Aadha Aadhura Tera Bina(AR FF) on Hold - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Hey it's really nice work, the mishthi twist is really gud... Hope yeh naya twist story ko next level tak lejaye... Aur ridzy ko itna bold pehle nahi dekha, waiting for the next part:)
continue soon...
Take Care!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hye nice part
poor armaan
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awesome part.
I'm loving this ff yaar.
It's amazing.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊😊amazing update😊😊😊
loved it ❤️
waiting for ur next update...continue soon😃
and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ridhima - aaj bol diya aagli baar socha bhi toh mein tumse toh kya duniya se hi bhi dur chali jaungi ...
armaan - sry basket... i love u like anything...
ridhima -love u too armaan ... aur usse bhi jayada mein tumhari pooja karti hun...
armaan - nahi ridhima meri pooja mat karto ... mat karo itna pyaar ki mein tumhe taklif pahucha bethun...
ridhima - vo toh mera bus mein nahi hai...


sometime they keep sitting like that hugging each other... now armaan's head is in ridhimas nape hiding from the world and ridhima was hidding her face in armaan's chest...both are hiding in each other from the world...




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next part

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they both fell asleep in each others arm only
next moring armaan get up and get lost in most beautiful site of the world...
he saw his basket sleeping peaceful in his arms and her face hidden in his chest and smile adoring her face and she was nuzling her nose on armaan's chest as she was feeling cold...
he didn't know when an hr passed seeing his love of life in his arms and sensing her nuzling on his chest due to cold armaan just hug her tightly making the warmth of their love to take over their surroundings as a blanket ...
ridhima open her eyes lazily only to see armaan staring at her lovingly..
she agaiin close her eys and shift more closer to armaan ,...
armaan smiles widen at this gesture of his basket

armaan - gud mrng basket
ridhima - hmmm *smilling and nodding*
armaan - kya hua basket aaj uthne ka maan nahi hai kya...
ridhima - *nodding in no*
armaan - aacha toh kya maan hai aaj basket ka karne ka...
ridhima - bus yunhi aapne armaan ki bahoon mein rahne ka.. jahan mujhe koi takleef koi parechani nahi chuu sakti.. jahan sirf mein rahti hun aur sirf mera liya vo jagha bani hai... aapne armaan ke ki bahaon mein uaapne armaan ke dil ke passs...
armaan - oye hoye...!!!!! aaj bahut aache mood mein hain madam... kya baat hai...
ridhima - *she just avoided his question ans said* i love u armaan i just love u like anything in this world ...*hugging armaan*
itna pyaar jitna ek chota sa kid aapni chocolate se... jitna ek maa apne baache se *hugging more tightly and armaan seeing her angelitic face*..jitna ek bagwan aapne banaye insano se aur jitna asmaan mein baadal... armaan pata hai mein roj hi tumse aur jayada pyaar karne lagti hun... har roj subhe aankhein kholti hun toh lagta hai ki aaj mein tumhe kal se jayada pyaar karti hun...kai baar toh dar lagne lagta hai... lagta hain kahin mein tumjare pyaar mein khud ko na khodun... uss ridhima ko na kho dun jis ridhima se tumne pyaar kiya tha... par phir ye khayal aata hain ki aagar mein tumhare saath aapne aap ko kho bhi dungi toh tum mujhe sambhal loge...aur aagar mein aapne aap ko kho bhi diya toh tab bhi mein tumhare raang mein hi dhalungi aur tumhare rang mein me aur bhi khil (glow) karungi... tumhare raang mein raangne ka mein ne bahut intazar kiya hain armaan aab aaur wait nahi hota mera se... *armaan was silently listening to her*
armaan- basket wait toh mujhse bhi nahi hota ... mein bhi tumse dur nahi rahe sakta aab.. par basket mujhe pata nahi ki jaab bhi mujhe dono ek honge vo pal itna haseen honge aur us din hum jo khushi mehsus hogi vo sirf khushi hogi aur uske baad koi humein aalag nahi kar payega...

