IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi (Chap. 12) **COMPLETED** - Page 31

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Posted: 6 years ago
You made us feel all the emotions through your writing.. Such a beautiful story it is... Thank you 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
One of the superb story I read...
u r a wonderful writer...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Halt past twelf at night and I am still awake! Damn what a story... since everyone is sleeping and my eyes are wet and sleep is long gone, I'll keep reading... :D
Thanks for this awesome one. It has been month since I've last read one worth lying awake!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hii, I read your this story, its amazing & so emotional. Reality base story. While reading this, I cried. Everything is so perfect, like how happened in real life. Like it so much, superb
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Posted: 6 years ago
Bookmarked!
Heard high praises about it!
Shall read it as soon as I am done with my exams!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome story.
U portrayed every emotion very beautifully..
U r an amazing writer dear..

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Posted: 6 years ago
Brilliant..!!
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Best wishes..! You are a wonderful writer..!
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Posted: 6 years ago
finally read this story,all at once!
there was so much of angst,grief,guilt that it had me crying since the
start of the story,the story of a girl named khushi!
i read this after "Apshakun" and was bowled over the magnificent,
heartwrenching writing employed in both!
you are a phenomenal writer,how in the world you wrote 
something so soul searing!
i cried like anything,throughout the 12 parts,cried for the lost khushi,
the injustice done to her,for the cruelty shown towards her by
her husband,her family,her society!
i cried for arnav,who couldn't even cry for his khushi,the
khushi that remained alive within him!
the arnav who had to live without his khushi,thinking for
the rest of his life about the what ifs of their life!
i cried for payal too,for the anguish that she felt for her soul
sister,the sister who still lives in her!
the conversation between payal and ASR for khushi moved 
me deeply,the extent to which the loss of khushi had impacted
her loved ones life,gives me shivers!
and finally the return of a part of khushi in arnav's life,both in form(little
khushi)and spirit,in the end,somehow soothed him,but the loss of
khushi,the hope and dreams weaved with her are forever lost!
you are just an A.M.A.Z.I.N.G writer,i read your perfection too,which
is an another masterpiece in itself!
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Posted: 6 years ago
As I'm not really into tearjerkers, wanted to skip this story, though it came on the top of the list somewhere. But I braced myself in the end as I loved your other stories. I must say it was pretty painful as death is one thing you can't "undo". And I would not wish that sort of pain on anyone. Still, it was beautifully done and pretty believable. You gave ASR his daughter to be able to get through his life... Thank you 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Such an awesome and emotional story
You are a fabulous writer 
I cried so much during that part when arnav and payal are in Laxmi nagar 
It was so sad and heartbreaking
Why did khushi have to die ?
Poor girl waited so long for arnav 
Why did arnav take so long to go back to her 
But what happened has happened
The ending was touchy 
Finally khushi forgave arnav and she came to meet him 
One of the best stories I read 
Hope you will write more such good stories