beautiful , poignant and completely in character...you actually managed to convey the pain , suffering , shock , dreariness everything that a possibly terminal patient wud feel...loved the end...the fact that that virman's love was strong enuf to bring maanvi back from the clutches of death...
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faye! i read this just now and want to ask just one Q. When are u gonna continue this?!
omg! only few years to live?! oh em jee! cant wait to see how the story unfolds. do PM me wenever u updatee! brilliant start! continue sooon veryy soon 🤗
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