Originally posted by: hangok
im soo sorry that i couldnt comment earlier π
π€ ... dont worry dear ... I know all of you are busy ppl and have a real life outside of IF . .. π ... So that's OK .. take your time read and comment when ever you can !
part 4: im soo happy that she heard everything, and like it that she confront it with him..loved the part when prithvi said that he wouldnt do anything like this again if this would be an order from dattaπ
Glad you liked it ... I hate long drawn secrets ... I prefer that things get resolved quickly ... and I really dont want P to kill, even if it's DT's orders ...
could imagine the kurta scene really well, greatπ
but top of the part was the last scene, where she mumbeld that he could have wait till she would fall asleep just AMAZING can imagine Meera here well ...great part...
Yes ... Miu is kinda cute like that ... she would expect that P stay with her ... after all she's been pretty pampered by Akash & Bitto π
par t5: sweet a drive, then he gives her shawl and im
I loved writing that part ...
part 6: love it that he stole glances, so may be he begins to fall for her π³ and then how romantic he is ..oh and dont forget to admit, that he is ready to carry her πand he carried her...
im to excited to see, who would get her dinner???
Well ... by this time P is seeing Miu anew ... the fact that he tried to kill her has blunted his hatred and makes him notice her ! π
part 7/8 : at first thanks for the special weekend
first person in her mind is prithvi, i like itπ
and for the rest of the part, im speechless, this would be a dream just FANTASTIC...
Thanks dear ... the Miu DT revelation was pretty dramatic in the serial ... but I wanted DT to accept it by himself... and stand by his daughter ...
The scene is the garden is just like a dream π ... both M & P are not yet able to or willing to acknowledge the pull between them !
MITHVI allmost makes me crazy, and this part from you is addition to this..right now
Mithvi has me crazy too ... this is my first SS on IF ... I have doen a couple of OSs but never anything so long ...π³ ... π
Thank you so much Hangok , for taking the time to comment on each part ... I love to hear what you all think of my writing ... my responses in blue !
BTW ... what do I call you ?? My name is Usha ... π
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