ridhima smile at this encouraging comment of her jaan... they both were in hug till now...
ridhima just kissed armaan on his chest and armaan just wisper her name
armaan - basket...
ridhima was again and again kissing armaan on his chest and armaan was having hard tym to control...
armaan - basket plz ... tum mera liya sab difficult kar rahi ho... tumhe koi aandazz nahi hai what u are doing to me... stop it basket...
*not stoping to ridhima*
but aaj armaan ki sharmili basket toh thi hi nahi ...
armaan - basket mein aapne upar control khodunga.. plz...
*not stoping to ridhima*
armaan - basket koi aa jayega
*not stoping to ridhima*
ridhima- koi nahi aane do...
armaan - tum kab se itni strong ban gai...
ridhima- jab se mera armaan officially mera an gaya... ab mujhe kisi se dar nahi hai... koi bhi dekhele

armaan - basket *not beleving his ears*
ridhima - kya hai armaan jao.. tum ... ek toh mein itni ronmantic ho rahi hun aur tum ho ki... jao mein baat nahi karti tumse...*lossing her grip on him*
armaan - arey tum toh ghussa hogai...*armaan hhol her tightly sensing her grip lossing*
ridhima- jao armaan ...*try to get out of his arms but not wanting to be away from him*
armaan- sry basket aacha kahan thi tum...*kising her forhead*
ridhima- not wanting to go but showing fake anger but from heart she wanna give in but her mind was saying to show fake anger...
armaan kissing her forhead
armaan - kuch kam hua ghussa
ridhima - nahi
armaan kiss her left cheek
armaan - aab
ridhima melting - nahi
armaan know she is having difficulting controling herself
then armaan kiss her right cheek
armaan - aab
ridhima - nahi
then he kissed her both the clossed eyes
armaan - nahi
then armaan procedded to the her lips...
but stoped inch apart and asked
armaan - aab bhi nahi
ridhima - armaan ... still eyes closed
armaan - bolo basket
ridhima - armaan plz mujhe aapna banalo... mein tumhe khona nahi chahati...
armaan - mein toh tumhar hi hun basket and saying so armaan just hug ridhima tightly...
and ridhima hug him back...


after somtime armaan feel his shirt wet and he aparted ridhima and look at her and she was sobbing in his armaan...
armaan - basket kya hua... tum ek dum... mein ne kuch galat keh diya ... plz basket mujhe batao... plz aapne ansu puch lo basket ...batao na mein ne kuch *ridhima put her fingure on his lips to stop him*
ridhima - nahi armaan tumne kuch nahi kiya...
bus tumhare pyaar ne mujhe itni khushi di hai ki mein shabdo se bayan nahi kar sakti toh ye ansun bayan kar rahe hain...
tum mujhe jaante ho jitna mein khud ko bhi nahi jaanti... toh mujhe kuch bolte hua jab shabd kam padh gate hai toh aansun aapna raasta dhundh leta hain tumhe samjhene ke liya ki mein kya bolne wali hun ya ya soch rahi hun...
ridhima - i love u armaan
armaan - i love u too basket
ridhima - armaan
armaan - basket
ridhima - armaan *leaning close*
armaan - ridhima *leaning close*
ridhima - armaan *leaning more close*
anji - ridhiz...
armaan - ye toh meri line thi...
ridhima - mein ne nahi bola...
armaan - chodo ... toh hum kahan the...
ridhima leen on armaan while armaan was having eyes closed and anji was at armaan's back and ridhima's hand was in armaan's hair seeing as they were having a kiss...

anji was shocked to see this...
anji - ridz
but they both give anji dumb ears... so anji went from there...
but they were not kissing but just their forhead were joined together to enjoy the presence of each other...and ridhima was ruflinng armaans hear to feel armaan and armaan hand were held at ridhima's back...

after sometym armaan and ridhima goes back to there room and to the relife anji has not told anything to anyone... and AR was unaware of anji seeing then on terrace...

