Hey Emma, this chapter was very sweet and lovely. I was indeed smiling throughout and was going "aww" at some parts. Chulbul Pandey-ji would be very proud of her. Oh & I loved the following lines.
"Hold my jhumkas Arnavji, I can tell this is going to be tough business". 🤣
He felt' un-manly. Yes, that was the word.
She tried speaking in a lower voice, maybe then they would understand that she was representing Chulbul Pandey. 😆
She carried them around in her purse because she liked to befriend people. 😆
I'm not sure why you have not written comedy before because romantic comedy seems to be totally your thing. You did a great job with this chapter & if you do decide to start a SS/FF with a similar genre, I would definitely love to read! :)
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