Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143 - Page 21

OMG fists flying so soon...both are mad and egoistic but i love the way its progressing and i can't believe payal actually fainted...that was hillarious...and arnav being shoved was another shocker...all in all great update...thanks guys for creating such a wonderful story

Oh ho, yeh kya hai? From a sweetly romantic date to aggressive bhangra. Oops I mean jhagda. Very unexpected twist!

Feisty Khushi was at her best, loved her for not taking crap from Arnav.  Kinda reminded me of the Guest house scene. Akash & Payal's interaction was cute. & Payal has a voice too! The Gupta sisters are Kicka** in this FF. Oh & I loved Mami's & NK dialogues as well. 🤣 Hilarious!

The last line from Khushi was 🥺. I hope all will be well for them soon. Btw I'm curious to find out how Khushi & NK know each other, hopefully it gets revealed in the next chapter. You write very well & you did a great job for his chapter! :)

Edited by Shalu87 - 11 years ago

congrats fr new thread...
nice part..
thanks fr pm Rasgulla_sp

I loved the chappy...

Wow !!!!! That was an intense confrontation between Arnav and Khushi ... Very well written 😊

Again fabulous part from u guys... Awsome akash is payal dream boy n akash who is straight 4wd dont knw... Spill whole jug water on her facve thank god payal is not a cow here she spat bck to him aww... Arshi ... She slapt him ... Bt once again we didnt get the ans how khushi knws NK ... Mami n her invernted english is also in the frame waiting for nxt part

Beautiful, thnks for the pm.

I loved  NK and Manorama in this update.

And NK saying "Bhangra" was hilarious.When he said that I was actually imagining
Arhi doing bhangra.😆

Aakash likes Payal already.Is it love at sight by Aakash's side?

Wonderful update.

this FF is awesome
so many skilled writes together.

Its nce, beautiful. How cum payal think abt marryin akash vidout even meetin him???      
How did nk n khushi knw eachother???
Congrts on new thread.Edited by gangsu - 11 years ago