Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
Look who's here...that's so cool 😆 ( i use to say that back in the day...just came to my head again)
Firstly'I must comment on how much I laugh during these
chapters? Madhu's dialogues are like a remedy to soothe away a hard day'the
idea of broken English was like of speck of geniusness (that is not a word :P
but u know what I mean) 'there were so many funny moments in the last 4
chapters despite the seriousness of Madhu's ( I actually wrote Geet here
before, I guess Maaneet are on my mind) condition that you touched on'I still
smiled and laughed throughout'
Every writer makes up words. If it wasn't for making up words, we would be living in Orwell's 1984. I happy that you are happy. I am sorry for all the extra cheese. IDK.
PTSD ( post traumatic stress disorder) is what looks like Madhu
is suffering from, where a trauma affects a person time and again'the reliving of
the trauma moments, the flashs'it takes years to recover..but you presented it
well'showed a short leap to show the recovery..made it realistic. RK's care and
affection'I awwwed
I was worried you would turn technical on me. I know bits and pieces from Intro Psych but, never took another course. Thank you.
You know when some people fall in love, they fall hard and
fast'that is the case with both Rk and madhu. RK may be denial but the boy is
in love already with his wifey'at least Madhu is rather direct with her
feelings telling him he likes him'
Story is moving really well hun'really waiting for the next
update'let's see what you have in story
Teaser: Rishibala visit the Eden ballet center.
Laikin...every Eden has its serpent. Will this Adam and Eve be able to survive its venomous fangs?
Reya <3
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