at lucnh time AR sit together and armaan caught ridhima's left hand with his right hand and he was eating with left hand and everyone notice this but were quit...
they don't want to disturbe AR

after lunch gang was getting bored and they decided to play the game...
anji - chalo na guyies kuch khelte hain...
gunjan - hain chalo khelte hain...
atul - paar kya...
armaan - lets swap aur character for sometime and act...
samrat - yes,.. i will be fun yaar..
nikki - no guyies i have awsome game lets plzy that one...
armaan - tell us...
nikki - guyies here is the cusion... here we all will do something with this cushion whatever its may be and then i will say u what to do then so lets start its funny game...
anji - i get it... lets start
ridhima - mein aabhi aai mujhe kuch kam hain...
armaan - tum kahan chali ko bahana nahi chalega...
nikki - don't be spoil spot ridhz... beth jao na...
gunjan - hain ridhima lets play...
armaan - plz..
and listening to armaan she can't resist him...
ridhima - okay as u all wish...
nikki - as we wish ya as armaan wish haaaiiinnn... *teasing her*
ridhima blush at this statment ...

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In other part of Panchgani

boy - oye tujhe samjh nahi aata ... kitni baar bola hai mera file idhar udhar mat kara kar...
girl - oye khote ke bache... tu khud toh kuch sambhal kar rakh nahi sakta... file idhar udhar pehkta rahta hai...
boy - oye chipkali ... mein file dhag se rakhta hun...
girl -tune mujhe chipkali bola...
boy - hain bola...toh... acha mujhe baad mein mar liyo... pehle file dhundwa de...aaj ki meeting bahut important hai...
girl - NUPS ko call karke puch uske pass toh nahi hai...
boy - yup... let me call her.. and ask wait...


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tring tring...
a sleeping hand come from the duvet...and trying to get the phone...
boy - hye nups yaar tu aabhi tak so rahi hai ... 1 ghante mein hamari meeting hai uthna nahi tujhe...
nups -*seeing tym* oh.. shiittt tum mujhe pehle nahi utha sakte the,... kya hua...hain btw vo file mera pass thi kal mein ne raat MS ko di thi... usse recheek karne ke liya...
boy - mein file saare ghar mein dhund li... pata nahi kaise dimag se nikal gaya ki mein ne tumhe di thi file.. chalo chod ... ab tu jaldi uth and jaldi aa meeting ke liya...
nups - yes rahulll... i m coming . bye/...


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Announcement - and the tender of the year goes to GB-companies... congrates guyies...
oy - thank u all... i m very glad to get this tender.. as this is being a record that this THE TENDER of the YEAR is archieved by GB companies from last 15 years...
thanks too my workmates... who are my frndz.. my well wishers and most important they are as my own family... thanks to all the hard work...


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rahul - thank u man... agar tum nahi hote toh aaj hum ye tender sirf kuch paise ki wajhe se har jate ,,... thank u soo much
nups - yup buddy... u were very helpful in getting this tender,...
girl - so lets call for the party tonight...
boy - yup party tonight and on the behalf of the winning the TENDER OF THE YEAR and that to cheerks for abhi ...
abhi - thank u guyies... but its all i work for.. its my work... ye toh tum logo ka badapan hai that u all giving all the credit to me... u all are such a great frndz one can have...


at this rahul and girls face fell...
rahul and muskan both lost in their childhood days... it happens to them mostly when ever the topic of frndz come up...


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Edited by mishs_FF.UD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey i've started loving this story very much now... You have reached a new height in ur work... The way u brought up new characters in light is really brilliant of you... The ar moments wer gr8:) the rm intro was done brilliantly:) continue ur work soon plz...
Edited by Savvy11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Loving this!
Loved AR moments! Ridz getting bold hunn!
Its going gr8!
Cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update😊😊
loved ar moments❤️
and thanks for the pm😃
continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3


RECAP

AR moment together and anji caught them but didn't bother them...
then the gang desided to play a game with cusion...

here in other parts of panchgani
we saw GB company get the tender of the year.. and desided to celebrate this winning of tender
and at the topic of frndz rahul and muska's face fell... they lost in childhood...


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here goes the next part


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mayak - hey tujhe kya hua rahul...
rahul - silence...
mayank - kya hua rahull... tu theek hain...
rahul *coming to his world* haaa... hain sab theek hai bus kissi ki yaad aa gai thi...
nupur - by god... rahul tumhe toh had kar di... muskan tke hote hua bhi tum kiss aur ko yaad kar rahe ho...
*they look at muskan she too was lost*
rahul - kya hua meri sherni ko...
muskan - kuch nahi kissi ki yaad aa gai thi...
nupur - ye ho kya raha hai by god tum log ek dusre ke ilawa bhi kuch sochte ho...
mayank - u both okay na... as they both were having moist eyes...
muskan 0 yup i m fine.. chal rahul...

they both leave silently...
abhi - inhe kya hua...
mayank - pata nahi ... itna ajeeb behave kar rahe the...
nups - by god...


