Swaron Frienship can turn into love FF #2 Finished - Page 40

Originally posted by: swaron9113

simran my dear i really cn't belive ki ye itna bda update likha ja skta h.
Plz pinch me yr. 😉

btw u beautyfully describe their sadness. 😭

hey romantic update hana 1st tym na koi update pdhne k bd aisa bol he ni skta.
Tmne unke wedding 9yt kafi cnsntre hoke likha tha kya.
So romantic man. 😳

dear sim ab to tm romantic updt na likh pne ka bhna bhe ni kr paoge. 😉
i totly love it.

Originally posted by: swaron9113

i'm crying 😭
crying 😭
crying 😭

*unres

Simi 🤗
Ok now firstly let me tell u I haven't helped u much to give credits...so itni tarif ki zarurat nahi hai... 😉

Coming to the update...I m so glad that u ended this FF properly...from the beginning till te end it felt so natural...and though I read the flashback thing even before u updated but I was still reading it again,as it was beautiful...
A small MU created such a great tragedy in their lives...and no doubt shanaya is the star of the FF...I really love the way u described the pain she is suffering and her longingness to have a father was so heartwrenching...and ofcourse love her bonding with her D...:)
Sharon's role as a perfect mother is always a pleasure to read...and swayam was also justified here...
And another part which I liked the most is the end where u showed the whole story as a narration by shanaya...and the ending note ki "two best friends can be lovers" aptly suited the title of the story...

All in all awesome...I m proud if u girl... 👏

PS: thanks Megha di for the last love making part...it was beautiful...and hope to see more works from u as well... 😳

Wow yaar Simi!!
Such a long update!!
Now dis was surprising...
Muahh darling...superb work...
But agar tujhe ye sare updates dene hi the to ff continue kr leti na...
But koi bat nhi...atleast tune ek proper ending to di ff ko...
N ya mjhe pata chal gaya ki Teri jaan kyu nikli hui thi...because of such a long update..!!!o
!.one thing...cheers Tanya...ur deals r superb yaar...!!😊😉
Now enough of my buck buck...
Cmng to THE UPDATE..!!😊😃
it was mind blowing...
Fabulously penned ..
Shanaya ws surely a treat...
She was soo very cute thruout da update...😊 😳
Luvd her...
N da flashback..
Shivam is such a big ___!!!!
Hate him..!! 😡 😡😡
Hamesha humare swaron k beech MU's create krta h!!!😡
But da way swaron solvd there prblms was too gud..
Swayam's anger was justified after wateva shivam said...
Shanaya was talking too matured in da frst update...n likd it...
Sharon's parents r too caring n understanding...dey didn't frc Sharon to abort da child..😊
All in all...
It was a MARVELOUS UPDATE!!!!
👏
megha , Binju di n Simi...hats off to all of u..!!
U guys hv done a gr8 job...!!!
Luvd d ending..😊


N Simi...pls don't leave yaar..

❤️👏LOVED THIS FF. . . ALL THE UPDATE WERE AWESUME. . . I ENJOYED READING EACH ND EVERY UPDATE . .🤗FR U A TIGHT HUG . . FR CONTINUENG FF ND MAKE IT END IN A HAPPY NOTE👍🏼GUD JOB. . .😃

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Wow yaar Simi!!
Such a long update!!
Now dis was surprising...
Muahh darling...superb work...
But agar tujhe ye sare updates dene hi the to ff continue kr leti na...
But koi bat nhi...atleast tune ek proper ending to di ff ko...
N ya mjhe pata chal gaya ki Teri jaan kyu nikli hui thi...because of such a long update..!!!o
!.one thing...cheers Tanya...ur deals r superb yaar...!!😊😉
Now enough of my buck buck...
Cmng to THE UPDATE..!!😊😃
it was mind blowing...
Fabulously penned ..
Shanaya ws surely a treat...
She was soo very cute thruout da update...😊 😳
Luvd her...
N da flashback..
Shivam is such a big ___!!!!
Hate him..!! 😡 😡😡
Hamesha humare swaron k beech MU's create krta h!!!😡
But da way swaron solvd there prblms was too gud..
Swayam's anger was justified after wateva shivam said...
Shanaya was talking too matured in da frst update...n likd it...
Sharon's parents r too caring n understanding...dey didn't frc Sharon to abort da child..😊
All in all...
It was a MARVELOUS UPDATE!!!!
👏
megha , Binju di n Simi...hats off to all of u..!!
U guys hv done a gr8 job...!!!
Luvd d ending..😊


N Simi...pls don't leave yaar..

Originally posted by: coolsameera

❤️👏LOVED THIS FF. . . ALL THE UPDATE WERE AWESUME. . . I ENJOYED READING EACH ND EVERY UPDATE . .🤗FR U A TIGHT HUG . . FR CONTINUENG FF ND MAKE IT END IN A HAPPY NOTE👍🏼GUD JOB. . .😃

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