In The Dance Camp (A taarey ff) part6 pg15 19jan - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Awww soo sweet loved the teasing between the girls.. Looking forward to the next part


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyz sorry for d late update...


Recap: rey wnts to spend sum.quality time wid taani

Part 6

Evryone is busy registering the song names dey r going to prform on
D day passes by evryone reheasing hard
Taarey r dying to meet each othr
Evry one meets up to have dinner
Dey r sitting aound a rectangular table...girls in font of their respective boys...haviin LLHH along wid d food when shivam cums der n orders evryone to eat fast n go to their tents...

After dinner sharon takes taani by her hand n starts dragging her wen she is bout to turn to rey n talk wid him

Rey who ws happy cing taani cum towards him...his smile vanishes cing sharon take taani awAy

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R- ye kya...iss sharon ki bacchi ki toh mAin...god abb kya karo

He turns his head all.around n c's swayam
Rey gets a wicked smile on his face

R- ye humare sale sahaab kab kaam ayenge
(goes to swayam)
R- dude dekh na wether kitna suhaana hai...soo romantic

S-ha ur rite...cum les enjoy with evryone

R-what

S- dont get me wrong dude...

R- chal vo chod...y dont u spend time wid ur lady love

S- idea toh dhasoo hai yaar...paar...

R-par var chod na ...Aisa mauka phir kabhi nahi mileg...

S-rey par...

R- aab jyada natak mT kar...man main toh laddoo phut rHe honge...

S-k f9 let me call hr

Sw- hey sharon...mujhe tumse milna hai...cottage ke peeche rite now...(disconnects d call)
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Sh- swYam meri baat toh suno...hello...hello

T-kya hua bhabhi?

Sh- woh unhone bulaya hai(blushes)

T- haan aab hume kaun pooche ga???

(folds her hand accross her chest n turns d othr side)

S- taani,,,(catches hr ears)
Pakka promise main tumhe joh batane ke liye ayi thi vo aaj sone se pehle bataoongi...ab main jaooo(makes a puppy face)

T- ok...go...

Sharon runs away behind...coz d cottage is in d opposite direction...taani keeps walking n cums to d end of d camp area...ders a huge garden at d end with a slope downwards she enters in d garden takes her sandals in hr hands n starts walking on.d dry bt cold grass...



Rey also cums der searching fr his lady love...he cs grass...her hair moving wid d wind...d beauty in moonlight...

(hey guys...now i wnt evryone to strictly imagine d part below...rey is in d dilko tumse pyaar hua attire...n taani in d confession scene dress...)
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Rey slowly sneaks bhind taani ...she is busy lokking at d sky
Rey taps taanis right shoulder
Taani looks at right(behind)...bt rey quickly moves towRds d othr side...n taani is confused nt finding any1
Nw rey taps on taanis left shoulder n wen taani.turns to left(behind)...he turns on the right side...
She quickly looks in d front n gets frightned cing rey right in front of hr...she looses hr balance n is bout to fall wen rey tries to cathch her bt in d proces both fall ...taani on top of rey n both start rolling as d garden has a steep slope...no.one tries to stop.as dey r so deeply engrossed in looking ino each others eyes...they go rolling till d end of d garden rey on top of taani n taani on top of rey...

Nw dey r stopped by d bushes in d garden...taani is on top of rey...reys both hands r wrapped around taanis half bare waist...
Taanis one hand is on.reys left shoulder n d other on his chest clutching his jacket...taanis heavy curtain of hair is falling on reys face frm one side...dey remain like this fr a long time till taani cums back to her sences...




.[/COLORTaani blushes n removes hr hand frm.reys shoulder ,keeps her both hands on d ground n tries to get up but rey is catching her so tightly dat hr hands on d grass slip n she falls on rey...her head nw burried above his shoulder n both hr hands on his chest...she tries to gt up again bt rey does not allow hr by pulling hr more towards him...

T- rey...

R-(no.response he is continuosly staring @ her)

T-(moving his shoulders)...ReY

R-haaan

T-rey muhe uthna hai...

R-taani par mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

T-rey pehle hum khade ho jaate hai ...

R-nai taani...mujhe tumse joh kehna hai uske liye ye perfct timing hai...

T-rey...y kounsa perfect timing hai...im.on top.of u...aise camp.ke end main n aap...

(rey keeps his finger on her lips)

R-shhh

(after a LLHH rey caresses her cheek with his thumb n keeps his hand on her cheek)

R-taani i love you...

T-(shocked)...rey aap ye...

R-i love u taani i luv u...

(a drop.of tear escapes through her eyes...he wipes it )

R-taani i reaaly love u...i cant imagine my life without ur innocence...ur weirdness... Ur existence...i cnt imagine my life widout u taani...i love u...

T-rey...

