FF: Arshi in Monstrosity Th I link to Th II in index - Page 9

Hi , I liked the concept Of ur story...I'm always a fan of dark stories...I hate shyams character...he is absolutely disgusting...i really hp tht arnav help khushi frm his clutches...hp u continue soon..thanx...

so arnav and khushi have a common past ..would love to know about it soon ..this shyam is a creap ..hate him ..well written ..waiting for the next part 

hi,when ru updating??  hp v get one soon..plsss😊

Ewww please get rid of gross shyam

(had already apologize in detail in dmc)but again sorry, arghhh i hate tht b****d how can some one go so low?? bt wht else we can expect from tht evil spirit? bt thnks tht u had not plan anyyhng more thn tht i was actually holding my breath while reading tht part .poor khushi she dont evn knw wht happn with her & wht more going to hppn with her😭 & buaji may be i hate u more thn tht shyam😡

WOW NICE, ITS AMAZING DI PLS ADD ME IN YOUR PM LIST AND ACCEPTED ME AS BUDDY PLS PLS PLS  

Originally posted by: farha5556

wow just read the four parts in one go,loved it.shyam is sick.and buaji and garima also not so good what a family.when will arnav come to know of kushi and syam,very excited for next part.continue soon.

hi.. welcome to this story yaar... you are gonna see a much sicker Shyam here on...

Originally posted by: punam2712

SHYAM IS SICK

HE DRUGGED HER IN ORDER TO RAPE HER

that is not the only thing yaar... you'll know more from the next chap...

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

so much confusion
he considers her a pros...
khushi is so gulliable
shyam is already married so his marriage to khushi is null n void
rented the place for just some months means he intend to use her in the name of husband n wife for a limited period of time without actually being tied, and he is so sick damn yukkk he is 30 for heavens sake with a daughter i guess cheee

i'm gonna make you guys hate him much much more.. 😈 mmeee...

Originally posted by: arshimohabbat

nyc update!!!!😊

i really gt irritated wit shyam n feel'g a lot very bad 4 khushi...

am really disturbed...dnt wry it shws dat ur style of wrt'g dark is really gud..

dats  y evn aftr knw'g its jus a ff it affects me a lot

cn i req u sumthg pls ...i may seem rude bt pls

i knw its a dark story bt pls at sum point add sum gud twists...

nw i rembr d twist on SR ws supr...i least xpected dat

go ahead dear...wait'g 4 d nxt update

dear dont worry... you'll get more twists and turns in this ff and more reasons to hate Arnav and most importantly Shyam too... for starters i'm gonna introduce a new monster in this ff soon... so wait up for him