

mishti - mela almy bhai ko mlat dalto.. vo bahult alche hain...(mera ammy bhaiya ko mat dato vo bahut ache hain)
vo duliya ke bhesct bhai hain (vo duniya ke best bhai hai)

aur mein sab bhulke usse ghale laga leta tha...
aur jab kabhi usse dat padhti toh mein utla datne wale ko hi daat deta tha...
aur jab mishthi ne school jana shuru kiya toh mein har period ke baad jaake dekhta tha ki vo theek toh hai na.. usse koi taklif toh nahi...
aur lunch mein aapne frndz ko chod kar uske pass chala jata tha...
aise hi saal nikal gaye mein ne har period baad usse check karna nahi choda...

kiddo ko uske sare aur classmate chidane lage ki tera bhai pagal hai and all that...
par usne kabhi mujhe nahi bataya... kyun ki vo nahi chahati thi ki mein aana chodun... mera har period ke baad jane se usse ek courage milta tha... par ek din mein ne lucnh mein sun liya vo sab... aur mein ne mishti ko life mein pehli baar rote hua dekha... mujhse sehan nahi hua uska rona... mein ne ghar aake usse puch ki aagar mera kiddo ko acha nahi lage mera aana toh mein nahi aunga par kabhi rona nahi...
toh usne kaha - nahi bhai,,, mein isliya nahi ro rahi thi kyunki mujhe aapka aana aacha nahi lagta.. aapke aane se toh mujhe bahut aacha lagta hai... par vo sab aapko kuch kuch bol rahe the toh mujhe acha nahi laga... aur mujhe rona aa gaya...
aur uska sun kar mein bahut khush bhi thaaur mujhe uske liya bahut bura bhi laga...

agle din mein uske class ke bacho se mila usse bina bataye... jo usse chidate the... aur unhe khub samjhaya har tarah se... agle din se unhone kuch bhi bilna chod diya and mishthi ka bahut dhayan rakhne lage...
phir mein kabhi late ho jaa toh vo logo tab tak kiddo ke saath ruke rahte...
aur aise hi tym jane laga...
hum doon no koi bhi kam ek dusre ki bina nahi karte the...
ek ek baat ek dusre ko batate the...
aur pata hai vo mujhe GF ke liya gift bhi dhilwati thi...
hum ek dusre ke bina khate bhi nahi the aur pehle niwala ek dusre ke haath se hi khate the...
** smilling with the teary eyes and saying all this looking above * resting his head on the wall behind**

jab mein 12th mein tha toh hum sab gumne gaye.. aur wahan... **tear droop from his eyes** uska accident ho gaya...aur...
mom dad toh ek week mein wapas aapne aapne meeting n social gathering mein wapas pahuch gaye par mera jo khoya tha vo ...

mein ne khana pina...padhna kahin jana sab chod diya ... mein itna akela ho gaya tha ki mein bus aapne kamre mein hi saara din beta rahta tha...
ek din mein behosh ho gaya aur .. kai mahine tak behosh raha ... 3 din baad mera mom - dad ko pata chala ki mein behosh pada hun room mein...

vo mujhe hospital le gaye,... aur bi ko chod diya mera pass...
4 mahinne mein hospita raha ... aur bi mera saath 24 wahin rahti thin...
un 4 mahino mein mein aur bi pass aa gaye... kiddo ke baad vo hi ek thi jisse mein ne pyaar kiya tha,.. apne maana tha...
aur jis din mein discharge hua bi ko chakar aaye aur vo faint ho gai ... check up ke baad pata chala ki bi ko brain toumer hai...
mein ne bi sewada kiya ki mein doctor banunga aur unhe theek kar dunga...
raholl mera saath rahta tha 6th class se usne mera saath nahi choda tha... kiddo ke baad mein bahut akela tha par rahuul n nikki ne aur bi kahi saath nahi choda ...

phir waqt nikalne laga kai saal ho gaye aur jaise mein pehle pyaar ke liya tarasta tha wapas vo dor meri life mein aaya ... par rahul nikki and bi ne kabhi mera saath nahi choda... par mujhe kabhi unke pyaar ki kadar nahi hui... mein aapne gum mein aur mishthin mein itna dhuba rahta ki...

phir jab bi ke baare mein pataa chala toh mujhe laga mein kya kho raha hun...
aur mein ne bi, nikki, rahul se promise kiya ki mein jiunga aapni life ko...
phir MBBS mein nikki saath rahi college mein mera dhayan rakhti thi... aur rahul padhai ke liya kisi aur college chala gaya... phir jab mera MBBS khatam hua tab nikki bhi bina bataye kahin chali gai.. aur rahul se toh contact chut hi gaya tha...
phir mein sanjeevni aaya... tum sab se mila...
pata hai ridhima jab mein sanjeevni aaya aur tumhe dekha tumse baat ki toh tum mein mujhe meri mishthi ki jhalak dikhi thi,... tumhare aas pass hote hii mein vo hi mishthi wala ammy bhai banjata...
tumhare pass mujhe koi bhi fikar nahi hoti thi...
aur jab use jungle night mein ne tumhe aapni bahon mein uthaya tha toh dill mein ek ajeeb si completeness mehsus hui jo tab tak mein ne sirf mishthi ke saath mehsus ki thi...
din nikalte gaye aur mein tumhari tarf khicha chala gaya...
phir mujhe ehsas hua ki tum mein mishthi jaise nahi balki usse bahut si baatein aachi thi...par...
** tear were flowing from armaan's eyes continuesly n ridhima watching this**

armaan - mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hun ridhima... tumhare bina jee nahi skata...agar kabhi mujhe se koi galti hui toh plz tum mujhe marna daatna,,, gussa karna.. mujhe pe chila lena par kabhi mujhe chodne ka bhi khayal aapne maan mein mat lana nahi toh is baar mein mar...

ridhima put her hand on his mouth

ridhima - aaj bol diya aagli baar socha bhi toh mein tumse toh kya duniya se hi bhi dur chali jaungi ...
armaan - sry basket... i love u like anything...
ridhima -love u too armaan ... aur usse bhi jayada mein tumhari pooja karti hun...
armaan - nahi ridhima meri pooja mat karto ... at karo itna pyaar ki mein tumhe taklif pahucha bethun...
ridhima - vo toh mera bus mein nahi hai...


sometime they keep sitting like that hugging each other... now armaan's head is in ridhimas nape hiding from the world and ridhima was hidding her face in armaan's chest...both are hiding in each other from the world...





PRECAP

armaan - basket sab aa gayenga...

ridhima - i love u armaan...

armaan - tum kabse itni strong ho hai..

anji - ridhzy...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u all of the support .comments and likeing my silly work...
sry i cant reply to u all comment independently...

maaf kar dena...

plz leave the encouraging comments and likes

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