Originally posted by: Newton123
N one more thing 😆 u said abhay n sid will remember piyali so does it mean maithli as well will remember her
Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
I know u aren't comfy wid such stuff bt it didnt look like u aren't comfy😆😉.
hehe I was😆AWESOME CHAPPY.Abhayendra-sid confrontation was too good.Clearly reflected d pain n frustration of Sid which was never shown in d show in detail. TrueI loved when Sid gifted Piyali d painting of her wid Abhayendra,a picture of innocent,selfless bt one sided love.Abhayendra-Piyali moments were just too hot to handle.Piyali made him think abt them as a dream😉.Finally Reina gave a hint to Abhay abt d whereabouts of Piya bt wht did she wanted him to do 4 her?😲.New Sid seems an altogether diff man. people change😛precap seems disastrous.cntinue soon. its not precap😛
Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome update shreya
So do u do it deliberately tht my update is bad so tht v can praise u 'no shreya ur update is gassy'
Ok I loved it. Abhay kissed Pia thinking her to b metz & my guess was right
Alina was Reina
Plz cont..
Originally posted by: ajwa.ali
it is amazing concept..😉
.i read all chapters in one go...😳i loved the story..😳
shreya lovely update
its just fabulous yar
abhayendhr and sid fighting scene just wow
and how piya resue abhayendhr awsome
really sid is doing wrong
abhayendhr and piyali kissed☺️ wow just want it that he must know that she is piyali😉
now present alo changed becz of past hope so abhiya never stay away now yar
cont soon
Originally posted by: FeistySoul
That was a good chapter..
Romance was good too...I enjoyed it personally...I am not really a fan of descriptive romance...So Reina is a high witch...But still I am confused why is she so interested in Abhay, Piya and Sid...
Originally posted by: Divya6696
Ah.. time for chapter no. 18..
Awesome update Shreya.. Loved it.. 🤗
Madam Reina meets Abhay.. Whatever she said definitely hit Abhay's nerve.. Alina.. Reina..?? I don't know.. I think she is..
Uff Abhay and Sid.. bacchhon ki tarah jhagadte hai ek girlfriend ke liye.. 🤣 Boys will be boys🥱
The friendship ended on a sour note.. sad..
Piya out to save Abhayendra..
The fight was very well written.. taaliya.. 👏
And then... uhh umm.. good re.. very romantic.. 😳 ummm matlab???😉
Thankfully Piya made him think that it was his imagination.. 😆
Ohh Poor Abhayendra.. yaha bhi prison.. yahi se uska saath start ho gaya hoga prison ke saath.. 🤣yup janam janam ka saath😆
Don't worry re.. You were really good at both fights as well as romance.. ⭐️ 😳 and about the ahem thing.. I dunno.. the update seems perfect.. kaha daalti usse..? shuruat mein madam😛
It was a really good update.. Can't wait for the next one..
Update whenever you are free.. Will be waiting.. 🤗
Thanks😳
Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
am i too late? of course i am...don't throw tamaatars at me..😆
awesome update shreya.👏..defo not 15+😆..but it's ok..the update was absolutely stunning.⭐️.is alina reina??? 😕 maybe, why should I tell you😆loved the flashbacks the most..all the parts...piya does really love abhayendra...she risked her life to rescue him from enemy territories... that kiss..oh..i bet that broke piya's heart as he kissed her thinking she was maithili.😕.. powder...as RK says😆loved how u showed piya sid bonding..it's bad to see abhay and sid falling out..abhayendra in prison now..so what will piya do now?and she's coming back to the present? can't wait for that!!
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