R-keeps hs finger on hr lips...shhh...kuch mat bolna taani...main jaanta hun ki tum bhi mujhe pyaar karti ho...i don.no ki tum shivam ke sath kyun thi n i dont wanna no coz wat matters is dat u love me...n u cnt deny it coz agar aisa nahi hota na toh tum aise mere baahoon.main itne protective feel krke aise nahi hoti...main tumko itna affect kabhi nai karta...tum meri itni care kabhi nai karti...mera tumpe gussa hon ke baad bhi tum mereliye itni care nai karti taani...

T- rey...i love u too...maine humesha sirf aapse pyaar kiya hai...i love u rey...i love u(now ther big big tears in hr eyes)



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Reys eyes are also.filled wid big big tears...taani burries hr face on reys chest...rey holds hr more tight...his arms caringly lovingly protectively wrapped around hr...after sum time he cups hr face...wipes hr tears...n kisses hr foreheadn pulls hr into a hug again...

R-taani im reaallly sorry fr hurting u...i always misu.derstood u...i alwaysss...

T-pls rey i dont wan to talk bout it...vo past tha ...n aaj ye sach hai ki u love me n i lo...(blushes)

R- ammm kych kaha...i guess complete nai kiya...i love u...vo toh i.heard aur tum kuch keh rahi thi ki i lo...

T-rey baniye mat...

R-kya baniye mat main toh already ban chuka hoon

T-kya????

R-tumhara boyfrnd...

T-rey...

R- wat rey?...sach toh sach hai...

T-(blushes)

R-hay...main toh mar jaava...tere is s blush se...

T-(hits him.on his chest)...

N hugs him again...

R-achha abb mujhe uun do sawalon ke jawab chahiye...

T-its bcoz

R-bcoz...

T-aap mere liye sab kuch ho...

Rey gets lost in her eyes...cups her face by one side...
R-taani pls mujhe kabhi akele.chod ke mat jaana...main tumhe khona nahi chahta...main toh tumhare beena saans bhi nai le paunga...

T- agar aap chaho na toh bhi nHi jaoonji kyunki main toh khud aapke bina jeene ke bAare main nai soch sakti...

(both smile)

R-u mean do dil.ek jaan

T-yes i mean do dil ek jaan...

Again both hug each other taani is on top of rey(abhi tak vaise hi hai)

R-taani i love u

T-amm...i lu...i hate u...

(rey is damn angry...he turns taani hurting hr by catching hr shoulders hard...nw rey is on top of taani...he pins her hands to d ground with his)

R- wat d hell taani yeh kya hai...how daRe u

T-rey...rey main toh majak.kar rHi thi...

R-pls taani tum.joh chahe vo kar sakti ho par pls aise phir kabhi aisa mat khna pls taani...
(twists his nose in a naughty manner n turns his face towards right)

t-rey im sry na...

R-wat sry taani...

T-rey main majak kar rahi thi ...main toh aapko kabhi hate kar hi nahi sakti...im sorry


T-(holds reys hand tightly )...nai rey i promise

[COLOR=green]Main phir kabhi ais a nahi kahungi...im sry...
(makes Puppy face)...

R-smiles ceing taani like dat...he leans towards her...taani shuts her eyes n holds reys hand more tight...he kisses hr forehead...hr eyelids...thn her nose...her cheeks...he lightly kisses hr lips...taani turns her face n a wide smile creaps up her face...rey smiles cing this reaction of his weird lady love...her eyes closed...d blush on her face...rey kisses her neck...he moves d strap of hr top n kisses her shoulder...he cs dat taani is uncomfy...so he puts back d strap...rey rolls taani n nw her head is on hr shoulder...one hand on his shoulder n one on his chest both looking at d sky filled wid stars...

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Precap...
I cud nt include d precap i gave wid part 5...so d same 1
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I neva thought ki itna bada n boring ho jayega...im sry agar pasand nai aya...pls comment...i dint recheak.so forgive me fr d mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
its oke
sabar ka pal meetha hota hai
aur agar taarey ho toh khata bhi jhalega
late hi sahi par update toh mili
you did amazing job aise hi write karte rehna
and thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Amazing update dear...i love it...keep updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
so cute and romantic 👏,super duper awsome
but precap kyun nahi include kiya ??????????😡hmmm ek to late update and that too without including the precap😡😡😡
so u have 2 update asap😊 dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Boring?! Yeh boring nahi tha.. Mere liye toh bilkul bhi nahi!! Loved it... Ab jaldi jaldi update karo.. M waiting!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Waowww it was so so sooo.. romantic... loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
its Awesome dear...
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
haww it ws cute and hot😳
haye confession ws awesome☺️
luvd it...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

it's awesome ..loved it

and thnx for da pm 😊

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