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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

hehe...i guess...even i should stop torturing people... :P

Well i just couldn't stop myself...
This is so CUTE.. I loved this Shaani Di.. This is an ah-dorable OS.. And I love the person who gave you the dare.. May they give many more such dare..
I loved the it really very much..
And thanks a lot for letting me know about it.. Do write more Di..

Originally posted by: Sree...

Well i just couldn't stop myself...
This is so CUTE.. I loved this Shaani Di.. This is an ah-dorable OS.. And I love the person who gave you the dare.. May they give many more such dare..
I loved the it really very much..
And thanks a lot for letting me know about it.. Do write more Di..

Originally posted by: manasie

A/N by Roshani:

JFYI:: Peacocks dance when the monsoon clouds cover the sky..so thats the reason swayam impatiently takes sharon.

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Awesome Rosh... Just Loved the OS... The way Swayam is trying to come up with a plan to manaofy Sharon...
Swayam takes her to watch a peacock perfectly signifies Swayam's line: Your wish is my command...
And finally they patch up after a sweet and perfect rain dance...
And aacha hua na I forced you to update itna aacha hai...

Originally posted by: mili1987

its a beautiful os..i kept smiling while reading the entire OS 

very nicely written...👏👏👏

plz continue writing 😊

& thanks manasie for forcing to write / post 😊

Originally posted by: Tanhaforever4

Wow...beautifuly penned dwn..
Luved ot to d fullest...

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Rosh I hope the person who dared does it often so that we can read some good work written by you😳 Yaar It is one supeb OS, aw it is so true that swayam loves to see sharons face light up, such a lovely pair While reading I could visualize shaan and sneha enacting the whole scene. Rosh it is one sweet OS brimming with our majnu and diva's love👍🏼 Kya mast likka hai, plz contine doing it yaar.Thanks for such a lovely OS👏❤️😳.

Originally posted by: nikita_arsha

Rosh, you wrote an OS! Wo bhi mushy-mushy wala!
I throughly enjoyed reading it. The overall concept is quite nice. Swayum and Sharon, enjoying the drizzle with a dance, wow. The idea of including a peacock adds a different charm to the tale. Do write more.

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Initially I thought swayam became obne jasoos and appointed sharon as his assistant 😆

 

I loved the peacock scene !!!! sharon enjoying looking @ peacock on the other hand swayam enjoying looking @ his Girlfriend sharon 😳

 

Finally they did a rain dance 😳

Originally posted by: mrash

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