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here at the sametym... at farmhouse
the cusion was kept in between them...

so armaan get up and danced with the cussion and then went back to his sit then ridhima get up and and kissed the cusion then angi wisper too and atul kuche ku-ed the cusion and samrat danced with it and gungan cover up the cusion and cares it and nikki too wispers

and they were sitting in circle and in couples...

as armaan - ridhima - atul - anji - nikki - gunjan - samrat...*clock wise*

then nikki place a bowl with chits in middle of their circle...
nikki - guyies here i have kept the bowl with chits in middle... so game is that.. jo is bowl mein chit hain that will tell u the person with u have to doo that u have done with cusion...
All - what!!!!
nikki - yup... so tells start... anji u pick u ...
anji - to the persone left to u ... so nikki ...
and anji get up and wisper in nikki's ear...
anji - i love atul much
nikki - what,...sach
anji nodded..
nikki - waooo... i m soo happy...


then gunjan pick the chit and
the persond infront of ur lefty...
that mean anji...
gunjan gets up and make anji wear a jacket and cares her head...

then samrat... he pick up the chit and
the person right to u...
that means gunjan...
samrat gets up and like gental men forwarded his hand...
and they were dancing lost in eachother eyes...

armaan - basket ye dono bhi tumhare jaise hain ...
ridhima -matlab...
armaan - ye hi ki pyaar toh hai par dono hi bolte nahi hain...
ridhima - armaan ...
armaan - hain armaan ki basket...
ridhima blush and lower her head..
then after their dance finished the settle down...


then armaan he pick up the chit and
the persone left to u ...
armaan too get up and very carefully asked for ridhima's hand and then lost in their own world...


armaan start singing...

Armaan
Tumhe pata toh hoga
tumhi pe mein fida hun
tumhe hai jab se chaha hawao mein udhta hun
tumhi mera har pal mein
tum aaj mein tum kal mein
hey shona hey shona
hey shona hey shona


ridhima
Tumhe pata toh hoga
ke mera dil mein kya hai
chalo kahe deti hun kabhi nahi jo kaha hai
tumhi mera har pal mein
tum aaj mein tum kal mein
hey shona hey shona
hey shona hey shona


arman
tum jo ghussa bhi karo toh mujhe pyaar lagta hai jane kyun

ridhima
Mein toh jo bhi kahun tumhe ikrar lagta hai jane kyu

armaan
chod bhi ye aada
pass aa ke zara baat dil ki koi kahdo na
hey shona hey shona
hey shona hey shona


ridhima
Sari duniya ko chod ke mein ne chaha hai ek tumhe

arman
mein ne jindagi se manga hai toh sirf manga hai ek tumhe


ridhima
aab isi chaha mein aab isi raha mein
jindagi bar mera tum hona
hey shona hey shona
hey shona hey shona


arman
Tumhe pata toh hoga
tumhi pe mein fida hun
tumhe hai jab se chaha hawao mein udhta hun


ridhima
tumhi mera har pal mein
tum aaj mein tum kal mein
hey shona hey shona


arman
hey shon hey shona

ridhima
shona hey shona

arman
hey shon hey shona


then ridhima pick up the chit...and
the person right to u ...
means armaan...
all - uhhh,...
ridhima get up and without any shame she came near armaan and kissed his forhead... showing respect and care and love...
all just smile and armaan closed his eyes feeling ridhima's skin in contact to his skin... to feel the sensation both were having their eyes closed and and ridhima let her lips on armaan's forhead to linger for sometime taking the moment in heart for forever...
then

nikki - ahem ahem
no effect
anji - ann-chuuu...
no effect
samrat - ammy ...
shaking armaan..
armaan ridhima blushed and came back...


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Edited by mishs_FF.UD - 11 years ago

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