Really lovely Neha. You expressed your poem in a really nice way. This is what goes in everyone's mind when they feeling sad and need some space.
Really lovely Neha. You expressed your poem in a really nice way. This is what goes in everyone's mind when they feeling sad and need some space.
Omg...if you're actually feeling like this chillax...ya its totally beautiful and connectable...love your poems yaarπ€πthey are so realistic
Originally posted by: neha_dna
I dont know if it is right to share this poem here... But I felt like sharing...I had written these lines some days ago...These are the feelings when you have to sacrifice many thing for others...SPARE ME SOME TIME
I just want to run away for a while,Away from people, away from this crowd;I just want a place somewhere,A place where I can cry out loud...Where I wont need to fake a smile,Smile, that veils my every tear;Where people wont invade my life,Where I can be myself without fear...!!A place where I can think about "me",Where I need not think about others;Where I bother about no one else,And about me, no one bothers...Without thinking about the future,I want some time to live the present;Time to cherish the moments of the past,Time to enjoy ever moment being spent...I am tired of seeing people around,Now I want some moments I own;Please spare me some time,Please leave me alone...!!Do share your views!!
Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet
Thats such a lovely poem neha..!!πDuring the recent past.. that is uring june and july... that was exactly what i felt...U really spoke my heart out...Thanks for sharing dear..π
You are most welcome diπ³
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